I have 5 scholarship essays due by the end of the month and I am horrible with proper grammar so even if I check it myself I don't know if it would even matter could someone read them and help me out? I'll post one at a time unless you

Hi, OK. Please clarify what you are trying to do here. Is there some specific way that you are supposed to rewrite these? Are you supposed to be practicing some particular grammar point? Sentences can be rewritten in lots of ways. Can you add

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Hi There are a lot of questions here. Surely you can at least try some of them? Just make your best attempt. Clive

Hi, Welcome to the Forum. Please show us your answers first, and we'll check them for you. Best wishes, Clive

a) “In this design model some imperfections in the metal castings.” Rewrite:__ __ __ b) “Before outsourcing the design should have a thorough idea regarding the company which is making the product.” Rewrite:__ __ __ c) “Because the internet

a) “In this design model some imperfections in the metal castings.” Rewrite:__ __ __ b) “Before outsourcing the design should have a thorough idea regarding the company which is making the product.” Rewrite:__ __ __ c) “Because the internet

I will be really really appreciated if you guys can help out..point out some grammar mistakes + make some suggestions the following is my work: THANKS A LOT.. Internet: The Intangible World In the 21 st century, the term “internet”

. You can say this with the same meaning and proper grammar: The campaign will be held between 22 December and 25 December 2008. Why do we use "will be " instead of "is held"?- Because December 2008 is in the future.