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Hi,I was needing some help with this sentence:Another of his well used poetic devices is alliteration, describing the outcome of the storm, becoming, “smooth and streamlined.” I don't know whether or not I need all of the commas or if there is another symbol I need to add to the sentence in...

I was needing some help with this sentence:Another of his well used poetic devices is alliteration, describing the outcome of the storm, becoming, “smooth and streamlined.” I don't know whether or not I need all of the commas or if there is another symbol I need to add to the sentence in...

Anonymous wrote: Can you guyss tell me what can I improve on, and how to make it longer. It will be great to have some other comments too. Thank you very much Teacher's Criteriaescriptive Writing - Figurative Language: such as simile, metaphor, alliteration, allusion -Sensory qualities:...

Can you guyss tell me what can I improve on, and how to make it longer. It will be great to have some other comments too. Thank you very much Teacher's Criteriaescriptive Writing - Figurative Language: such as simile, metaphor, alliteration, allusion -Sensory qualities:...