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. I have crossed out inappropriate material and underlined some problem areas. You have trouble with commas and with chatting: In taking upon my Senior Honors Project I have thrown myself over a ledge with the intention to climb back up. Through

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I have underlined some problem areas: The Woman Within the Doll The Baltimore Sun wrote that back in 1879, “A Doll's House” by Henrik Ibsen “shocked and offended people wherever was played,” and that the dramatist assured it was

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Will someone please proofread this for me thank you. Proofreading a conversation for correct use of apostrophes, quotation marks and underlining (italics) (1) ” I know ” he replied “ but I got lost ” . Someone ’ s directions were incorrect.

While proofreading a newsletter for an organization I belong to, we had a little argument regarding the heading of an announcement: "Attention All Members". There was one person who insisted on a comma after "attention". While I couldn't argue

Ever since its birth, this dog has been with Larry. Now, the dog was malodorous, old, crippled and blind, but Larry was always with it. (The adj. stinky is too colloquial to be employed in written English.) Larry's roommate, John, wanted to get

Here are some suggested edits: ( I hope they help! ) I am writing to discuss my progress in the completion of my degree. So far, I have completed all of my core courses and am nearly finished with taking the required courses for my major. As