Welcome to EnglishForums. Here are my suggestions about how to improve the letter of recommendation. Underlined words are where I made spelling or grammatical changes to your language. Strikethroughs are where I deleted your original language.

That's how it works for my ear. Others may find one of the other variations acceptable as well. But you can see how that applies to your degree situation. A BSc and an MSc degree. Or other variations entirely: I have both

Sentence 1 is good either way, but you should be consistent in either using numbers or in spelling them out. Normally, numbers ten or below are spelled out and numbers above ten are left in numeric form (11, 21, 33, etc). Sentence 2, crossed is

"Hi!" is a sentence by itself. Dear Jane, Hi! I bet you thought you'd never hear from me again. I've been very busy since the move but I hate to lose touch with my friends, so I thought I'd write you. The correct way to

Well, I think/assume that I got the basics of how to write good papers down because my papers get pretty okay grades. However, I think my punctuation and grammer somewhat hinders/limits my ability to write a better paper or to get a better grade.

Grammar books are simply not designed for writing papers. You are on the wrong track. If you do not like the Chicago manual, my lesser-known A Manual for Writers of Term Papers, Theses, and Dissertations (Kate Turabian) has plenty about

We usually do APA or chicago in Canada. Are you saying I should just read an APA/Chicago manual on the net? Or is there a good book about it? Because I read an APA manual (well, a compact version of it), and it doesn't deal with comma rules

What is the best grammar book for a university student in Canada? I would like one that covers a wide range of examples and usages. A strong focus on punctuation would be very helpful since most of the time I have a question about the

if i haven't went to school i would have seen a movie No. The sentence is not grammatically correct. The capitalization and punctuation are also incorrect. Here's what you need. Note the capitalization and the punctuation as well as the

As a high school English teacher I would use a semi-colon as technically they are all separate sentences except for the "Performance is improving." The other way you could go is to say Mary's teachers said, "She is always