By Sentence structures, Metaphors

Anonymous wrote: Can you guyss tell me what can I improve on, and how to make it longer. It will be great to have some other comments too. Thank you very much Teacher's Criteriaescriptive Writing - Figurative Language: such as simile, metaphor, alliteration, allusion -Sensory qualities:...

Can you guyss tell me what can I improve on, and how to make it longer. It will be great to have some other comments too. Thank you very much Teacher's Criteriaescriptive Writing - Figurative Language: such as simile, metaphor, alliteration, allusion -Sensory qualities:...

Hello, I have just finished my commentary on "My Last Duchess" for my 11th Grade IB English class. We were supposed to talk about the poetic form, background and use of poetic devices. I would love any feed back I could get on sentence structure, choice of words, and content. (and any other...