By Proofreading, Verbs

Hi Changeling,You did a pretty good job with your funny recipe, but I commented on a few minor errors. Feel free to ask for further clarification if my comments don't make sense.Hope this helps!

I have underlined some problem areas: The Woman Within the Doll The Baltimore Sun wrote that back in 1879, “A Doll's House” by Henrik Ibsen “shocked and offended people wherever feet” (1031). This might have caused him to become the “half-drowned” kind of man, as he refers...

An infinitive phrase consists of an infinitive and its modifiers, objects, or complements. It can function as a noun, adjective, or adverb. (1)Proofreading your writing is a good way to ensure the absence of typing mistakes. infinitive phrase = adjective modifying way (2)To greatly...

It is the third longest river in the world. One third of the entire nation lives by this river, which is about 4,000 miles long. The scenery is spectaular there. The biggest dam, which will be finished by 2012, is to stop its flooding in many parts. The good thing about the dam is that it...

Ever since its birth, this dog has been with Larry. Now, the dog was malodorous, old, crippled and blind, but Larry was always with it. (The adj. stinky is too colloquial to be employed in written English.) Larry's roommate, John, wanted to get rid of the dog because he was bothered by the...

Hi, Is this a JUPAS essay? The content is okay. Some problems with grammar and wording. I've highlighted the parts that you need to fix. To be a business woman has long been my dream. It (Do not use pronoun here) not only helps me to develop a logical and analytical mind, but also enrich...

OK. Here's my candid advice. (I hope you are feeling strong today! ) Proofread carefully, because I think a lot of times your posts have mistakes that an advanced student like you should not be making! Here are just three that I've noticed. 1) I is always capitalized. It's never...

It still needs work-- or at least, proofreading. I have emboldened problem areas below: Health is more important than wealth. Health is the necessary condition while wealth is the sufficient condition. We need both of them , in order to live happily . Bus as you can will see below,...

Hi, Welcome to the Forum. A feminist approach to the breast cancer experience is not a completely new topic within the academic tribe <<< this word strikes a note of light humour in the Anglo-American world. However, it is important to highlight three main arguments in defense of my...

Annotate is fine. I was differentiating between editing and proofreading. Yes, there are editors at publishers, and copy editors in newspapers as job titles. But "to edit" is a verb and "to copy edit" is a specific kind of editing - and anyone can do that regardless of job title or place of...