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<rss version="2.0" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:slash="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/slash/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/"><channel><title>Search results for 'tag:Spelling tag:Tenses' matching tags 'Spelling' and 'Tenses'</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/search/pro.htm?q=tag%3aSpelling+tag%3aTenses&amp;tag=Spelling,Tenses&amp;orTags=0</link><description>Search results for 'tag:Spelling tag:Tenses' matching tags 'Spelling' and 'Tenses'</description><dc:language>en-US</dc:language><generator>CSMOD (Build: 3161.22795)</generator><item><title>Re: burried</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/Burried/gkwck/post.htm#552612</link><pubDate>Fri, 08 Aug 2008 17:46:04 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:552612</guid><dc:creator>Clive</dc:creator><description>Hi,&lt;br /&gt;You can say it either way.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;But if the person was buried, then dug up and reburied somewhere else, you have to choose your tense more carefully.&lt;img id="@@emo@@" alt="(;)) Wink" src="http://www.englishforums.com/emoticons/emotion-5.gif" /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;em&gt;Note that both your versions have a spelling error.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/em&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Clive</description></item><item><title>Re: writing my thoughts on verses</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/WritingMyThoughtsOnVerses/gwqlg/post.htm#545247</link><pubDate>Wed, 23 Jul 2008 02:12:03 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:545247</guid><dc:creator>Believer</dc:creator><description>Thank you, Mr. M.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I think I have made a couple of mistakes on tenses, besides my misspelling of Mary&amp;#39;s name,&amp;nbsp;for the&amp;nbsp;work I have done to paraphrase John 20: 1-18 in my own words.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Self-correction on what &amp;nbsp;I wrote:&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I think these verses talk about Mary &lt;strike&gt;Maglene&lt;/strike&gt; Magdalene&amp;nbsp; finding the stone from the entrance missing and calling on Simon Peter and the other disciple to come and take a look. They saw what they saw. Mary was crying when Jesus appeared before her and asked her why she&lt;strike&gt; is&lt;/strike&gt; was crying. Jesus appeared before her and told her that He &lt;strike&gt;is&lt;/strike&gt; (was) returning to the Father. Mary then went to the disciples to tell what He had said to her.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Does my self-correction correct? Could I have written &amp;quot;is returning&amp;quot; for the second correction effort?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Thank you.</description></item><item><title>Re: Consonant cluster reduction</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/ConsonantClusterReduction/gwqzh/post.htm#545146</link><pubDate>Tue, 22 Jul 2008 22:54:33 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:545146</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><description>Hi.&amp;nbsp; On TV you may not hear the sounds, the tongue-play within the chamber of the mouth and the tiny air stops, etcetera that occur when people speak.&amp;nbsp; You need to be face-to-face with your pronunciation coach.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I can well see how you &amp;quot;hear&amp;quot; FAX for facts, because the sounds are about identical in those two words.&amp;nbsp; You know from the context when someone tells you to send them a FAX that they are not talking about the &amp;quot;facts.&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp; That is the context or the syntax of the language.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;GIFTS is spelled that way, but, actually when you pronounce it, you DO HEAR &amp;quot;GIFS.&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp; The ortography of words is a clue to their meaning, so the spelling is important when you are reading.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;ASKED.&amp;nbsp; Pronounce ASK.&amp;nbsp; Feel and hear the little &amp;quot;kick&amp;quot; when you produce the &amp;quot;k.&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp; Now, add the past tense syllable, &amp;quot;ed.&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp; In this particular word, &amp;quot;ed&amp;quot; is pronounced as if it were a &amp;quot;t.&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp; Your mouth cannot go from the &amp;quot;K&amp;quot; to the &amp;quot;T&amp;quot; without trouble, so the &amp;quot;K&amp;quot; gets forgiven, softened, blurred in pronunciation..it just about disappears totally so that your tongue is able to touch the alveolar ridge just behind your front teeth.&amp;nbsp; That is the positioning of the tongue within the mouth that causes this particular phenomenon.&amp;nbsp; KICKed...see above for &amp;quot;asked.&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp; These kinds of sound changes are required due to the placement of the tongue.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;On that subject, I might point your interest to the pronunciation of &amp;quot;a&amp;quot; or &amp;quot;an.&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp; Before a consonant you use &amp;quot;a&amp;quot; and before a vowel you use &amp;quot;an.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;Try it.&amp;nbsp; A dog.&amp;nbsp; A cat.&amp;nbsp; A shoe.&amp;nbsp; A house.&amp;nbsp; Now consonants.....An elephant, An egg, An old man, An idiot.&amp;nbsp; If you were to reverse this speaking pattern, you&amp;#39;d quickly feel the ugliness and difficulty forced into your tongue movements.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;An dog; an cat, an shoe; an house..a elephant; a egg; a old man; a idiot.&lt;br /&gt;Carole in Umatilla, OR</description></item><item><title>Re: Simple Past Lesson Plan</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/SimplePastLessonPlan/ghdwx/post.htm#536534</link><pubDate>Fri, 04 Jul 2008 04:22:11 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:536534</guid><dc:creator>Mister Micawber</dc:creator><description>.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;em&gt;Oh, I can always find something else (but I may have messed up your formatted columns):&lt;/em&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;font color="#000000"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Lesson Plan&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Preparation&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/font&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#000000"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Level : Elementary&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#000000"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Lesson Length: 45 minutes&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;br /&gt; &lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;Objective: To be able to use the Past Simple question forms and short answers.&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;Target Language: 	&lt;em&gt;did&lt;/em&gt; + subject + base form of verb ( &lt;em&gt;Did your mother call you?&lt;/em&gt; )&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt; 	Question word + &lt;em&gt;did&lt;/em&gt; + subject + base form of verb&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; ( &lt;em&gt;What did you do last night?&lt;/em&gt; ) &lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Short answers:	&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;em&gt; Yes &lt;/em&gt;+ subject + &lt;em&gt;did&lt;/em&gt; ( &lt;em&gt;Did it rain? Yes, it did&lt;/em&gt;.)&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;em&gt;			 No&lt;/em&gt; + subject + &lt;em&gt;didn&amp;#39;t&lt;/em&gt; ( &lt;em&gt;Did Helen come to the party?&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt; No, she didn&amp;#39;t.&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/em&gt;&lt;strong&gt; &lt;/strong&gt;)&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;Assumed&lt;strong&gt; knowledge&lt;/strong&gt;: Past Simple (regular / irregular verbs&lt;strong&gt;, &lt;/strong&gt;negative form)&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;br /&gt; &lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;Anticipated &lt;strong&gt;problems&lt;/strong&gt;: &lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt; Students may use a past form of the &lt;strong&gt;main&lt;/strong&gt; verb to make the question instead of using the &lt;strong&gt;base&lt;/strong&gt; form. E.g. &lt;em&gt;Did you went?&lt;/em&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;ol&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Solutions: 	&lt;/p&gt;&lt;ol&gt;&lt;ol&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;p&gt;During the presentation stage, draw students&amp;#39; attention to the fact that &amp;#39;&lt;em&gt;Did&lt;/em&gt;&amp;#39; does not change its form. &amp;#39;&lt;em&gt;Did&lt;/em&gt;&amp;#39; is always used to form the question in the Past Simple.&lt;em&gt;&lt;strong&gt;(This is not true for the verb &amp;#39;be&amp;#39; and sometimes the verb &amp;#39;have&amp;#39;.)&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/em&gt;&lt;br /&gt; &lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;p&gt;Point out the verb tense in the 			question form. &lt;em&gt;Did + &lt;em&gt;subject + base form of the verb&lt;/em&gt;&lt;/em&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;Drill 			individually and chorally.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;/li&gt;&lt;li&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;Practice 			making questions. Monitoring for errors and having &lt;strong&gt;students&lt;/strong&gt; &lt;strong&gt;unscramble&lt;/strong&gt; sentences&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;can also help to work on sentence structure problems.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ol&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ol&gt;&lt;/li&gt;&lt;/ol&gt;&lt;/li&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;br /&gt; &lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;Preparation and Aids: Simple reading text ,dialogue, in the Simple Past&lt;strong&gt;,&lt;/strong&gt; using vocabulary that &lt;/span&gt; &lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;em&gt;			 &lt;/em&gt;&lt;span&gt;students &lt;/span&gt;&lt;em&gt;are already familiar with. &lt;/em&gt;&lt;span&gt;Handout for homework correcting 			sentences&lt;/span&gt;&lt;em&gt;. &lt;/em&gt;&lt;span&gt;Four pictures of people doing things.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;br /&gt; &lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;em&gt;					&lt;/em&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;h3&gt;&lt;em&gt;				 &lt;/em&gt; &lt;/h3&gt; &lt;p&gt;			&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;			&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;			&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Lesson Plan&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;table cellpadding="4" cellspacing="0"&gt; 	 	 	 	 	&lt;tr&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Stage&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Activity&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Interaction&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;strong&gt;Timing&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 	&lt;/tr&gt; 	&lt;tr&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;1&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Warmer : Timed &lt;span style="text-decoration:underline;"&gt;Scat&lt;strong&gt;t&lt;/strong&gt;ergories&lt;/span&gt; (&lt;strong&gt;&lt;em&gt;spelling?&amp;nbsp; I don&amp;#39;t know this word&lt;/em&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;) with pre-&lt;strong&gt;chosen&lt;/strong&gt; themes 			(food, things you do on the weekend,&lt;strong&gt; etc&lt;/strong&gt;) &lt;/font&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Review homework from last class&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;TS&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;ST&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;5 mins&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 	&lt;/tr&gt; 	&lt;tr&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;2&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Introduction : Have two students stand up for a moment to set the scene; elicit their names. Then they can sit down. Write them on the board. Hand out the dialogue between these two friends who are talking about their past weekend. (A dialogue that mostly contains vocabulary the students are familiar with) &lt;/font&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;TS&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;SS&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;1 min&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 	&lt;/tr&gt; 	&lt;tr&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;3&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Have students read the dialogue and answer gist 			questions&lt;strong&gt; about&lt;/strong&gt; it to check their understanding. &lt;/font&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;S&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;ST&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;3 min&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 	&lt;/tr&gt; 	&lt;tr&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;4&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Ask students to focus on the language used by 			asking what question Â«&amp;nbsp;A&amp;nbsp;Â» asked Â«&amp;nbsp;B&amp;nbsp;Â».&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Write this question on the board.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;TS&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;ST&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;1 min&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 	&lt;/tr&gt; 	&lt;tr&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;5&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Presentation : Show students how it is formed &lt;/font&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt; &lt;font&gt;&lt;em&gt;Did&lt;/em&gt; +&lt;strong&gt; subject&lt;/strong&gt; + base&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt; &lt;font&gt;&lt;em&gt;Did you have a good weekend ?&lt;/em&gt; &lt;/font&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Point out that we don&amp;#39;t use the past form of the 			&lt;strong&gt;main&lt;/strong&gt; verb in questions, but always the base (or dictionary) form&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;TS&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;5 min&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 	&lt;/tr&gt; 	&lt;tr&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;6 &lt;/font&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Drill chorally and individually. Focus on 			pronunciation and correct structure.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;TST&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;2 min&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 	&lt;/tr&gt; 	&lt;tr&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;7&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Elicit: Draw &lt;strong&gt;students&amp;#39; &lt;/strong&gt;attention to the short 			answer and explain the positive and the negative structures.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;em&gt;&lt;font&gt;Yes +&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/em&gt;&lt;font&gt; &lt;strong&gt;subject&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;em&gt;&lt;font&gt; + did -- Yes, I did.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/em&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;em&gt;&lt;font&gt;No + &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/em&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;strong&gt;subject&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;em&gt;&lt;font&gt; + didn&amp;#39;t -- No, I didn&amp;#39;t.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/em&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;TS&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 	&lt;/tr&gt; 	&lt;tr&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;8&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Drill chorally and individually and then conduct a 			controlled question-and-answer drill around the class :&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;E.g : Â«&lt;em&gt;&amp;nbsp;Sandrine ask Didier&lt;/em&gt;...(point to 			an action on the board : - go to the restaurant / movies / market / bank / etc.) Â»&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			 			 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Sandrine:&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Â«&amp;nbsp;&lt;em&gt;Did you go to the restaurant?&lt;/em&gt; Â«&amp;nbsp;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Didier:&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Â«&amp;nbsp; &lt;em&gt;Yes, I did.&lt;/em&gt;&amp;nbsp;Â» etc. &lt;/font&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;ST&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;SS&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;2 min&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;5 min&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 	&lt;/tr&gt; 	&lt;tr&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;9&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Pairwork : Students ask and answer questions from the board and note down their partners&amp;#39; answers. The focus here is on correct pronunciation and structure&lt;strong&gt;,&lt;/strong&gt; so it is important to correct any errors by referring to the structures on the board. &lt;/font&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;PW&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;5 min&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 	&lt;/tr&gt; 	&lt;tr&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;10&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Controlled Oral Practice : Use&lt;strong&gt; dialogue &lt;/strong&gt;text as a basis to talk about what the two characters did on the weekend. Also use visual support such as a picture of a restaurant to prompt questions.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;For example&lt;strong&gt;,&lt;/strong&gt; show a picture of two friends having a 			conversation; encourage them to produce the following question : &lt;/font&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Â«&lt;em&gt;&amp;nbsp;Did they go to a restaurant ? -- Yes, 			they did / No, they didn&amp;#39;t.&lt;/em&gt;&amp;nbsp;Â»&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Give four picture examples as prompts.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;TS&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;SS&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;TS&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;1 min &lt;/font&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;2 min&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 	&lt;/tr&gt; 	&lt;tr&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;11&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Monitor closely. Correct errors by using what&amp;#39;s 			already on the board as a point of reference.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;TS&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;br /&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;1 min&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 	&lt;/tr&gt; 	&lt;tr&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;12&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;If students are performing well, turn focus to what they &lt;strong&gt;themselves&lt;/strong&gt; did on the weekend. They ask each other questions and give short answers.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;PW&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;5 min&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 	&lt;/tr&gt; 	&lt;tr&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;13&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Follow up with controlled written practice. &lt;strong&gt;For example, &lt;/strong&gt;use questions and answers&lt;strong&gt; in which&lt;/strong&gt; the words are all mixed up ; students put the words back &lt;strong&gt;into&lt;/strong&gt; the correct order.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;S&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;5 min &lt;/font&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 	&lt;/tr&gt; 	&lt;tr&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font&gt;14&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt; 		&lt;/td&gt; 		&lt;td&gt; 			&lt;p&gt;&lt;font&gt;Homework : a transformation exercise (changing 			affirmative statements into questions and short answers) &lt;/font&gt; 			&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: Fragmented sentences</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/FragmentedSentences/3/gzhmg/Post.htm#527924</link><pubDate>Mon, 16 Jun 2008 04:03:51 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:527924</guid><dc:creator>New2grammar</dc:creator><description>&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/englishforums/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt; &lt;strong&gt;Delmobile&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;New2G, be careful - my teenagers frequently get into trouble with their school essays when they can&amp;#39;t stay in one tense.&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I don&amp;#39;t really understand why native speakers will get into trouble for switching tenses. Isn&amp;#39;t it part of everyday speech which is why they do tense switching in their essays in the first place?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/p&gt; &lt;p&gt;I understand that even native speakers make spelling mistakes and occasional subject-verb agreement mistakes. But I don&amp;#39;t think I&amp;#39;ve heard or seen any native speaker make tense mistakes. Oh..it&amp;#39;s very likely because I don&amp;#39;t know tense switching well enough. Could you give an real world example of a tense switching mistake committed by a native? I don&amp;#39;t believe they woudl say &amp;quot;Yesterday, I see a man&amp;quot; or I graduate last year&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Sorry, If I&amp;#39;m asking a lot.&lt;br /&gt;Thanks in advance.</description></item><item><title>Re: everyday ...present tense</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/EverydayPresentTense/gvnwj/post.htm#524680</link><pubDate>Sun, 08 Jun 2008 18:42:20 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:524680</guid><dc:creator>Kooyeen</dc:creator><description>Only the spelling is wrong. There are no problems with verb tenses, as I said in my other post. So in your example it should be written separately, &amp;quot;every day&amp;quot;. &lt;img src="http://www.englishforums.com/emoticons/emotion-1.gif" alt="Smile" title="Smile" /&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: neat uniform</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/NeatUniform/gdpcl/post.htm#520245</link><pubDate>Wed, 28 May 2008 23:02:27 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:520245</guid><dc:creator>khoff</dc:creator><description>&lt;p&gt;Vincent, did you understand the comments?&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Grammatically, your sentence is perfect.&amp;nbsp; There are no errors of spelling or tense or agreement of subject and verb.&amp;nbsp; But the word &amp;quot;neat&amp;quot; has more than one meaning, and it is not clear which one you intend in your sentence.&amp;nbsp; Therefore, your sentence is ambiguous.&amp;nbsp; Its meaning is not completely clear.&amp;nbsp; In such a case, do you want us to tell you it is &amp;quot;correct,&amp;quot; or not?&amp;nbsp; &lt;/p&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: Help me please.</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpMePlease/grzvl/post.htm#502650</link><pubDate>Sat, 19 Apr 2008 14:13:20 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:502650</guid><dc:creator>julielai</dc:creator><description>&lt;p&gt;You need to fix the part in red. 
&lt;p&gt;&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/englishforums/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt; &lt;strong&gt;Anonymous&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&amp;nbsp;Ok... so basically I need to do a five paragraph essay (Paragraph model?) by analyzing 3 quotes from this a passage I read &amp;quot;No name woman&amp;quot; by Maxie Hong Kingston. I&amp;#39;m just having trouble with a few things... some I understand, and others I don&amp;#39;t. I tried fixing some errors that I made.. (ie: spelling, grammar). This is just the a 2nd draft. I would apprcieate some help and tips. Thanks in advance! 
&lt;p&gt;This is what I need help with: &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;-Verb Tense &lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;`Unpacking language of quotes -Introducing all quotes fully&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;-Run on sentences?&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;u&gt;No Name Woman&lt;/u&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;Maxine Hong Kingston begins to learn the story of &lt;strong&gt;&lt;u&gt;her &lt;/u&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;aunt &lt;strong&gt;&lt;u&gt;who in the story &lt;/u&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;is known as âNo Name Womanâ. Kingstonâs mother begins in the first passage, warning her to not tell anyone what she is about to say, referring to the story of her aunt. She explains that the aunt &lt;font color="#000000"&gt;was&lt;/font&gt; Kingstonâs fatherâs sister, who killed herself in the family &lt;strike&gt;well&lt;/strike&gt;, but thereâs no mention of her at all, &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;because it is as if she had never been born. The aunt brought shame to the family. She became a disgrace to the village, because the &lt;strike&gt;action of&lt;/strike&gt; adultery committed. As a result of that, she ended up with an unwanted pregnancy. This caused so much commotion with the villagers, who were enraged, and raided the family house. The villagers destroyed and &lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;broke&lt;/font&gt; their possessions, wanting to get rid of the aunt from their community; because the villagers did not permit the coupleâs breaking tradition. As a child, Kingston did not fully understand&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;u&gt;this part &lt;/u&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&amp;nbsp;of her Chinese culture. She starts making up her own stories. As an adult, Kingston looks back at her childhood years, to &lt;strong&gt;&lt;u&gt;understand the &lt;/u&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;story and her &lt;strong&gt;&lt;u&gt;culture&lt;/u&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Roughly around the age of 12, Kingston starts receiving warnings&lt;strike&gt;, &lt;/strike&gt;and semi-threats from her mother &lt;strong&gt;&lt;u&gt;about&lt;/u&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&amp;nbsp;any unwanted pregnancies. Kingstonâs mother sets the aunt as an example. The mother says:&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&amp;quot;Don&amp;#39;t let your father know that I told you. He denies her. Now that you have started to menstruate, what happened to her could happen to you. Don&amp;#39;t humiliate us. You wouldn&amp;#39;t like to be forgotten as if you had never been born. The villagers are watchful;&amp;quot; (325)&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;The mother warns young Kingston, and &lt;strong&gt;&lt;u&gt;talks about &lt;/u&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;the aunt who brought disgrace to the family. Kingston is being guided, not to fall in the wrong path as her aunt did. The mother warns her at this moment, because it is the moment &lt;strong&gt;&lt;em&gt;Kingston goes into a new stage of life that she must go through carefully (be specific)&lt;/em&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;. The mother wants Kingston to learn the values of her culture, traditions, and the people she represents. She describes that the villagers are &lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;watching (watching whom?)&lt;/font&gt;, because they are a community who stick together as a group. &lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;It is part of their culture, having private lives is a dishonor to the culture.&amp;nbsp; (doesn&amp;#39;t make sense) &lt;/font&gt;&lt;font color="#000000"&gt;The&lt;/font&gt; aunt dishonored it, by having a baby without &lt;strong&gt;&lt;u&gt;a father&lt;/u&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;. The mother is preventing young Kingston from &lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;bring&lt;/font&gt; shame to the family again. &lt;strike&gt;Kingstonâs mother told stories&lt;/strike&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Adult Kingston remembers when her mother &lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;use&lt;/font&gt; to &lt;strong&gt;&lt;u&gt;tell her stories to &lt;/u&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;warn her about life, and the realities &lt;strike&gt;that existed&lt;/strike&gt;. &lt;strike&gt;She would tell stories, to teach Kingston morals.&lt;/strike&gt; Kingston explains:&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;âWhenever she had to warn us about life, my mother told stories that ran like this one, a story to grow up on. She tested our strength to establish realities. Those in the emigrant generations who could not reassert brute survival died young and far from home. Those of us in the first American generations have had to figure out how the invisible world the emigrants built around our childhoods fit in solid America.â (325) &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;Adult Kingston discusses &lt;strike&gt;about&lt;/strike&gt; the emigrants who were struggling with poverty, and moved to America. This was the old generation, who struggled with &lt;strong&gt;&lt;u&gt;survival&lt;/u&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;. The emigrants re-&lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;assert&lt;/font&gt; themselves with the new life; some &lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;endure&lt;/font&gt; (tense) brute survival. Poverty was an issue in old China. The new generation is growing in America. China was the âinvisible worldâ for &lt;strike&gt;most that was part of&lt;/strike&gt; the new generation. Kingston &lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;they&lt;/font&gt; never been there, but only hear stories about it. &lt;strike&gt;America was solid, because&lt;/strike&gt; the new generation &lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;was&lt;/font&gt; adapting to new changes. Kingston &lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;wanted&lt;/font&gt; to uncover more of this Chinese cultural history.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;As an adult, Kingston starts to question if her aunt is really guilty&lt;strike&gt;, to commit such an act,&lt;/strike&gt; &lt;strike&gt;which would lead to her own demise&lt;/strike&gt;. Kingston searches for answers, because the stories only seem to confuse her. She &lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;did&lt;/font&gt; not fully understand the Chinese &lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;cultural&lt;/font&gt; as a child, because she &lt;strong&gt;&lt;u&gt;is part of &lt;/u&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;the new generation. This leads Kingston &lt;strong&gt;&lt;u&gt;to form &lt;/u&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;her own perspective of the story that her mother had told. She starts &lt;strong&gt;&lt;u&gt;rewriting &lt;/u&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;the story in her own words, and her own point of view. Kingston thinks:&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;âAdultery is extravagance. Could people who hatch their own chicks and eat the embryos and the heads for delicacies and boil the feet in vinegar for party food, leaving only the gravel, eating even the gizzard lining--could such people engender a prodigal aunt? To be a woman, to have a daughter in starvation time was a waste enough. My aunt could not have been the lone romantic who gave up everything for sex. Women in the old China did not choose. Some man had commanded her to lie with him and be his secret evil. I wonder whether he masked himself when he joined the raid on the family.â (326)&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;Adult Kingston does not believe that her aunt gave up everything for adultery. She questions, &lt;strong&gt;&lt;u&gt;and thinks &lt;/u&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;how cruel the villagers &lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;are&lt;/font&gt; towards the aunt. Kingston describes her aunt as &lt;strong&gt;&lt;u&gt;a &lt;/u&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;âprodigal auntâ &lt;strike&gt;meaning she is yielding profusely&lt;/strike&gt;. She questions&lt;strike&gt;,&lt;/strike&gt; if a human being is capable of bringing a newborn &lt;strong&gt;&lt;u&gt;to this world&lt;/u&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;, and then getting rid of it without any remorse. She realizes that &lt;strike&gt;in Chinese culture, woman &lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;had&lt;/font&gt; no right to rule, because they &lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;had&lt;/font&gt; to obey the rules set by the husband. We&lt;/strike&gt;women in that time &lt;strike&gt;of Chinese culture&lt;/strike&gt; did not have a choice &lt;strong&gt;&lt;u&gt;because they had to obey their husbands&lt;/u&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;. Kingston wonders if the man responsible for impregnating her aunt wasnât man enough to &lt;strong&gt;&lt;u&gt;try to be responsible&lt;/u&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;. She also believes the man might have been responsible for organizing the raid in the first place. Kingston&lt;strike&gt;, &lt;/strike&gt;somehow wanted to defend her aunt. She tries to analyze the possible reasons behind her aunt&amp;#39;s unwanted pregnancy&lt;strike&gt;, in&lt;/strike&gt; which dishonored her entire &lt;strong&gt;&lt;u&gt;family&lt;/u&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Kingston as an adult&lt;strike&gt;, &lt;/strike&gt;finally realized her aunt was not fully guilty. The aunt &lt;strike&gt;went through injustice, and&lt;/strike&gt; was the victim of rape. While the entire society rejected her aunt, Kingston honored her aunt instead. The motherâs aim was to warn young Kingston, not to humiliate the family by making the same mistake as her aunt did. &lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;The motherâs aim also had another purpose, in which she wanted to show the values of her culture, traditions, and making Kingston a better person in life&lt;strike&gt;, without any disruptions&lt;/strike&gt;. Kingston as an adult reflects back on what she has learned from her mother, and her unnamed aunt. She &lt;strong&gt;&lt;u&gt;has &lt;/u&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;also discovered the world that was once invisible to her. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;</description></item><item><title>Help me please.</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/HelpMePlease/zqxdh/post.htm</link><pubDate>Sun, 13 Apr 2008 22:44:07 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:500317</guid><dc:creator>Anonymous</dc:creator><description>&amp;nbsp;Ok... so basically I need to do a five paragraph essay (Paragraph model?) by analyzing 3 quotes from this a passage I read &amp;quot;No name woman&amp;quot; by Maxie Hong Kingston. I&amp;#39;m just having trouble with a few things... some I understand, and others I don&amp;#39;t. I tried fixing some errors that I made.. (ie: spelling, grammar). This is just the a 2nd draft. I would apprcieate some help and tips. Thanks in advance!

 &lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;This is what I need help with:

&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;-Verb Tense

&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;`Unpacking language of quotes

-Introducing all quotes fully&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;

-Run on sentences?&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;
&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;u&gt;No Name Woman&lt;/u&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;Maxine Hong Kingston begins to learn the story
of an aunt, in which she is known as âNo Name Womanâ. Kingstonâs mother begins
in the first passage, warning her to not tell anyone what she is about to say,
referring to the story of her aunt. She explains that the aunt was Kingstonâs
fatherâs sister, who killed herself in the family well, but thereâs no mention
of her at all, &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;because it is as if she had never been
born. The aunt brought shame to the family. She became a disgrace to the
village, because the action of adultery committed. As a result of that, she
ended up with an unwanted pregnancy. This caused so much commotion with the
villagers, who were enraged, and raided the family house. The villagers destroyed
and broke their possessions, wanting to get rid of the aunt from their community;
because the villagers did not permit the coupleâs breaking tradition. As a
child, Kingston did not fully understand the way of her Chinese culture. She
starts making up her own stories. As an adult, Kingston looks back at her
childhood years, to learn the identity of the story, and go deeper with her
cultural history.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Roughly
around the age of 12, Kingston starts receiving warnings, and semi-threats from
her mother, to avoid any unwanted pregnancies. Kingstonâs mother sets the aunt
as an example. The mother says:&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p style="text-align:justify;"&gt;&amp;quot;Don&amp;#39;t let your father know that I told you. He
denies her. Now that you have started to menstruate, what happened to her could
happen to you. Don&amp;#39;t humiliate us. You wouldn&amp;#39;t like to be forgotten as if you
had never been born. The villagers are watchful;&amp;quot; (325)&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;The mother warns young Kingston, and sets an
example from the aunt who brought disgrace to the family. Kingston is being
guided, not to fall in the wrong path as her aunt did. The mother warns her at
this moment, because it is the moment Kingston goes into a new stage of life
that she must go through carefully. The mother wants Kingston to learn the
values of her culture, traditions, and the people she represents. She describes
that the villagers are watching, because they are a community who stick
together as a group. It is part of their culture, having private lives is a
dishonor to the culture. The aunt dishonored it, by having a baby without any
father present. The mother is preventing young Kingston from bring shame to the
family again. Kingstonâs mother told stories&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Adult
Kingston remembers when her mother use to warn her about life, and the
realities that existed. She would tell stories, to teach Kingston morals.
Kingston explains:&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;âWhenever she
had to warn us about life, my mother told stories that ran like this one, a
story to grow up on. She tested our strength to establish realities. Those in
the emigrant generations who could not reassert brute survival died young and
far from home. Those of us in the first American generations have had to figure
out how the invisible world the emigrants built around our childhoods fit in
solid America.â (325) &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;Adult Kingston discusses about the emigrants who
were struggling with poverty, and moved to America. This was the old
generation, who struggled with surviving life. The emigrants re-assert
themselves with the new life; some endure brute survival. Poverty was an issue in
old China. The new generation is growing in America. China was the âinvisible
worldâ for most that was part of the new generation. Kingston they never been
there, but only hear stories about it. America was solid, because the new
generation was adapting to new changes. Kingston wanted to uncover more of this
Chinese cultural history.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;As
an adult, Kingston starts to question if her aunt is really guilty, to commit
such an act, which would lead to her own demise. Kingston searches for answers,
because the stories only seem to confuse her. She did not fully understand the
Chinese cultural as a child, because she grew up in the new generation. This
leads Kingston making up her own perspective of the story that her mother had
told. She starts remaking the story in her own words, and her own point of
view. Kingston thinks:&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;âAdultery is extravagance. Could people who hatch their own chicks and
eat the embryos and the heads for delicacies and boil the feet in vinegar for
party food, leaving only the gravel, eating even the gizzard lining--could such
people engender a prodigal aunt? To be a woman, to have a daughter in
starvation time was a waste enough. My aunt could not have been the lone
romantic who gave up everything for sex. Women in the old China did not choose.
Some man had commanded her to lie with him and be his secret evil. I wonder
whether he masked himself when he joined the raid on the family.â (326)&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;Adult Kingston does not believe that her aunt gave
up everything for adultery. She questions, how cruel the villagers are towards
the aunt. Kingston describes her aunt as âprodigal auntâ meaning she is
yielding profusely. She questions, if a human being is capable of bringing a
newborn, and then getting rid of it without any remorse. She realizes that in
Chinese culture, woman had no right to rule, because they had to obey the rules
set by the husband. Women in that time of Chinese culture did not have a
choice. Kingston wonders if the man responsible for impregnating her aunt
wasnât man enough to take hold of his responsibilities. She also believes the
man might have been responsible for organizing the raid in the first place. Kingston,
somehow wanted to defend her aunt. She tries to analyze the possible reasons
behind her aunt&amp;#39;s unwanted pregnancy, in which dishonored her entire culture. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Kingston
as an adult, finally realized her aunt was not fully guilty. The aunt went
through injustice, and was the victim of rape. While the entire society
rejected her aunt, Kingston honored her aunt instead. The motherâs aim was to
warn young Kingston, not to humiliate the family by making the same mistake as
her aunt did. &lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;The motherâs aim also had
another purpose, in which she wanted to show the values of her culture,
traditions, and making Kingston a better person in life, without any
disruptions. Kingston as an adult reflects back on what she has learned from
her mother, and her unnamed aunt. She also discovered the world that was once
invisible to her. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;</description></item><item><title>Re: tense</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/Tense/zqrpr/post.htm#496468</link><pubDate>Fri, 04 Apr 2008 08:34:38 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:496468</guid><dc:creator>Mr Bojangle</dc:creator><description>&amp;nbsp;&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/englishforums/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt; &lt;strong&gt;Swordfish&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;Hi,&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Are these sentences correct?&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;(a) We were metting once a long time ago but I don&amp;#39;t think she will remember me.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;(b) We had met once a long time ago but I didn&amp;#39;t think she would remember me.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;(c) We may have met once a long time ago but I don&amp;#39;t think she will remember me.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;Hi Swordfish...Hope your having a great day.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;So..&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;i&gt;metting&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/b&gt; is a spelling mistake for sure.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;(a) we met once a long time ago but I donÂ´t think she will remember me.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;Forget (b) because your using a past perfect tense of have...with context that doesnÂ´t need it. Stay with (a).&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;but with (c) your not so sure you met her ...then in the second clause ... your saying she did met you..the two clauses in this complex sentence do not make sense with each other.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;Hope that helps.&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;Mr Bojangle&amp;nbsp;</description></item></channel></rss>