By Regards, Personal statements

Hi everybody,I'm working on my personal stetement for postgraduate programme (Media and Communications Studies). I've managed to put there everything I wanted, but I'm not sure whether it's uderstandable, gramatically correct, atc.Any advice appreciated!Thankx.T. Dear Sir...

.I have underlined some problems. It is also a bit wordy, and I have struck out phrases which should be eliminated (you will probably have to revise the sentences to accommodate these omissions): Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing this personal statement because of the need of external funding...

Dear Sir / Madam I am writing this personal statement because of the need of external funding in order to improve my intellectual capacity by mastering on European Studies and create higher utility for Turkish Cypriot society by making new linkages, learning new languages and being aware of...

My strong desire to take a Business-related course in Great Britain began three years ago when I realized I was attracted to this dynamic field of logic and consistent patterns. Having a broad interest in many subject areas, I now seek to become as versatile as I can. Therefore, choosing a...

Hello, I wrote this letter for international studies..I'd be very thankful if somebody could correct grammar and style in this letter. Thank you in advance :)My strong desire to take a Business related course in Great Britain dates back about three years ago, realizing that this dynamic field...

Hi folks, Hereunder is my personal statement for application to an university. Cud anyone do me a favor to help me check and revise? Your comment will be highly appreciated. Thanks a lot in advance! Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing this letter to apply for the Master of Business...

Hello, everybody! I am applying to universities this year, and I have to write an impressive personal statement or motivation letter but I am not sure if I am doing OK. Could you please revise my essay and recommend some amendments? I would greatly appreciate your help! Regards, Ina Here it...

this is my personal statement. i 'm not sure about it especially the 5th paragragh. thank you very much for any help!!! As a senior majored in business Administration, I have been exposed systematically to concepts and theories of every aspect of management such as logistic, marketing and...

Dear all, i have recently applied to university, and as required, i was supposed to write a personal statement of motivation. the requirements are : ------------ The motivation letter has to include four items: What is the international background you have, regarding nationality, place of...

Dear Mr. Mountain Hiker Thank you for your help again and ,may I ask some questions regarding the letter, please? Do the "motivation letter" and "personal statement" refer the same thing? When writing personal statement, should I write it in a letter form? How many words should a motivation...