By Punctuation, Metaphors

Hi, Where you have put semi-colons, I'd usually use commas. I have also suggested some other changes to your punctuation. My general advice is not to get into the habit of using semi-colons and colons. They can often make tyour meaning more obscure rather than more clear. You seem to have a...

Anonymous wrote: Can you guyss tell me what can I improve on, and how to make it longer. It will be great to have some other comments too. Thank you very much Teacher's Criteriaescriptive Writing - Figurative Language: such as simile, metaphor, alliteration, allusion -Sensory qualities:...

Can you guyss tell me what can I improve on, and how to make it longer. It will be great to have some other comments too. Thank you very much Teacher's Criteriaescriptive Writing - Figurative Language: such as simile, metaphor, alliteration, allusion -Sensory qualities:...

Hi, Please read very carefully as I've made a small number of small alterations. You're welcome. Clive v COMMENTARY ( of 'Children' by 'Henry Wadsworth Longfellow') This poem starts with a call of welcome to children, for the poet sees them as our future and hope. They are the...

Dear Clive, It’s so nice of you for always being there to help me. I am very thankful to you. Please bear with me if I don’t thank you adequately. Because I think what you have done for me so far deserves a colourful bunch of thanks. I really appreciate your help, and respect your kind...

Learning English by listening to songs is not always the best path. Like you said, there are often lines or words that are omitted. A lot of lyrics are written to fit the music. This causes many lines in certain songs to be grammatically poor. If you randomly listen to any song out there, you may...

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