Hello. Thank you for giving me some ideas. I correct some of your suggestions that you highlighted, but I still do not know how to correct the rest of them. Could you please give me a hint how to fix them? Thank you! I really appreciate your help.

Highlighted a few things that need some work. Necklace is the story about a very poor woman's huge life changes by encountering a necklace. The woman, named Mathilde Loisel who is poor and married a clerk, is described as a pretty woman

Okay. Thank you! I fixed the tense to all present tense. How does it look now? Is it much better than before, or do I need more effort to fix it? Thank you. Plot Summary: Necklace Necklace is the story of a very poor

Hello. I had to write the plot summary of the story, "Necklace" by Gui De Maupassany within 200 to 300 words, but my plot summary exceeded 300 words. I do not know which words to omit. Also, I am not satisfied with my usage of

"Alan Brooks" But I think the Japanese raid on the Northern Territories ... "Titanic" and, as you mention, "Pearl Harbor" (American spelling please). I disagree. TITANIC would be like AUSTRALIA if the first hour

I only have five, not 500. Sue me :) 1. Movie makes LA look beautiful, autumnal. If I had moved to ** in 1995, I might have stayed. The LA I moved to, just a few miles west, had nothing but smog and relentless sunshine. I so blew it. 2. J-G and Z

It's when dudes start bonding by sharing sex stories that I wonder just how different it is in comparison to ... have something to say, and I'll admit that they don't mind putting the pieces together over a span of time. I'm not

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Do you also consider this inversion? A tree is there. <--> There is a tree I personally think it is. These 2 websites will clear all all doubts on inversions. http://esl.about.com/od/advancedgrammar/a/inversion.htm

My daughter recently went to Suzhou for camping these days on a camping trip . I suppose I am should be relaxed and do doing what I want to do, but in fact I feel pretty lonely . in fact. At 5 pm every day, I receive the / a phone call from