Please help me to check the sentences, thanks! Last Tuesday was sunny. Peter and his friend, John walked home from school. On their way, there was a motorcyclist riding past a deserted road. A lady, who was a middle age, carrried a brown

Hi, I would like to know whether the following sentences are correct (in terms of the usage of the underlined words ) and whether the words in the bracket can be replaced by the underlined word : 01.The income tax official carried a

I would like to know whether the following sentences are correct (in terms of the usage of the underlined words ) and whether the words in the bracket can be replaced by the underlined word : 01.The income tax official carried a permit to search

hi i want ask you for check my gramma and any mistakes in my statement. thank you. Edmund Lockard said: "Every Contact Leaves a Trace.” My life taugh me how right he was. My father died in a car accident, when I was tree. Offender

I did this on my own, but no answers were provided. I found these from various websites. Can you guys verify these for me? I mainly have problems with identifiing comma splice, run-on sentences, and some tenses identifications. I did them and I

thanks dimsumexpress, what is the fault with each of these passages? a) With powerful wings , he flew like a lion to the rescue of his friend. This sentence contains a misconceived metahoric construction, "like a lion.." but

These sentences seem to have something in common. That is, they are of either metaphoric and simili construction that were incorrectly phrased, or worded. A lot of polishing is needed. what is the fault with each of these passages? a)

Can be used to describe anything at all, when you are too lazy to think of a word you can insert 'jaunce' here. You may be referring to http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=jaunce , which I just found, and which lists the

My corrections are in <pointy brackets> on the end of the sentences. If the sentence was correct, I said nothing. 1) I saw him on the day before yesterday. <delete "on"> 2) He made a lot of friends (when) during he was at

Each of these sentences contains one mistake.I've corrected but I still not sure whether these corrections I did were right.Can someone check for me?The word in the brackets is my correction. Would be grateful.Thanks. 1) I saw him on the