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<rss version="2.0" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:slash="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/slash/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/"><channel><title>Search results for 'tag:Punctuation tag:Apostrophes' matching tags 'Punctuation' and 'Apostrophes'</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/search/pro.htm?q=tag%3aPunctuation+tag%3aApostrophes&amp;tag=Punctuation,Apostrophes&amp;orTags=0</link><description>Search results for 'tag:Punctuation tag:Apostrophes' matching tags 'Punctuation' and 'Apostrophes'</description><dc:language>en-US</dc:language><generator>CSMOD (Build: 3191.21962)</generator><item><title>Re: SOS - CAN ANYONE KINDLY CHECK THIS OUT PLZ!</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/AnyoneKindlyCheck/gnhgp/post.htm#567135</link><pubDate>Wed, 17 Sep 2008 12:16:24 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:567135</guid><dc:creator>Eimai_Anglos</dc:creator><description>One sentence does not begin with a capital letter (but ought to).&lt;div&gt;One word beginning with &amp;quot;s&amp;quot; and one with &amp;quot;n&amp;quot; is misspelt.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;An apostrophe is missing.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;A quotation mark is opened but not closed.&lt;/div&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: dash vs. three dots</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/DashVsThreeDots/gcrzg/post.htm#511043</link><pubDate>Thu, 08 May 2008 01:47:21 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:511043</guid><dc:creator>Grammar Geek</dc:creator><description>&lt;p&gt;An ellipsis is properly used only to indicate that text has been omitted. &amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;There are people writing these days who seem to know no other form of punctuation besides the ellipses, and, although they don&amp;#39;t seem committed to always using exatly three dots, do seem dedicate to using in place of all other marks except the apostrophe and the question mark.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;If you are writing dialogue, you can use it to indicate a trailing away of the voice, as though the speaker started to say something, but then changed his mind.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;So your first sentence uses the ... incorrectly.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Your second sentence makes what I consider an appropriate use of the dash.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Your third sentence should simply not use the elllipsis there at all. Put a period. &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Your fourth sentence should use a period where you have a dash.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Many people consider the dash to be rather an informal punctuation mark as well. I actually use them regularly in my business writing -- but regularly is not the same as excessively.&lt;/p&gt;</description></item><item><title>Punctuating speech</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PunctuatingSpeech/grkkk/post.htm</link><pubDate>Wed, 23 Apr 2008 08:44:39 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:504196</guid><dc:creator>pjrydo</dc:creator><description>&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;How should on punctuate around speech marks, apostrophes and parentheses? Should the punctuation come inside or outside of the quotation?&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&amp;quot;Should it come inside or outside?&amp;quot;?&lt;/p&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: Help with Punctuation - Part 3</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpWithPunctuationPart3/zmglv/post.htm#478486</link><pubDate>Mon, 18 Feb 2008 16:30:31 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:478486</guid><dc:creator>Yoong Liat</dc:creator><description>&lt;p&gt;&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/englishforums/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt; &lt;strong&gt;Anil17&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt; 
&lt;h3&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;span&gt;Hi can someone please approve my answer to the following punctuation exercise.&amp;nbsp; &lt;font color="#ff00"&gt;My punctuation marks answers are highlighted in red font.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h3&gt;
&lt;h3&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;Re-write the following, putting in capital letters, punctuation marks, apostrophes and quotation marks:&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h3&gt;
&lt;h1&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;font color="#ff00"&gt;âWhat a strange trunk!&amp;quot; exclaimed John.&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;âWhose is it?â&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h1&gt;
&lt;h1&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;font color="#ff00"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;Itâs Captain Hardyâs,â replied his Uncle Dick. âIâll tell you about it if youâve time to listen.â&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h1&gt;
&lt;h1&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;font color="#ff00"&gt;âIâm very sorry,&lt;font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR:#00;"&gt;(.)&lt;/font&gt; I &lt;font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR:#00;"&gt;can&amp;#39;t&lt;/font&gt; stay just now&lt;font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR:#00;"&gt;,&lt;/font&gt; for I must be back at school by two oâclock.&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;May I call again later in the afternoon?â&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h1&gt;
&lt;h1&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR:#00;" color="#ff00"&gt;&lt;font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR:#00;"&gt;A&lt;/font&gt; full stop after &amp;#39;sorry&amp;#39;, as indicated in brackets. An apostrophe between &lt;em&gt;n&lt;/em&gt; and &lt;em&gt;t&lt;/em&gt; in can&amp;#39;t. A comma after &amp;#39;now&amp;#39;.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h1&gt;
&lt;h1&gt;&lt;font style="BACKGROUND-COLOR:#00;"&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/h1&gt;
&lt;h1&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/h1&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;</description></item><item><title>Help with Punctuation - Part 3</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpWithPunctuationPart3/zmgkl/post.htm</link><pubDate>Mon, 18 Feb 2008 16:11:39 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:478476</guid><dc:creator>Anil17</dc:creator><description>&lt;h3&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;span&gt;Hi can someone please approve my answer to the following punctuation exercise.&amp;nbsp; &lt;font color="#ff00"&gt;My punctuation marks answers are highlighted in red font.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h3&gt;
&lt;h3&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/h3&gt;
&lt;h3&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;Re-write the following, putting in capital letters, punctuation marks, apostrophes and quotation marks:&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h3&gt;
&lt;h1&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h1&gt;
&lt;h1&gt;&lt;span&gt;what a strange trunk exclaimed john whose is it its captain hardys replied his uncle dick I ll tell you about it if youve time to listen im very sorry I cant stay just now for I must be back at school by two o clock may I call again later in the afternoon&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h1&gt;
&lt;h1&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h1&gt;
&lt;h1&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h1&gt;
&lt;h1&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;font color="#ff00"&gt;âWhat a strange trunk!&amp;quot; exclaimed John.&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;âWhose is it?â&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h1&gt;
&lt;h1&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;font color="#ff00"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;Itâs Captain Hardyâs,â replied his Uncle Dick. âIâll tell you about it if youâve time to listen.â&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h1&gt;
&lt;h1&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;font color="#ff00"&gt;âIâm very sorry, I cant stay just now for I must be back at school by two oâclock.&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;May I call again later in the afternoon?â&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/h1&gt;
&lt;h1&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/h1&gt;
&lt;h1&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/h1&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: 1)How can we call the package that helicopters throw on the land when t</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CallPackageHelicoptersThrowLand/zkwqj/post.htm#469328</link><pubDate>Sun, 27 Jan 2008 08:57:20 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:469328</guid><dc:creator>Belly</dc:creator><description>&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;table width="85%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="txt4"&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/default/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;Mister Micawber wrote:&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="quoteTable"&gt;&lt;table width="100%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td width="100%" valign="top" class="txt4"&gt;&lt;BR&gt;
&lt;DIV class=KonaBody&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(245,245,255)"&gt;1) &lt;B&gt;What&lt;/B&gt; can we call the package that helicopters throw on the land when there is a catastrophe happens? &lt;I&gt;-- (Emergency) Aid packages?&amp;nbsp; Air drops?&lt;/I&gt;&lt;BR&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(245,245,255)"&gt;2) About punctuation, should we punctuate before or after the : She told me&lt;B&gt;,&lt;/B&gt;" I want to go out&lt;STRONG&gt;&lt;FONT color=red&gt;.&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/STRONG&gt; &lt;FONT color=red&gt;"&lt;/FONT&gt; or She told me&lt;B&gt;,&lt;/B&gt;" I want to go out&lt;FONT color=red&gt;".&lt;/FONT&gt;) -- &lt;I&gt;Most American punctuation guides place the full stop (or period) invariably inside the quotation mark, while British guides place it inside or out depending on the part to which it is applicable.&amp;nbsp; I think.&amp;nbsp; Or is it the other way around?&amp;nbsp; Anyway, there is contention, sometimes heated&lt;/I&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(245,245,255)"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=darkgreen&gt;" &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;= quotation mark&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(245,245,255)"&gt;&lt;FONT color=darkgreen&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=darkgreen&gt;,&lt;/FONT&gt; = comma&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(245,245,255)"&gt;&lt;FONT color=darkgreen&gt;' &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;= apostrophe&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(245,245,255)"&gt;&lt;FONT color=darkgreen&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=darkgreen&gt;/ &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;= slash or backslash&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(245,245,255)"&gt;&lt;FONT color=darkgreen&gt;)&lt;/FONT&gt; = parenthesis (AmE) or bracket (BrE)&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(245,245,255)"&gt;&lt;FONT color=darkgreen&gt;#&lt;/FONT&gt; = number sign, pound sign, octothorpe&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(245,245,255)"&gt;&lt;FONT color=darkgreen&gt;? &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;= question mark, interrogation point&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(245,245,255)"&gt;&lt;FONT color=darkgreen&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=darkgreen&gt;! &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;= exclamation mark/point&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(245,245,255)"&gt;&lt;I&gt;There are probably other names as well.&lt;/I&gt;&lt;BR&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(245,245,255)"&gt;&lt;BR&gt;Do I need two )) here or just one? --&lt;I&gt; Two, but it would be better to rearrange the sentence to avoid the duplication; it is unattractive.&lt;/I&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: rgb(245,245,255)"&gt;&lt;BR&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;&lt;/DIV&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;BR&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;/P&gt;

&lt;P&gt;Hi,&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Actually, in sentence one, the thing I want to ask is:&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;If you can imagine, when inundations come to one province, people of other provinces donates food, drink, money etc (I'm still confused when can we use plural or singular for food and drink here).... and they pack them all in packages which is then sent to the poor province... What can we call that?&lt;/P&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: 1)How can we call the package that helicopters throw on the land when t</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CallPackageHelicoptersThrowLand/zkwnr/post.htm#469268</link><pubDate>Sun, 27 Jan 2008 05:32:38 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:469268</guid><dc:creator>Mister Micawber</dc:creator><description>&lt;br&gt;&lt;div class="KonaBody"&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font style="background-color: rgb(245, 245, 255);"&gt;1) &lt;b&gt;What&lt;/b&gt; can we call the package that helicopters throw on the land when there is a catastrophe happens? &lt;i&gt;-- (Emergency) Aid packages?&amp;nbsp; Air drops?&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font style="background-color: rgb(245, 245, 255);"&gt;2) About punctuation, should we punctuate before or after the : She told me&lt;b&gt;,&lt;/b&gt;" I want to go out&lt;strong&gt;&lt;font color="red"&gt;.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/strong&gt; &lt;font color="red"&gt;"&lt;/font&gt; or She told me&lt;b&gt;,&lt;/b&gt;" I want to go out&lt;font color="red"&gt;".&lt;/font&gt;) -- &lt;i&gt;Most American punctuation guides place the full stop (or period) invariably inside the quotation mark, while British guides place it inside or out depending on the part to which it is applicable.&amp;nbsp; I think.&amp;nbsp; Or is it the other way around?&amp;nbsp; Anyway, there is contention, sometimes heated&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;font style="background-color: rgb(245, 245, 255);"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;font color="darkgreen"&gt;" &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt;= quotation mark&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;font style="background-color: rgb(245, 245, 255);"&gt;&lt;font color="darkgreen"&gt; &lt;/font&gt;&lt;font color="darkgreen"&gt;,&lt;/font&gt; = comma&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;font style="background-color: rgb(245, 245, 255);"&gt; &lt;font color="darkgreen"&gt;' &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt;= apostrophe&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;font style="background-color: rgb(245, 245, 255);"&gt;&lt;font color="darkgreen"&gt; &lt;/font&gt;&lt;font color="darkgreen"&gt;/ &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt;= slash or backslash&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;font style="background-color: rgb(245, 245, 255);"&gt;&lt;font color="darkgreen"&gt;)&lt;/font&gt; = parenthesis (AmE) or bracket (BrE)&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;font style="background-color: rgb(245, 245, 255);"&gt; &lt;font color="darkgreen"&gt;#&lt;/font&gt; = number sign, pound sign, octothorpe&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;font style="background-color: rgb(245, 245, 255);"&gt;&lt;font color="darkgreen"&gt;? &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt;= question mark, interrogation point&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;font style="background-color: rgb(245, 245, 255);"&gt;&lt;font color="darkgreen"&gt; &lt;/font&gt;&lt;font color="darkgreen"&gt;! &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt;= exclamation mark/point&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;font style="background-color: rgb(245, 245, 255);"&gt;&lt;i&gt;There are probably other names as well.&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;font style="background-color: rgb(245, 245, 255);"&gt;&lt;br&gt;Do I need two )) here or just one? --&lt;i&gt; Two, but it would be better to rearrange the sentence to avoid the duplication; it is unattractive.&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;font style="background-color: rgb(245, 245, 255);"&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

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&lt;br&gt;</description></item><item><title>How to punctuate poem verses</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/HowToPunctuatePoemVerses/zjpnr/post.htm</link><pubDate>Sun, 20 Jan 2008 00:08:22 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:466378</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><description>&lt;P&gt;Hi there&lt;/P&gt;

&lt;P&gt;Not to sure if I have psoted this question already.&amp;nbsp; My PC rebootted as I submitted my question.&amp;nbsp; Here it is again:&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;STRONG&gt;Re-write the following as four lines of verse, putting in capitals, quotation marks and punctuation marks:&lt;/STRONG&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;STRONG&gt;&lt;EM&gt;come back come back he cried in grief across the stormy water and i ll forgive your highland chief my daughter o my daughter&lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/STRONG&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;STRONG&gt;"Come back, come back," he cried in grief,&lt;/STRONG&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;STRONG&gt;Across the stormy water,&lt;/STRONG&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;STRONG&gt;"And I'll forgive your Highland Chief"&lt;/STRONG&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;STRONG&gt;"My daughter o my daughter." (&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;does daughter need to start with a capital, and does "o" need an apostrophe&lt;/FONT&gt;)&lt;/STRONG&gt;&lt;/P&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: Punctuation: Suspension points ...</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PunctuationSuspensionPoints/zvlpb/post.htm#440692</link><pubDate>Fri, 09 Nov 2007 20:12:29 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:440692</guid><dc:creator>Grammar Geek</dc:creator><description>&lt;P&gt;... is an ellipsis, used to show that text has been omitted. Despite popular usage in which is it used as a subsitute for every known type of punctuation except the apostrophe, use it only to show that words are missing.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I have never heard&amp;nbsp; "He likes shadows and fresh water" before -- it's not an English idiom that I'm aware of, and I wouldn't be able to figure it out.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;You have the skills TO DO the job, or you have the skills FOR the job, but not the skills TO the job.&lt;/P&gt;</description></item><item><title>Descriptive/Informative Essay</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/DescriptiveInformativeEssay/zbnhq/post.htm</link><pubDate>Tue, 02 Oct 2007 22:17:20 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:426410</guid><dc:creator>CodyKJV</dc:creator><description>My assignment is to type a Descriptive/Informative Essay.&amp;nbsp; I am graded 50% on content, 40% on grammar and mechanics, and 10% on style.&amp;nbsp; Could anyone read my essay and suggest some corrections?&amp;nbsp; Please bold or make corrections visible.&amp;nbsp; The help will be greatly appreciated.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;Here are grammatical errors that I do not need to make because everyone counts off 5 points.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;b&gt;-Sentence fragment, comma splices, run on or fused sentences, verbal errors, tense shifts, agreement, diction, punctuation, spelling, possesive case, comma error, misuse of apostrophe and period error.&lt;/b&gt;&lt;br&gt;

&lt;p align="center"&gt;The Ultimate Fear&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;
For me there is no question in my mind of what I fear the most.&amp;nbsp; One day
He will be the most feared being by all that do not fear Him now. When He comes,
the lost will stand before Him and tremble like leaves in the wind.&amp;nbsp; He
will come like a thief in the night, when no one is expecting.&amp;nbsp; I fear Him
the most because I know He holds great power.&amp;nbsp; What I fear is God
Almighty, the creator of the universe and the Lord of my life.&lt;u&gt;&lt;br&gt;
&lt;/u&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; As a
Christian, I fear God because He is my heavenly father.&amp;nbsp; To think about
God sends chills down my back.&amp;nbsp; He is the creator of the universe and also
the creator of Heaven and Hell.&amp;nbsp; God has always existed. He is Alpha and
Omega, the beginning and the end.&amp;nbsp; Often people cannot comprehend that God
has always existed.&amp;nbsp; This is because people
live in a world of time.&amp;nbsp; Explaining God to an unbeliever is like
explaining a math equation to a dead person.&amp;nbsp; The only way a person can
come to believe and fear God is by the Holy Spirit.&amp;nbsp; Fearing God is the
beginning of knowledge and truth.&lt;br&gt;
&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Like my
earthly father, God chastises me when I sin against Him.&amp;nbsp; I remember when
I was a little child, I broke my fatherâs garage window.&amp;nbsp; My father came
outside &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p align="right"&gt;Watters
2&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;to discover the broken glass.&amp;nbsp;
He found me and began to yell, letting me know that I had done wrong.&amp;nbsp; I
ran from him, but he finally caught me and gave me the punishment I
deserved.&amp;nbsp; My father punished me because of his love for me.&amp;nbsp; This
also applies with my heavenly father.&amp;nbsp; When I sin against God, conviction hits
me like a truck.&amp;nbsp; I then know that I have
done wrong.&amp;nbsp; God will punish me for my sins because of His unexplainable
love.&amp;nbsp; Godâs love is far greater than even a motherâs love for her only
child.&amp;nbsp; I know that I am the apple of Godâs eye, but I also know that His reprimanding
hand will keep me where I need to be in life.&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; I can run as fast as
the speed of light and hide like a word in a crossword puzzle.&amp;nbsp; However, God will find me and give me the
punishment for my sins.&amp;nbsp; He has His eye on me like a hawk.&lt;br&gt;
&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; The fear
that unbelievers will face will be tremendous.&amp;nbsp; The lost will stand before
the King of Kings and the Lord of Lords.&amp;nbsp; Unbelievers will be on their
knees like beggars begging for money.&amp;nbsp; When God came before He showed
love, but the next time He comes, He will pour His wrath on all that denied His
Holy name.&amp;nbsp; God is love, but because He is love, He is also just.&amp;nbsp; A
just God cannot overlook sin.&amp;nbsp; Those who do not believe will not be
covered by the blood of Jesus Christ.&amp;nbsp; The lost will stand before a Holy
and Righteous God and be naked in sin before His eyes.&amp;nbsp; God will say to
the lost, "I never knew ye," and the lost will be cast down in a pit
of fire.&amp;nbsp; The pit of fire will be hotter than a burning furnace.&amp;nbsp; The
pain will last forever and ever.&amp;nbsp; There is no water in Hell to cool the
tongue. To be in Hell is to be absent from all love.&amp;nbsp; This is why people
should fear God now.&amp;nbsp; To escape His wrath
is to fear Him now.&lt;br&gt;
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&lt;p&gt;Ultimately, I fear
the wrath of God.&amp;nbsp; I know that this fear
will save me from an everlasting Hell when I die.&amp;nbsp; Like a shepherd, God
leads and guides me through my life.&amp;nbsp; When I disobey His Word, He uses His
staff to pull me back where I need to be in life.&amp;nbsp; The fear of God is
unappreciated like an underrated film that does not show in movie
theaters.&amp;nbsp; Jesus is the only way, the only truth, and the only light, and
no one will enter the gates of Heaven without the fear of God Almighty.&lt;/p&gt;</description></item></channel></rss>