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Chesneymonkey — Tue, 07 Feb 2006 13:23:01 GMT

Hi Josephine,

I think you should register first, if you need help, but I am ill now and have nothing to do so here are my corrections:

Dear Sir/Madam

My name is Josefine, I am 24 years old and I will graduate with a Bachelorâs degree in sociology focusing on business in June. I am highly motivated to continue my studies at the *** University. I would like to do the Master study of human resource management. I have chosen because it combines business and social science, the fields I am already familiar with. By following this program I can broaden my basic knowledge and become more specialised.

To understand the organisational behaviour I did a dual apprenticeship at ABC GmbH for two years. This multinational enterprise offered me the opportunity to gain insight in the operational sequences of an industrial firm. I supported everyday business in many departments, such as human resource management, public relations, sales, marketing, accounting, logistics, customer services and the purchasing department. It required the ability to work productively and co-operatively in different kinds of group, to work under pressure, to manage with time well and of course IT skills. At the same time I received the theoretical background at the BSD Chamber of Commerce. My subjects were industrial business management, accounting, organisation, automatic data processing and economics and civics. In the department of human resource management I helped to prearrange and to accomplish the recruiting procedure which I found very interesting. I enjoyed working with people. A human resource manager must show qualities such as sensitiveness, reliability and of course a deep expert knowledge. I hope the apprenticeship at ABC Schweiz GmbH in Switzerland would help me to gain this knowledge.

Since I enjoyed working in the human resource management I developed my skills in social science by studying sociology focusing focus on business. At the University ** I attended courses regarding the organisational behaviour and structure of institutions, communication and industry. By doing research I became familiar with information retrieval and I learned to solve problems independently. It also enabled me to think analytically and critically. Due to my double degree program I participated in, I spent one year in **/Italy at the universitÃ degli studi di **. During this year I have learned Italian and I also received the Italian âLaurea Triennaleâ which is the equivalent of the German bachelor degree.

I spent nine months in Boston/USA at the EF International Language School where I had the chance to improve my English which I have benn studing already for nine years. To verify my knowledge I will take the TOEFL in April 2006 and I will send you results of this exam.
The experiences I made in the USA, Italy and Switzerland made me flexible and open-minded. In addition I acquired a multicultural understanding and the ability to interact with different natures.

The combination of practical and theoretical background I gained as well as the personal skills and key competences, make me suitable to apply for the program of human resource management. I am very enthusiastic to continue my studies in Great Britain because the education system is famous for its high quality and especially the *** University has a very good reputation forâ¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦..

Sincerely,

Josefine

Overall it is quite good, but concerning your age (I am 25), I donÂ´t think they would expect many experiences- two years are not so much. I would emphasize that the Master study would give you the opportunity to broaden them. From this letter it seems to me like you are so experienced you actually don Â´t need it. I think this letter should sound little bit more humble...But it is just my opinion. And I think the letter of motivation should be shorter and should have 3-4 paragraphes max.

So Good luck. bye Lucy

She, 24, attractive, searches for someone whoâ¦

Anonymous — Sun, 29 Jan 2006 12:11:45 GMT

â¦.. who could help me with my letter of motivation. I worked it over and I would appreciate it so much if you find 5 mins to correct it. PLEASE!!!
Thank you very much in advance!
Josefine

Dear Sir/Madam

My name is Josefine, I am 24 years old and in June I will graduate with a bachelorâs degree in sociology with focus on business. I am highly motivated to continue my studies at the *** University. It is the master of human resource management I chose because it combines business and social science which are fields I am already familiar with. By following this program I can enhance my basic knowledge to become specialised. The benefit I expect is to realize my intention to work in the sector of human resource management.

To understand the organisational behaviour I did a dual apprenticeship at ABC GmbH for two years. This multinational enterprise offered me the opportunity to gain insight the operational sequences of an industrial firm. I supported the everyday business in many departments, such as human resource management, public relations, sales, marketing, accounting, logistics, customer services and the purchasing department. It required the ability to work productively and co-operatively in different kinds of group, to work under pressure, to manage time well and of course IT skills.
At the same time I received the theoretical background at the BSD Chamber of Commerce. My subjects were industrial business management, accounting, organisation, automatic data processing and economics and civics.
n the department of human resource management I helped to prearrange and to accomplish the recruiting procedure which I found very interesting. I enjoyed working with people but I also learned that it can be very difficult. A human resource manager must show qualities such as sensitiveness, reliability and of course a deep expert knowledge. Meeting the character demands, I decided to gain expertise and to seek a career in this field.
The apprenticeship at ABC Schweiz GmbH in Switzerland reconfirmed my intention.

Since I enjoyed working in the human resource management I developed my skills in social science by studying sociology with focus on business. At the University ** I attended courses regarding the organisational behaviour and structure of institutions, communication and industry. By doing research I became familiar with information retrieval and I learned to solve problems independently. It also enabled me to think analytically and critically. Due to my double degree program I participated in I spent one year in **/Italy at the universitÃ degli studi di **. During this year I learned Italian and I also received the Italian âLaurea Triennaleâ which is the equivalent of the German bachelor degree.

I spent nine months in Boston/USA at the EF International Language School where I had the chance to improve my English which I studied already for nine years. To verify my knowledge I will take the TOEFL in April 2006 and hand the results in to you.
The experiences I made in the USA, Italy and Switzerland made me flexible and open-minded. In addition I acquired a multicultural understanding and the ability to interact with different natures.

The combination of practical and theoretical background I gained as well as the personal skills and key competences I bring with make me a suitable applicant for the program of human resource management. I am very enthusiastic to continue my studies in Great Britain because the education system is famous for its high quality and especially the *** University has a very good reputation forâ¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦â¦..

Sincerely,

Josefine

I need some help with my letter of motivation too

missmeteor — Wed, 01 Jun 2005 12:36:20 GMT

Please give me advice about ma letter of motivation

here it is :

Personal details
First name
Last name
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Subject: Inscription in Master d' Architecture
(My city), (date)

Dear Mister Director of registration,

After a French baccalaureat STT, I directed myself towards architecture, my passion, and I obtained my diploma of the first cycle of the studies of architecture, the DEFA.

This basic training enabled me to acquire a good knowledge of architecture and the manner of designing the buildings in a french way.

My African origins had already allowed me to attend the construction of traditional houses.
I would like now, while studying in a Canadian university, to widen my knowledge with North-American architecture and more precisely with the Canadian architecture which is different from that of France on many points.

At the time of my passage to "Pacific Gateway International College of Toronto" I had the honor to see me awarded as an " exceptional student".
I obtained the TOEFL as I passed to Toronto (Canada).

I think of having the necessary level to carry out a second cycle of studies in Canada and the portfolio attached should support my request favorably.

My final ambition is to return to work in my country of origin and for this reason I would like to be able to bind in a harmonious way the richness of indigenous traditional construction to the audacity of American architecture.

I thus have the honor, Mister the Director of registration, to request my inscription in Master of Architecture.
Hoping sincerely that this request will be accepted I remain

sincerely yours

( my Signature)

Enclosure: CV, copy of diplomas etc...
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Thank you so much for your help and this site.

Please help with my motivation letter

jjjana — Sun, 30 Jan 2005 22:35:03 GMT

Dear Moderators,
first of all I would like to express my great admiration to these pages and to all moderators here. Your work is wonderful â thank you.

I would like to ask you if you would be so kind and look through my motivation letter.

I am a graduate student at the university in the Czech republic and I applied for a scholarship for Summer English Language Course at the University of Malta. My English is quite poor, but I am doing my best. Writing of this letter is very hard for me, although I went through several helping-pages and this forum as well. The reasons are as follow:
- my language skills are bad
- my letter is quite special, because it is âonlyâ for a one month language course. That is why I could not use ordinary rules for writing these letters, because most of them are meant for those, who are eager to enter university or start new job.
- third, I already passed the first round which took place in the Czech rep. and now I was only asked to send my materials to the Malthesen side. They told me that even though there is still chance, that I will not be accepted, it is rather unlikely to happen. (which is a good news)

What I wanted to say is, that I know that my letter is much more poorer than the others in this forum, it is also much shorter. Nevertheless, I ask you for your kind help.
I am looking forward to your comments.
Kind regards Jana

Motivation Letter / Letter of Motivation / Cover Letter
(You see, I have even problems with the title)

Dear Sir or Madam:

With this letter, I would like to express my interest in taking part at the ISE (The International School of English) by the University of Malta.

Having looked through the materials of the Foreign Department of my university, I was very delighted to find the opportunity to spend one month learning English at the Universtity of Malta in this summer. I have decided to apply for this scholarship, because from my own experience I know, that the best way, how to learn a foreign language, is to spend some time in respective country.

After graduating from high school I started studying at the Whichever University in Wherever. I have always liked travelling and I also enjoy learning languages and talking to foreigners, which is the best way how to find out more about the country. Therefore I decided for Regional Geography specializing in European Union Studies. This branch is based on experiencing and learning about different culture backgrounds. That is why learning about Malta (as a new EU country), Maltese language, culture and people living there is an essential part of my university studies..

I have been learning English for more than 10 years and today I can say that Iâm on quite a good level. Three years ago I succesfully passed the FCE Cambridge Examination. I think, that language courses arranged here in my country are not very helpful for me any more and for further improvement I would need to spend some time abroad. I have also been learning German and Hungarian and I have already twice went through Summer University Courses of Hungarian language in Hungary in last two years. I really appreciated these experience.

If I got the opportunity to spend a month in this summer at the ISE in Malta, I would like to improve in my English to such a level, that I could pass a TOEFL examination after my return and next year I could apply for a scholarship offered through SOCRATES â ERASMUS programme. In addition to this, the experience of education in Malta would be extremly exciting and valuable for my studies and whole life.

Thank you for your time to consider my request, I am looking forward to your answer.

Yours Faithfully,

Jana XZ

Search results for 'tag:TOEFL tag:Letter of motivation' matching tags 'TOEFL' and 'Letter of motivation'

Re: She, 24, attractive, searches for someone whoâ¦

She, 24, attractive, searches for someone whoâ¦

I need some help with my letter of motivation too

Please help with my motivation letter

Re: She, 24, attractive, searches for someone whoâ¦

She, 24, attractive, searches for someone whoâ¦