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Actually I just want you to correct the grammar, sentence structures and check if the sentences sound OK. If a sentence is awkward, please suggest a better one.

Hi, I am applying for BBA-Finance in a university. They have asked me to write an essay on why I want to pursue the program. I've written it, but I feel that it doesn't sparkle. I am not sure if grammar, sentence structure, flow, punctuation, mood and tense are presented in a manner that makes...

Hi, Welcome to the Forum. In some cases, your meaning was not clear to me. You need quite a few changes here. If you have any questions about these, please write again. Best wishes, Clive Please help me to correct these sentences without modifying the sentence structure at all. I...

Please help me to correct these sentences without modifying the sentence structure at all. I know some sentences are messep up, but just help with the grammar and punctuation. Youe help would be really appreciated. 1.By providing an almost complete story about a carrier women’s life at the...

Hi I am applying to a Clinical Psychology program and here is my essay. Can you tell what you think and give any suggestions especially with grammar and sentence structure. They want me to state my reasons for seeking admittance to the program at this point in my life; my scholarly and...

Hello, My name is David and I am one of your engineering applicants. It has come to my attention that quite a few universities take off a couple of percentage points from a student's average if that student retakes a course . I need to know if you have the same policy. Thanks in advance.

Howdy, could someone please take a look at this e-mail and tell me if it is grammatically correct. Thanks a ton. -- Hello, My name is David and I am one of your engineering applicants. It has come to my attension quite a few universities take off a couple percent from a students average if a...

Leolyy wrote: hi Goodman, it seems that you feel it not easy to alter and modify the paragraph of my test essay. even though you have written a new one in addition, you have not modified on it. why? i cant understand because i think that it is easier to alter than to re-create. the...

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Dear Sir or Madam: I am applying for the Engineering program (Diplome d'Ingenieur)at a member institution of N+I. I graduated in Automation with a bachelor degree in 2003 from the university of Science and Technology. My study focuses on Control Theory, Distributed and Process Control....