Isn't this fun? I have underlined the remaining problem areas (note that you have created a couple of new problems with your adjustments... and maybe I missed one before): I don’t know what to do. My girlfriend just left me, I don’t have enough

Thank you teacher I don’t know what to do. My girlfriend just left me, I don’t have enough money, but I have a lot of debts to pay, and I don’t have a job. Actually I have, but since my employer did not pay my salary for three months ago,

Much better! I've underlined some problem areas again: I don’t know what to do. My girlfriend just left me, I don’t having money, but I have a lot of debts to pay, and I don’t have a job. Actually I have, but since my employer did not pay my

Thanks for your prompt reply. I really appreciate it. I'm not really good in English especially in grammar, but i try my best to make a correction for the problems as stated. I don’t know what to do. My girlfriend just left me, I don’t having

I've underlined some problem areas: I’m jobless. I don’t know what else to do. My girlfriend just left me, I don’t have money but I have lot of debts to pay, and I don’t have job . Actually I have but since my employer didn’t pay my salary

Hi all, I’m trying to write something. If you think I’m good, maybe I should consider myself to write a novel. I’m sure there are a lot of grammatical errors. So hopefully nice guys here can help me to improve it. Thanks in advance.

Hi, Put your personal info at the top (eg name/address/phone/email) You need an Objective section - what kind of job do you want? SUMMARY yes, bullets (black dots) are great I'm going to comment and also make some suggested wording

Hi Clive, Thanks a lot for your realy precious feedback and time. As you mentioned I made some major changes to the resume.I'd like to post it again. please let me know how you think about this one SUMMARY A highly

Hi, Yes, I agree that my summary is too long, Shall I eliminate it and instead write a cover letter? I would just make it shorter and in point form. Think of it as a chance to highlight your strengths. Is this summary suitable to be a cover

I was recently requested by a recruitment agency to provide them with my CV, so they will be able to find me a job. I have prepared this CV for that propose. I highly appreciate if you review my CV and tell me about every kind of errors that