By Proofreading, Spelling

I was wondering if anybody could read over my essay for admissions into FIT and help me with any spelling/grammer or any thing else that needs to be changed? its not that long of a paper.. i would greatly appretiate it. let me know, thanks in advanced.

Ever since its birth, this dog has been with Larry. Now, the dog was malodorous, old, crippled and blind, but Larry was always with it. (The adj. stinky is too colloquial to be employed in written English.) Larry's roommate, John, wanted to get rid of the dog because he was bothered by the...

Welcome Globetrotter, First, I want to encourage you to proofread your typing before submitting your posts. We have enough work to do managing real errors in English, and not purposeful shortcuts, such as: -Not capitalizing the first letter of the first word in a sentence. -Not capitalizing...

Hello everyone! My name is Jessica and I'm an English tutor at my college. Part of my job involves proofreading students' papers for spelling and grammar. A paper I read earlier today included a sentence construction that baffled me. I hope to have it resolved here. The sentence read: "If the...