Hello: I work for an online proofreading and editing service. Please see my profile for more info. I won't revise your whole essay here, but I will show you the changes I would make in your first two paragraphs (which I have combined into

I was supposed to write an apology letter for delay in payment of membership fee to a business group, but i did not know where to put the membership no. My teacher said that the membership no should be written in place of reference no. like this.

It looks fine. For the salutation I would say Dear Sir or Madam: Typically it is one person receiving your response, so singular is better. If you know who it is, use their name.

I was supposed to write an apology letter for delay in payment of membership fee to a business group, but i did not know where to put the membership no. My teacher said that the membership no should be written in place of reference no. like this

. Hello lapislazuli, and welcome to English Forums. 1. Do I use a dot after Mr in the salutation?-- No dot is becoming the accepted form, but both are OK. 2. Do I use a comma or a colon or nothing at all after the salutation? -- Most use a colon

Hello, My questions concern writing official/business letters. 1. Do I use a dot after Mr in the salutation? 2. Do I use a comma or a colon or nothing at all after the salutation? 3. Do I start my first sentence with a capital letter? My head of

I work for an online editing and proofreading service. Please see my profile for more info. I won't go through the whole letter here, but I will show you how I would revise the first paragraph. Dear __ __: Although I am grateful for the

I almost forgot: get rid of "Dear Sir or Madam"! The salutation should be "To The Selection Committee:" or to one person (check the program's website or call their office to find out whose name you should use).

. i month leave Please expand on this with a salutation, a letter body of at least one complete sentence, an expression of gratitude and a closing. .

Can you take a look see if I have any errors are if I need to change or add anything to this paper. Business Memo (Content, Purpose, Recipients) Business memos are in intricate part of a company corresponding internally to inform or make