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2. Today, in these natural colors (what are ”these colors” referring to?), coming through the opened window, adjusted over the high blue wall; I feel much relaxed -- light as fur, dark clould clouds of stress seems to be fading away. 3.An egg shaped wooden silver-brown frame hanged by a thick...

Rather than a new topic, could someone please have a look and possibly optimise the following short paragraph: I'm particularly wary of the end part.. Thank you as always EF!

"The Change of the Characteristics in the passage from The Hours" The passage from the novel The Hours by Michael Cunningham is intriguing. The passage illustrates the difference between the character's characteristics in different time settings: past and present. This difference is...

This is the direct continuation of the quote I posted above. What was it about that gentle radiance that would come to make me think I had lived the same life over and over, like some Hindu mystic forever trapped in the Great Wheal?that was to become my fate?that stole my character?that rendered...

Highlighted some errors for you. Cheese1987 wrote: 1.To find out the mindset of the Striking construction workers at different period. 2.To understand tone (explain) and persuasive elements 3.To practice reading strategies such as identifying the genres, paragraph and sentence...

Can anyone help me to proof the following sentences. Thanks Aims 1.To find out the mindset of the Striking construction workers at different period. 2.To understand tone and persuasive elements 3.To practice reading strategies such as identifying the genres, paragraph and sentence...

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I have tried to simplify it a bit, Egyptian; if your readers have to wade through a labyrinth of sentence structure, they won't bother to pay attention.Equally important is the cultural factor and how it impacts on participants’ perceptions. Consistent with participants’ belief...

Hi, nice letter overall, you've stated your case very well. I've made corrections for you highlighted in blue, and added comments and highlighted in pink other problem areas you need to re-write or clarify. Dear Mr. -----, I graduated from Kiev National University of Construction and...

Hi, Below is the template of cover letter for job applications. Let me know if it sounds right to you. Correct any grammar errors and sentence structure. I'm very interested in this position and please find attached resume for my working history. Also I am a very detail oriented individual with...