In Punctuation^x, Plurals^x, Tenses^x

Oh dear, I hate to disagree with other members, but some of Mr. Proofread correction's are not correct. Dglene, please don't post quite so many in one post, okay? It's a little tiring to go through them all. Remember to use end punctuation, and note that many of these are quite repetitive....

For the rest, Kela, I'm going to give you hints (in blue), so that you can try to improve things yourself. (A repeated problem is your use of indefinite pronouns--for instance, writing 'he' when the reader doesn't know which person 'he' refers to . Rommel described himself as a boy who...