EDIT - I realize now that I posted this in the wrong section, will contact a moderator and please accept my apologies. Hello, I would like opinions on editing this letter to make it less scattered. Thanks for your help! "This letter is

Hi, Danny. I expect a moderator will delete your address references. I'm not sure exactly what's allowed. Let me wait a bit and see what happens.

I'm currently editing my geophysics/applied math Ph.D. proposal and would like comments back, preferably to my campus e-mail address (Email Removed) (where that is zero and not Oh) on its potential originality and on any literature review