By Semicolons, Whom

Rakesh219 wrote:Hi i would really appreciate it if you could proof read the page 2 &3 of my report "Challenges Involved in the Dentistry Field". I would really appreciate it if you could proof read my report and let me know if there are any mistakes or confusing sentences. Please let me...

Hi i would really appreciate it if you could proof read the page 2 &3 of my report "Challenges Involved in the Dentistry Field". I would really appreciate it if you could proof read my report and let me know if there are any mistakes or confusing sentences. Please let me know if i should add...

Cherrypie10 wrote:I can’t think of a better site name before so I’ve decided to name it after the two of my favorite dogs. Cherry and Pie are two of our family dogs, they're the oldest so they're the one whom I love the most.Is that correct? A semicolon keeps it from being a "run-on"...

The first sentence "of whom......" is a nonidentify clause. That modfies the sentence. I am not sure the second is correct. I would use a semicolon or add a connector. Twenty people were arrested during the demonstration; four of them were charged with obstruction. Twenty people were...

I certainly wouldn't laugh at you, but 'relocate' suggests a much longer move than a week, in common parlance. I think you have a tendency to overdo the vocabulary, as some of the other changes you made were not so good stylistically either: ORIGINAL: "When one of the people I worked closely...