Sky is a big place - "flying solo" in such a big sky is difficult, don't feel ashamed to have failed.She's continuing his metaphor. One too many names - no, this sounds like he's added another name as author and she thinks

Can u please point out the lines that are not iambic pentameter..and tell me how to fix them!! THANK YOU SO MUCH!! I VERY APPRECIATE IT!!! a Thee is nothing to me cause what happened b I will never forget you in my heart a Now we have lost love

I really like the intro, I think you express your opinion pretty eloquently. The only problem is "I still found it an appealing way to live." It's doesn't mesh well together, because before that you are speaking about the theory

My boss loves to start her sentence with Despite. For example, despite the weather our golfers had a great time. I am incharge of proofreading the newsletter and I am tired of changing it from despite to inspite of -the weather. Thanks for

Yes, there should be an article or other determiner before 'Danish'. Even the most professional publishers sometimes fail at proofreading.

Thank you very much RayH for proofreading, but why the following sentence is in present form, why not in past form? The average score of those of GMAT who qualify for admission to qualified in the top Universities is 750. Trouper

I work for an online editing and proofreading service where we see many, many letters of motivation. Please see my profile for more information. I won't revise your whole letter here, but I will show you the changes I would make to your first

I work for an online editing and proofreading service. Please see my profile for more information. I won't revise all the paragraphs here, but I will show you the changes I would make in the first paragraph, followed by an explanation. Most

I work for an online editing and proofreading service. Please see my profile for more info. Here's how I would revise your paragraph Attending the University of *** is not my only goal, but the first in many goals I have. At the university, I

Cheerleading has provided a major aspect of my life since I was in seventh grade. Throughout middle school and high school I have participated in many extracurricular activities, both at school and in my community. As one of the activities that