Hello lovely teachers~ I'm writing an essay on a specific book and here is a paragraph. Any grammatical correction is welcomed^^ Thanks in advance! In Korea, just because I'm not a native speaker, it seems a matter of

hi folks, I'm a freshman student at teachers' college and want to improve my English as much as I can. here, i wrote something for you to read in order to check my writing, grammatical or spelling mistakes. I should be handing this to