By Sentence structures, Universities

I have struck out unnecessary or inappropriate verbiage, made some corrections (in bold). You may also have to fix the sentence structure to correct for my deletions.February 2, 2008 Director of the Program Department of ABC University of ABC Dear Dr Smith:I am writing to apply for the Master’s...

Wow, that's an old post. It is possible.Here in China, the education below university level are all examination oriented, the system makes perfect teachers for teaching the basic things like grammer, sentence structure. Most of these education do no good for practical use of the language. And I...

Actually I just want you to correct the grammar, sentence structures and check if the sentences sound OK. If a sentence is awkward, please suggest a better one.

Hi,I am applying for BBA-Finance in a university. They have asked me to write an essay on why I want to pursue the program. I've written it, but I feel that it doesn't sparkle. I am not sure if grammar, sentence structure, flow, punctuation, mood and tense are presented in a manner that makes...

Hi, is wrong? The "charge" is used as the verb in "universities charge tuition and fees of". I think it is redundant to repeat "charge" after "as". Why I cannot remove it? The really long form of the sentence would be More than twice as many universities charge tuition and fees of under $8000...

Hi, Welcome to the Forum. In some cases, your meaning was not clear to me. You need quite a few changes here. If you have any questions about these, please write again. Best wishes, Clive Please help me to correct these sentences without modifying the sentence structure at all. I know some...

Please help me to correct these sentences without modifying the sentence structure at all. I know some sentences are messep up, but just help with the grammar and punctuation. Youe help would be really appreciated.1.By providing an almost complete story about a carrier women’s life at the...

Being away for 3 weeks, I am back on forum again. This is my 2 cents. I think different readers have different inputs, and one may prefer certain sentence structure over the other. To me, I would write it this way: "I’ve just recently graduated from the RMIT University with a Master degree in ...

Hi I am applying to a Clinical Psychology program and here is my essay. Can you tell what you think and give any suggestions especially with grammar and sentence structure. They want me to state my reasons for seeking admittance to the program at this point in my life; my scholarly and...

Hello, My name is David and I am one of your engineering applicants. It has come to my attention that quite a few universities take off a couple of percentage points from a student's average if that student retakes a course. I need to know if you have the same policy. Thanks in advance.