By Proofreading, Commas

.I have crossed out inappropriate material and underlined some problem areas. You have trouble with commas and with chatting:In taking upon my Senior Honors Project I have thrown myself over a ledge with the intention to climb back up. Through this year my drive, enthusiasm, and patience have...

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I have underlined some problem areas: The Woman Within the Doll The Baltimore Sun wrote that back in 1879, “A Doll's House” by Henrik Ibsen “shocked and offended people wherever feet” (1031). This might have caused him to become the “half-drowned” kind of man, as he refers...

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Will someone please proofread this for me thank you. Proofreading a conversation for correct use of apostrophes, quotation marks and underlining (italics) (1)”I know” he replied “but I got lost”. Someone’s directions were incorrect. (2) It’s all right, “Cara said”. Did you deliver Mrs....

While proofreading a newsletter for an organization I belong to, we had a little argument regarding the heading of an announcement: "Attention All Members". There was one person who insisted on a comma after "attention". While I couldn't argue with her basic premise, I felt that it was rather...

Ever since its birth, this dog has been with Larry. Now, the dog was malodorous, old, crippled and blind, but Larry was always with it. (The adj. stinky is too colloquial to be employed in written English.) Larry's roommate, John, wanted to get rid of the dog because he was bothered by the...

Here are some suggested edits: ( I hope they help! ) I am writing to discuss my progress in the completion of my degree. So far, I have completed all of my core courses and am nearly finished with taking the required courses for my major. As you know, my goal is to go into the field of...

I've been proofreading my friend's novel and the experience has left me very confused. I'm a native Spanish speaker, and maybe that's causing interference in my English. But anyway, if anyone could help me with the following on comma uses, it'd be great. Any elaboration on rules is...

I am in need of a proofreader. I currently manage a noncommercial website that posts various writings of mine, including movie reviews. I am a fairly competent writer; however, I have what you may call "comma syndrome." I typically use them too often. My writings always have a surplus of...