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Re: can You pleas cheek this text grammer/spelling/punctuation

Grammar Geek — Fri, 26 Sep 2008 15:35:25 GMT

Hello todorovaska, and welcome to the English Forums.

1. In English, we don't capitalize "you."

2. You also use commas incorretly - never use a comma between the subject and verb as you have here: I, am the person. Almost all the commas in your letter don't belong.

3. witch should be which

4. Beyond stating your qualities, it's common to state briefly your experience. It's also common to enclose your resume or CV and to make reference to that in the letter.

Before I correct this further, is this a real job request, or is this a homework assignment?

todorovska

Dear Ser,

I am writing in response to Your advertisement posed on the web page: www.najdirabota.com on September, 25 2008 in witch, You are looking for a candidate, for the position of Sales Representative.

As a job applicant, I can assure You that I, am the person that You are looking for the above stated position.

I am convinced that, the individual needed to fill the place, should be someone, with developed communicational and organizational skills, someone diligent, proactive, self-assured, presentable, flexible, as well as dynamic, creative, innovative, talented, ambitious and motivated.

I can assure You that am a kind of a person that has all of the above stated characteristics, and skills.

I am confident that You require that kind of person, and I assure You that my aspiration of joining Your Company, and becoming a part of Your Sales team, means that I am ready for the challenge, and ready for the opportunity to work with You.

Thank You for Your time and Your consideration.

Re: Too much modest

Avangi — Tue, 12 Aug 2008 17:13:15 GMT

Hi,

In my view it would be more natural and common to omit the word "certain" in this situation. (He does not have a profession)

aristocratic (spelling)

"has a poor, serfdom background" is a little unusual.    Perhaps, "has the poor background of a serf," or "comes from a poor, serfdom background."

I would say, "far more successful than he," but perhaps that's old fashioned.

comma after "strangely"

he plays an imaginary billiard game

He is sometimes snobbish but more often he is awkward. ??

He shows that nobility does not make a person graceful.   ??

a position at a bank which is much too modest for him.

At the end of the play, he sets himself apart by being a bit of a realist   ??

Best regards, - A.

Re: How to use dash, colon, semicolon ?

Feebs11 — Mon, 07 Jul 2008 01:16:32 GMT

Pleasecorrectme
Thank you so much ! The website helps a lot ! Hmmm ... but ... the site said that dash can be used to emphasize on a point . Can it be use on any point? Does it have to be a sentence or can it be just a phrase ?

E.g .   But we managed to get out in time - I hoped .    (acceptable?)     <-- is this emphasizing on a point? Acceptable - and indicating a pause for effect when spoken

           She just stood there, not moving - at all - not until we move . (What about this?)      <-- a phrase ? If written as: not moving at all - not until we moved, then it is fine.
I think the use of the dash to emphasize a point is better shown as: There are several things to be considered - correct spelling, correct grammar, correct usage.

And .. and ! Colon and semi-colon . Is it apporiate to use in this way :

E.g . A few excellent ideas were thought out by our committee members: Ashley with the idea on holding an open house; John with the idea on printing booklets; and Jolin with the idea on giving a presentation.

Some website said that   " ; and " cannot be used together, they have to be changed to   " , and " , so I have to change it? And according to the website you suggested, it says that a semi-colon is used to separated sentence with commas . So the above sentence without commas is not acceptable?

That sentence is fine. It could be either semi-colon or comma. I see no reason why you canot use "and" after a semi-colon.

Sorry to ask so many question ! And thanks a lot ! ^^

Re: This is my first writing. Please help check my writing.

Skrej — Sat, 05 Jul 2008 23:12:04 GMT

Hi Neung,

I've made some corrections to your essay. Any corrections I made are now in red letters. If you have any questions about what I mean, or would like a more detailed explanation on why something was incorrect, please ask. We'll try to answer.

Anonymous

My name is Jeerapun Khunsopa and My (don't capitalize 'my') nickname is Nueng. I 'm 22 years old. I was born in Suphan Buri province and move (should be 'moved', since it's in the past) to Bangkok, ~~this is~~ (remove the words 'this is', and add a comma after Bangkok) a big city, (add another comma) with my family when I was nine years old. I graduated from Bangkapi school of fishing. My favorite websites are Google, Yahoo! <... some URLs removed by a mod.> I enjoy visiting tourists attractions and traveling. I also enjoy reading, going to movies and watching TV. I'm very interested in politics. I am following the presidential race in my county. I'm also interested in the global warming crisis and alternative sources of energy, such as solar and wind power. My dream job would be to run a successful Internet company that helped people. I have visited Cambodia,Cannada, (correct spelling is 'Canada', with only 1 'n') Hong kong, (capitalize 'k' in 'Kong') Laos and Mexico. I went to Chiang Mai on my last vacation. It was great! ~~and~~ (remove the word 'and' to avoid a sentence fragment) I do not have any pets, but I wish that I had a dog. My house does not allow pets. I have two brothers and one sister. If I won a million Baht, I would travel around the world. I would really like to visit Japan. My hight (correct spelling is 'height) is 173 and My weight is 64. My blood type is B and My (don't capitalize 'my') hobbies is ('hobbies' is plural, you need the plural verb 'are' instead) Listen (this should be 'listening' instead of 'listen, and don't capitalize it) to the radio, and (since there are only 2 hobbies, remove the comma and add the word 'and') read (this should be 'reading' instead of 'read') catoon. My address is Bangkapi

Neung, I think this was very good work for your first writting attempt. You did have a few very minor mistakes, but you still did quite well.

One more thing to remember, is that when you're typing things on the Internet, always put 2 spaces after a sentence, instead of one, to make them easier to read. This is a very minor thing, but it does make all writing a little easier to read, (even if it's written correctly!)

Re: commas...

Anonymous — Thu, 13 Mar 2008 22:43:15 GMT

Mister Micawber

Why don't you place them, and we'll correct them? ... And check your spelling.

This novel a best seller has no real literary meritt.

Re: Thus it explained spelling, grammar, phonetics, and usage...

Clive — Fri, 22 Feb 2008 17:08:38 GMT

Hi,

Thus it explained spelling, grammar, phonetics, and usage much more extensively than would a dictionary for native English speakers.

Do you think the above sentence is correct? Should it be written as:
Thus it explained...than a dictionary for native English speakers would?

It's fine. It's just a somewhat literary word order.
You might perhaps put a comma after 'thus'.

Clive

Re: i need help (to check spelling ) urgently

Yoong Liat — Mon, 18 Feb 2008 18:46:41 GMT

BeginStudent
Hello,

I write a formal letter, and i need to give it to my teacher tomorrow.i would someone can check me this spelling and structure.
Dear Mr. Roy ,

I am doing an English project on "heroin". ( full stop, not comma ) I want to know a little ~~bit~~ more about you and what happened when you were an addict.

I would like to ask you some questions about your past life as an addict.

The first question is "How were you exposed to heroin?"

I would also like to know how frequent you had been using heroin?

The second question is "How does an ex- addict overcome this condition?

Sincerely yours,

Moshe. ( remove full stop )

Thanks alot for your help , i need it urgently . ( Thanks a lot for your help. I need it urgently.)

Re: this is my first Gre issue ,please help me to correct it

Mister Micawber — Fri, 08 Feb 2008 04:22:04 GMT

Hello Ipkqi, and welcome to English forums. I have deleted unnecessary verbiage and underlined other problem areas:

When it comes to ~~talk about~~ cooperation, most people ~~seem to~~ tend to choose partners who have the same views ~~with them~~. Because they think disagreement can cause stress and inhibit learning ~~as the author said~~ [Do not mention 'the author'; the question is not a part of the essay]. But in my opinion, learning or debating with those whose views contradict ours can not solely help us to find ~~out the~~ flaws in our views but also to make us think different.

~~It is true that~~ disadvantages such as stress brought out from leaning or debating with people who have contradictive views cannot be ingored ,and they do hold negative effects on individual progress.Someone who always feels stress may easily change his ~~idea~~ though there's [Do not use contractions in essays] nothing wrong in his views .Unfortunly ,~~there do exist~~ many people ~~who~~ are not confident ~~and brave~~ enough to insist their views.

But we cannot neglect the positive effects of ~~the~~ contradictive views.~~There is no doubt that~~ nobody can make sure that his views are completely correct and ~~do not need to be improved little more~~ need no improvement. In actual, people who have similar views always make the same mistakes consciously [??]. Admittedly, by a strict and comprehensive look-over which would take more time and energy ,the flaws might be found ~~out~~, but the angles from which we analyze problems would not get changed. In other words ,a wider sight needs more general angles that can only be obtained from different views, and most of time "different" means contradictive.

Furthermore, sharing views with those who disagree with us may help to prove our views. For instance ,in 1678 ,~~Physicist~~ Huygens advanced a series of theorems on discribing behaviors of light, but Poisson, another physicist, thought Huygens' theory were wrong ,and then Poisson made some experiments in order to prove his thought .But eventually Poisson's experiments proved Huygens was right adversely [??]. Suppose that Huygens did not publicize his theory so that Poisson didn't know that, maybe he would ever be suspecious of the theroy of his own.

~~From what has been discussed above, we can come to the conclusion that~~ there's no denying the fact that sometimes contradictive views can be negative,but the benefits can overweigh the disadvantages.

Please check your spelling before submitting essays. Commas and full stops have no blank space before and one blank space after.

Re: commas and tense?

Clive — Tue, 11 Dec 2007 23:10:05 GMT

Hi,

Spiders and crabbs can look very similar and are, in fact, both classifed as arthnopods. Both a spider and a crab has two main body sections, the cephalotohroax and the abdomen. However, crabs usually have two pairs of antennae on their heads. The crabs uses this antennae as sense organes.(you have a number of other spelling mistakes)

Please help. Should has be have or is it correct? Iam not sure about the commas. Should this be these? Please point out any mistakes besides spelling.

Use the plural in both cases. 'Have' and 'these'.

Thecommas are OK.

Clive

commas and tense?

Anonymous — Tue, 11 Dec 2007 22:58:12 GMT

Spiders and crabbs can look very similar and are, in fact, both classifed as arthnopods. Both a spider and a crab has two main body sections, the cephalotohroax and the abdomen. However, crabs usually have two pairs of antennae on there heads. The crabs uses this antennae as sense organes.

Please help. Should has be have or is it correct? Iam not sure about the commas. Should this be these? Please point out any mistakes besides spelling.