Only these: change the semicolon to a comma after 'Dreamweaver' and change 'experiences' to ' experience '.

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Widget wrote: The sky was becoming dark as John left his house to take an evening walk. He looked up at the gray sky. Then he extended his right palm to see if was raining. He was walking up the street, with his soda, beef jerk and chips. When

My biological dad's undergoing treatment for prostate cancer. The prognostic is "encouraging", but he always sighs when he says it. ... away from colon cancer in L.A. He refuses treatment because he feels that it would be worse than

spake thusly: Indeed but what else could I do? It is not in any of my dictionaries of quotations and if I had asked my friends or colleagues the discussion would probably still be raging now. I thought I had the answer to this, but: I reached to

These elementary features need fixing: cant here- cant i i i their cirlces i i strech I Love You You must put an effort into at least proofreading your work before you expect someone else to read it. Punctuation would also be

Proper nouns should be capitalized: "(it talks about Steve Biko , a human rights leader in South Africa , who is dead and Donald Woods , a journalist, who decides to investigate about his death) " If you do not take care in typing and

I am proofreading something for my church and the phrase "...to spread the good news throughout St. Dunstan’s neighborhoods..." is in one of the printed materials. This doesn't look right to me, because the name of the church is already a