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hi! i need to write essay about social justice issue, and my topic is "marriage". can somebody help me check my grammarm verb tense and proofread it for me. thanks in advance i really appreciate it.. Normal 0 false false false ...

Bilsonx wrote: Ok well I fixed most of the basic stuff you said. Could you maybe tell me how i could fix the others? My first Wreck in my new car My friend Brandon and I was . After this close call I have learned to drive super careful in the snow and slow down when bigger size...

"The Change of the Characteristics in the passage from The Hours " The passage from the novel The Hours by Michael Cunningham is intriguing. The passage illustrates the difference between the character's characteristics in different time settings: past and present. This difference is...

I don't think you read the last correction at all. I am only going to highlight errors. It's up to you to fix them. Our work here is done. You have changed things that you should not have. You now have tenses all over - past in one place, present in another. You seem to have removed spaces...

Analyse the formality of the article in SCMP It is indispensable for us to use an appropriate style when writing. There is no doubt that formal style should be practiced for newspaper as objectivity and impersonality are important. South China Morning Post is one of the most prevalent...

Love_suicide wrote: hi can anyone correct my writing and if you could add some idea to the paragraph to make it look better... B urglary One day after school . Please use a smaller size of type. #1 A full stop is followed by one space. The next sentence begins with...

1. Explain the functional and structural properties of "similarly" and state another connector functioning like "similarly" by using it in two sentences. 2. Write three example sentences in which subjunctive verbs are used as noun complements. 3. Rewite the reduced clauses below to correct...

1. Explain the functional and structural properties of "similarly" and state another connector functioning like "similarly" by using it in two sentences. 2. Write three example sentences in which subjunctive verbs are used as noun complements. 3. Rewite the reduced clauses below to correct...

Your essay is very long, so I'm going to start with the first paragraph only: Recently, issues of how the Internet has made an impact on interpersonal relationships , have given cause for alarm. With the induction of the Internet , into people’s homes , the Internet is becoming the way people...

Well, it was wrong in the first case because it was two sentences together with no punctuation. It's wrong now because you have what's called a comma splice, in which you use a comma when you need either a perior or semi-colon, or a conjunction, which is why I rewrote it. Your opening paragraph...