I am so pleased to find this wonderful forum and so many friendly people here. Here is my motivation letter. Thanks for all advices. To the people who concern ， Thank you for your attention to these materials. Chemical and process

I am so glad to see this question and the responses. I have been living in France for the last 13 years and teaching English as a Second Language. This "go missing" usage was one of my favorite examples of the differences between British

Any but "fatally" will work, including serious ly. 'Fatally' is usually used with 'injury' rather than 'illness' and denotes death. 'Deeply' is questionable. Your choice is probably the best.

Hi. Can you please correct my personal statement for medical school. Thank you for your time and consideration. Normal 0 false false false EN-US X-NONE X-NONE

I have made a couple of minor suggestions on your excellent essay. The last paragraph could be more powerful, though, by being more specific in stating your aspirations. ----------------- "No! Not another disgusting lizard, Grandma!" I

Hi. Below is my personal statement for medical school. Please help correct it or provide comments :). Thank you for your time and consideration. __ "No! Not another disgusting lizard, Grandma!" I heartily protested as my grandma tried to

Uli: I have made a few suggetions. You could do a better job of organizing your letter in paragraphs with one main idea. Also, if you made shorter sentences, it may be less stilted and more fluent. Please also pay attention to punctuation. All

hi there please help me correcting my motivation letter.. thank you alot.. Dear Sir or Madam, I have had a very strong desire for learning everything new since I was small. This has become a habit and not solely a routine for me in my life that

Hi everybody! I'm writing a motivational letter to get a PhD post abroad. I'd like to make a good impression (of course), but my english is not so strong. Can you help me with the grammar or giving some suggestions about ? Thank you!!!

daniel: You have many good comments from other teachers. High school and College are very important to everyone all over the world. Everyone needs a good education in order to succeed in life. Without an education people would not be able to do