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Some suggestions included below - very best of luck with your application. Dear Sir or Madam, ( Is - most distinguished Ladys and Gentlemen or To Whom it May Concern... - better? No! But if you have a name, use the person’s name) I am writing to apply as an exchange student for the Sculpture...

dear lil´ruby rose, thank you for your reply and the correction of my letter of motivation! I have tried to write clear but I am not certain if it works. I have got my doubts about it... So I may ask you for another review to make sure whats behind all this. (or forgotten) It would be...

make the most of the time I will spend there. I hope you will consider my application and can regard me as a well motivated candidate to this program. Yours faithfully,