By Semicolons, Invitations

To me, yes. However, it's an unusual sentence, and hard to understand without any context. Perhaps you know the context and what it means? I found this through Google: "In the last century two continents were moved by the revival in England started by Dwight L. Moody. He went to visit...

Hi John, Not only is the comma not necessary aftr Fitzgerald's and Aristotles, it is incorrect to include it. It should be deleted. You can say only "Nick Carraway's" - it's clear you mean his home. I would say "At Gatsby's home" to be clear. It's possible the crying took place at Carraway's,...

Hi!You use both the British and the American spelling. Be consequent: use either the British one or the American one. I've used the British spelling for my corrections as that is what you used in the first paragraphs Good luck! Judging from your essay, I would say that your chances to be admitted...