By Spelling, Formal letters

Hello,I write a formal letter, and i need to give it to my teacher tomorrow.i would someone can check me this spelling and structure. Dear Mr. Roy , I am doing an English project about "heroin" .I wanted to know a little bit more about you and what happened when you were an addict. I...

Hello,I write a formal letter, and i need to give it to my teacher tomorrow.i would someone can check me this spelling and structure. **** *******. 24th January , 2008 Dear Mr. XXXX, I am doing an English project about "heroin" .I wanted to know a little bit more...

Hi, One more thing, where can i get help with the general formal language used in letters? I'm sure you can find lots of info on this if you search the 'net.. Here are a few brief, overall suggestions. Don't use short forms. Don't be too familiar with people. Be polite. Check your spelling...

Hello, Diddy.This is a rambling, conversational letter that you might as well leave as is. To make it a formal letter requires your reviewing it carefully for punctuation, spelling mistakes, and interjected comments.

I'm not too sure what all this is about - is it just part of a letter? anyway my suggestions are in red. By the end (By the end makes no sense, do you mean by the way? Not really suitable for a formal letter though).I should mention that there is no graudated (spelling)MSc or PhD study at...

Hello again Jim, and thanks for taking the time to answer my query. The point I was making about 'School is out' is that in my mind that is the correct grammar, not incorrect - perhaps I worded it badly (oops!), and my English friends who argue with me would, I think agree with you and me that...

Hi, As you see, I have followed some of them, and not others. Actually, not I can’t see because I can’t be bothered to compare your specific iterations when you have taken some but not all. It would be helpful to know where you chose a different path and why. Dear Sir or Madam: I am...

i'm tryin to write an formal letter to couple of unversites , so please help with this letter . this one is really bad , so if yáll can please add/fix/rebuild it or whatever so it will look better i will appreciate ! ( by the way , don't worry about the spelling ) dear coach , My name is Guy...

According to their website, it's 'programme' (British spelling would be diplomatic here anyway) and 'Admissions Office'. Also, a letter beginning 'Dear Sir' should conclude with 'Yours faithfully' in formal British English, I believe. Other than that, Jim's looks fine to me.