I won't do the whole letter, but I will do an edit of the first paragraph (including the salutation). Here's my edit. To The Selection Committee: I recently graduated from the Universidad Autonoma de Yucatan with a ___degree in __ __. The

Hi, Sorry, I didn't realize this was to be taken as an Email. I don't really know anything about email etiquette. I guess it's okay to omit words and take other shortcuts. "Sarah," would not be an acceptable salutation for a

Quangtrungvtv wrote: Marius Hancu wrote: APPLICATION LETTER RESPECTFULLY ADDRESSED TO : VXK COMPANY. I knew your company hired the electronics and telecommunications engineer . I have to found about operation of your company, I

corrections in bold and other areas you need to look at are highlighted for you. Watch out for the length of your sentences. You tend to run on and try to connect too many ideas and are not using enough commas. Dear Sir or Madam (US uses colon,

Dear Moderators, I've written this letter of motivation for the master programme. Could you, please, review it. It's a part of an application form, so I didn't use salutation. Thanks a lot ___________________ Letter of

As I said in my earlier reply, politeness doesn't cost ... to modern idiom of everybody using first names for everything! When did this start in Britain? In some older books I noticed that people address each other (even friends) by their last

Guest wrote: How do i write the best cover letter job to a college or university department enquiring about a teaching position within their art department? I don not need student cover letter help, I need business cover letter for my career