Hello: The letter is too long to revise word-by-word here. You make a lot of small errors, most of which you can correct by going over an English grammar and usage book. To get you started I'll give you specific suggestions on the second

Quangtrungvtv wrote: Marius Hancu wrote: APPLICATION LETTER RESPECTFULLY ADDRESSED TO : VXK COMPANY. I knew your company hired the electronics and telecommunications engineer . I have to found about operation of your company, I

corrections in bold and other areas you need to look at are highlighted for you. Watch out for the length of your sentences. You tend to run on and try to connect too many ideas and are not using enough commas. Dear Sir or Madam (US uses colon,

Hi, I reckon it’s a good letter but it sounds like you’re offering your general/special competencies to an employer without researching their business or the job. Maybe the layout and salutation isn’t so important but I’d find a MS Word template,