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AVAILABLE TEACHING POSITIONS IN TURKEY!

ukla — Wed, 19 Sep 2007 11:14:40 GMT

UKLA ACADEMY - Language School / Turkey seeks experienced native English teachers to teach Skills Courses of General English, Conversational English, Business English, TOEFL / TOEIC Preparation Program and company courses.

Employment : Full Time
Start Date : IMMEDIATE (and December 2007)
Student Level : Adults

Requirements:
â¢ Native speakers of English
â¢ Bachelorâs degree
â¢ PGCE /Trinity TEFL/CELTA/ or equivalent certification

Salary & Benefits
â¢ A very competitive monthly wage (guaranteed hours)
â¢ fully furnished Shared apartment or housing allowance
â¢ 2 weeks summer holiday (plus time off every 8 weeks)
â¢ Contract renewal bonus
â¢ 12 Month contract
â¢ Residence & work permit and Social Security Scheme Registration (providing health care)
â¢ Teacher development workshops

Interested candidates should send their resume with a photo. They may contact

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Re: Kindly Reveiw Resume/CV for MD post

Clive — Sun, 19 Aug 2007 00:38:44 GMT

Hi,

Put your personal info at the top (eg name/address/phone/email)

You need an Objective section - what kind of job do you want?

SUMMARY

yes, bullets (black dots) are great

I'm going to comment and also make some suggested wording changes

But I'm not a doctor.

Clive

Highly motivated and dedicated, with excellent patient communications
Superior diagnostic skills and treatment planning, utilizing evidence-based medicine (speak about diagnostic skills?)
Adept at wide array of clinical procedures and skills
Outstanding research abilities - eager to do more research on comprehensive health care in the work environment (does this mean you want a job thatinvolves research?)
Effective decision-maker, with problem solving skills in highly stressful environments
Team-player â able to work well with other medical staff and patient families to ensure quality and individualized patient management
Committed to humanitarian, volunteer activities
Excellent familiarity with medical needs of rural areas (does this mean your objective is a rural job?)
Dedicated to keeping medical skills current, while still critically evaluating new ideas
Medical school listed in WHO and IMED directories (talk about yourself,not your school)
Computer literate (familiar with any medical or patient related software?)

WORK EXPERIENCE AND QUALIFICATIONS

2006 â 2007 x Health Clinic, City, country

General Practitioner (GP)

Compulsory National Service

use bullet points again

Provided care as needed for a regiment ? 999 people?: delivered primary health care services, executed comprehensive patient management, dealt with field emergencies, carried out general medical procedures, provided full medical and psychiatric consultation

Devised problem-oriented research to promote comprehensive medical health care and patient management with consequent institution of preventive and educational measures resulted in 27 percent reduction these kinds of figures and quantities are great in most daily encountered complaints

Delivered lectures about most common and important health issues for the staff what staff? other doctors?

Managed three other doctors, seven nurses, and ten physician assistants, monitored their work, coordinated personnel, scheduled night shifts

June, 2007 Ministry of Health and Medical Education

Permanent Medical Practice Certificate no. x

December, 2005 Medical Council,

Medical Council no. x

December, 2005 Ministry of Health and Medical Education

Temporary Medical Practice Certificate no. x

EDUCATION

Don't put the months, not important 23 September 1997 - August, 2005 Name of University *** Branch, Town, City, Country
Doctorate of Medicine (MD)
Medicine Cum. GPA: 16.75 (out of 20.00)
Thesis: *** association with *** Infection in pediatrics Grade: 20.00 (out of 20.00) I don't think you need to put grades

Internship: Name of Medical Center City, Country (23 September, 2003 â 25 August 2005)
Clerkship: Name of Medical Center, City, Country (February, 2001- September, 2003)

Research X Club P.O. Box: 454, Town, City, Country (2005 â present)
Researcher no. 23679

3rd National Medical Congress of Young Researchers, Town, City, Country (December, 2003)
Moderate Physical Activity in Female ...

PUBLICATIONS

European Conference, city, country (October, 2007)

Iron Deficiency association with â¦

3rd National Medical Congress of Young Researchers, city, country (December, 2004)

Moderate Physical Activity in Female Amateur Athletes and Insomnia

SKILLS

Language I think perhaps you shouldn't put the langage section ??

IELTS Overall Band Score 7.5 Listening 8.0 Reading 8.5 Writing 7.0 Speaking 7.0 (2007)

TOEFL Paper-Based Total Score 650 (out of 675) Test of Written English 5 (out of 6) (2006)

French Language Basic to Intermediate 12 month evening classes (July 2006 - present)

Clinical

Excellent doctor â patient communicational skills, knowledgeable in conducting evidence based medicine

Experienced in IV line insertion-injection, IM injection, Arterial Blood Gas (ABG) sampling, Paracentesis, Suturing, Tracheal Intubation, CPR, Nasogastric tube (NGT) insertion

Under supervision: Lumbar Puncture, Pleural Tap, and Plastering

Research

Knowledgeable in research methodology, experienced with research proposition and making and reviewing proposals, Teamwork conscious

Computer

Internet application in medicine, SPSS statistical software, Microsoft Windows XP, Microsoft Word, Microsoft Power Point, Microsoft Excel, Microsoft Internet Explorer, Mozila Firefox, Norton Antivirus, Kaspersky Antivirus, Bitdefender Antivirus, PCcillin Antivirus, Familiar with Adobe Photoshop, Adobe Acrobat, Microsoft FrontPage

Sports Perhaps don't put this.

Proficient in playing Basketball, Amateur Bodybuilding Experience, Experience with training bodybuilders

VOLUNTEER WORK

x Earthquake, city, country Red Crescent Organization (2004)

Two-week voluntary work in earthquake-stricken Bam, I wouldn't put these capitals >>> Involved in in-the-field: Triage, Primary Medical Care and Services, Basic Treatments, Assisting specialties in minor surgeries, Handling emergencies, CPR, Cooperation with Foreign Aid Groups and connecting them with Iranian health authorities and services

AWARDS AND ACCOMPLISHMENTS

health Clinic, city, country (2006 -2007)

Award ??? for outstanding accomplishments and services during 16 month work period

health Clinic, city, country (February 2007)

Internship in above rural area, implemented a survey to determine reasons why registered patients failed to follow-up their routine scheduled visits â Subsequent 23 percent attendance increase

3rd National Medical Congress of Young Researchers city, country (2004)

Best Article Award: Moderate Physical Activity â¦

Pre-Internship Clinical Knowledge Examination Nationwide (2003)

Above 99 percentile nationwide, Ranked 3rd among university all branches nationwide

5th National Universities Student Games: Gold medal in Basketball (summer, 2000)

Isfahan University intra-university Basketball Games: Bronze Medal (winter, 2001)

X Basketball Team: won several medals (nationally well-known basket ball team) (1993 - 1997)

PERSONAL INTERESTS Maybe omit this ???

Playing Basketball from very young age has taught me to appreciate team work and self-sacrifice and be well versed in time management. Other interests: Reading., Table Tennis, Foreign Languages, world history and civilizations, Internet, Climbing, Hiking, Music, Computer

Referees and Supporting Documentation Furnished Upon Request

Re: Kindly Reveiw Resume/CV for MD post

Anonymous — Sat, 18 Aug 2007 23:41:57 GMT

Hi Clive,

Thanks a lot for your realy precious feedback and time.

As you mentioned I made some major changes to the resume.I'd like to post it again.

please let me know how you think about this one

SUMMARY

A highly motivated and dedicated recognized for excelling doctor-patient communicational skills
Superior diagnostic skills and treatment planning with high appreciation for executing evidence-based medicine
Adept at a wide array of clinical procedures and skills
Outstanding research abilities - enthusiastic to implement researches and surveys to institute more comprehensive health care in the work environment
Effective decision-making and problem solving skills in highly stressful environments
A team-player â work in harmony with other medical staff and patient family to ensure best individually-based patient management
Committed to humanitarian activities with a two-week voluntary work in catastrophic Bam earthquake
Deep insight into and exposure to working environment and requirement of rural areas
Determined to connect learned medical knowledge to perpetual stream of medical updates, while being critical to them from content and methodology perspectives
Full of praise for sports â skillful basketball player â proficient with team work and time management
Medical school listed in WHO and IMED directories
IELTS score: 7.5-Computer literate

WORK EXPERIENCE AND QUALIFICATIONS

2006 â 2007 x Health Clinic, City, country

General Practitioner (GP)

Compulsory National Service

Delivered primary health care services - executed comprehensive patient management - dealt with emergency settings - carried out general medical procedures - provided full medical and psychiatric consultation

Devised problem-oriented researches to promote comprehensive medical health care and patient management with consequent institution of preventive and educational measures resulted in 27 percent reduction in most daily encountered complaints

Delivered lectures about the most common and important health issues for the staff

Worked with three other doctors, seven nurses, and ten physician assistances, responsible for monitoring their work, coordinating personnel, and scheduling night shifts

June, 2007 Ministry of Health and Medical Education

Permanent Medical Practice Certificate no. x

December, 2005 Medical Council,

Medical Council no. x

December, 2005 Ministry of Health and Medical Education

Temporary Medical Practice Certificate no. x

EDUCATION

23 September 1997 - August, 2005 Name of University *** Branch, Town, City, Country
Doctorate of Medicine (MD)
Medicine Cum. GPA: 16.75 (out of 20.00)
Thesis: *** association with *** Infection in pediatrics Grade: 20.00 (out of 20.00)

Internship: Name of Medical Center City, Country (23 September, 2003 â 25 August 2005)
Clerkship: Name of Medical Center, City, Country (February, 2001- September, 2003)

Researches X Club P.O. Box: 454, Town, City, Country (2005 â present)
Researcher no. 23679

3rd National Medical Congress of Young Researchers, Town, City, Country (December, 2003)
Moderate Physical Activity in Female ...

PUBLICATIONS

European Conference, city, country (October, 2007)

Iron Deficiency association with â¦

3rd National Medical Congress of Young Researchers, city, country (December, 2004)

Moderate Physical Activity in Female Amateur Athletes and Insomnia

SKILLS

Language

IELTS Overall Band Score 7.5 Listening 8.0 Reading 8.5 Writing 7.0 Speaking 7.0 (2007)

TOEFL Paper-Based Total Score 650 (out of 675) Test of Written English 5 (out of 6) (2006)

French Language Basic to Intermediate 12 month evening classes (July 2006 - present)

Clinical

Excellent doctor â patient communicational skills, knowledgeable in conducting evidence based medicine

Experienced in IV line insertion-injection, IM injection, Arterial Blood Gas (ABG) sampling, Paracentesis, Suturing, Tracheal Intubation, CPR, Nasogastric tube (NGT) insertion

Under supervision: Lumbar Puncture, Pleural Tap, and Plastering

Research

Knowledgeable in research methodology, experienced with research proposition and making and reviewing proposals, Teamwork conscious

Computer

Sports

Proficient in playing Basketball, Amateur Bodybuilding Experience, Experience with training bodybuilders

VOLUNTEER WORK

x Earthquake, city, country Red Crescent Organization (2004)

Two-week voluntary work in earthquake-stricken Bam, Involved in on-the-field: Triage, Primary Medical Care and Services, Providing Basic Treatments, Assisting specialties in minor surgeries, Handling with emergencies, CPR, Cooperation with Foreign Aide Groups and connecting them to Iranian health authorities and services

AWARDS AND ACCOMPLELISHMENTS

health Clinic, city, country (2006 -2007)

Honor praise because of the outstanding accomplishments and services during 16 month work period

Devised local research and survies, promoted health care system, fostered evidence based medicine practice

health Clinic, city, country (February 2007)

Internship in above rural area resulted in implementing a survey to sorting out the reasons for registered patient to fail to follow-up their routine scheduled visits â Subsequent 23 percent attendance increase

3rd National Medical Congress of Young Researchers city, country (2004)

Best Article Award: Moderate Physical Activity â¦

Pre-Internship Clinical Knowledge Examination Nationwide (2003)

Above 99 percentile nationwide, Ranked 3rd among university all branches Nationwide

5th National Universities Student Games: Gold medal in Basketball (summer, 2000)

Isfahan University intra-university Basketball Games: Bronze Medal (winter, 2001)

X Basketball Team: won several medals (nationally well-known basket ball team) (1993 - 1997)

PERSONAL INTERESTS

Referees and Supporting Documentation Furnished upon Request

Re: Kindly Reveiw Resume/CV for MD post

Clive — Fri, 17 Aug 2007 16:34:01 GMT

Hi,

Yes, I agree that my summary is too long, Shall I eliminate it and instead write a cover letter? I would just make it shorter and in point form. Think of it as a chance to highlight your strengths.

Is this summary suitable to be a cover letter? You could use parts of it, but focus on the purpose of a cover letter.

Say what job/kind of job you want

Introduce yourself and your skills briefly, in terms of why people should choose you for this job.

Ask for an interview or whatever action you want the agency to take

Do I need a cover letter for a recruiting agency after all? I don't know. I think it's probably a good idea.

What about the rest of CV? I've added a few comments.

There are also books etc. available that give sample CV's for professional people. Have you had a chance to look at such things? You should.

Best wishes, Clive

SH. O. GH.

175 between East 3-4 Ave. *** Street

Town, City, 654164, Country

+x 545 11431

s.x@gmal.com

SUMMARY

A highly motivated, determined, and dedicated 29 year old general practitioner (GP) with practical work experience in conducting evidence based medicine during my 16th month compulsory national service, when I was working as a GP in a health clinic handling most aspects of a GP responsibilities. My appreciation for importance of â evidence based medicineâ has led me to propose surveys and researches to gather appropriate data concerning most daily encountered medical problems. My commitment to humanitarian activities and my professional obligations led to a two-week voluntary work for Red Crescent during the very first days of catastrophic *** earthquake ( date), when I experienced working with the least equipment and facilities during a natural disaster of massive number of casualties and lots of emergencies. I spent two month of my internship and one month of my clerkship in a rural health clinic where I became familiar with the the country health system and policies in rural area while under supervision I was responsible for daily patient care and visits, handling and updating patients records, doing patients follow-ups, vaccination, pregnancy and pediatric routine cares, birth control, consultation, monitoring community health and addressing any health problem in the community. I proposed a survey during this invaluable experience of my internship to find out the results of failure of patient for following up their routing visits especially for pregnant women and juvenileâs which resulted in 23 percent increase in their attendance. The rest of my internship was in a large medical center in *** city during which we were trained for conducting a wide array of medical skills in all medical disciplines. I understand the value of research in medicine and have always been keen to conduct practical researches to solve some problems of community or bring new treatment to practice, which could be noticed from my research background. I have always been eager to connect my current knowledge to perpetual stream of new medical breakthroughs and practices through reading reputable medical journals, however my research background makes me to be critical to new article and research papers form content and methodology perspective. Playing Basketball has taught me the value of teamwork and to be more proficient in indispensable art of time management. I studied medicine in and graduated from a medical school listed in both WHO and IMED directory of medical schools.

WORK EXPERIENCE

*** Health Clinic, city, country ( 2006 - Jun, 2007)
General Practitioner (GP)
As a result of post graduation compulsory National Service, I served in the above health clinic having the full responsibility of a GP, handling primary health care issues , emergency settings, psychiatric cases, and being responsible for executing comprehensive patient workout, providing full medical and psychiatric consultation, figuring out patients diagnostic and therapeutic plan including: drug prescription, requesting x-rays and labs, referring to higher centers and appropriate specialties. My simultaneous enthusiasm for conducting evidence-based medicine in all aspects of my practice and medical research resulted to my proposition of carrying out problem-oriented surveys and local researches to promote comprehensive health care and patient management. As the result we decided to undertake some preventive and educational measures to reduce the number of patients with low back pain, knee pain, depression, peptic ulcer, headache altogether by 19 percent within an eight-month follow-up of the targeted population. I worked with three other doctors, seven nurses, and ten physician assistances, also being responsible for monitoring nurses and assistances work, coordinating personnel, and scheduling night shifts. Put it all in point form. Don't tell it like a story. eg

- responsible for this

- did that

- supervised these staff

- performed this kind of surgery

- etc. etc.

Ministry of Health and Medical Education, country (June, 2007) permanent medical Practice Certificate no.5683
.
Medical Council, Country P.O. Box: 358454 (December, 2005)
M.C. no. 3842

Ministry of Health and Medical Education, Country (December, 2005)
Temporary Medical Practice Certificate no.617

EDUCATION

Name of University *** Branch, Town, City, Country (23 September 1997 - August, 2005)
Doctorate of Medicine (MD)
Medicine Cum. GPA: 16.75 (out of 20.00)
Thesis: *** association with *** Infection in pediatrics Grade: 20.00 (out of 20.00)

Internship: Name of Medical Center City, Country (23 September, 2003 â 25 August 2005)
Clerkship: Name of Medical Center, City, Country (February, 2001- September, 2003)

First National University Medical Congress (October, 2000)
Internet Application in Medicine Workshop

Name of Pre-University Center, Town, City, Country (1995 â June, 1996)
Pre-University Diploma
Experimental Science Cum. GPA: 18.58 (out of 20.00)

Name of High School, Town, City, Country (1993 â June, 1995)
High School Diploma
Experimental Science Cum. GPA: 18.39 (out of 20.00)

Very often, people with advanced degrees omit info about lesser things like High School.

Researches X Club P.O. Box: 454, Town, City, Country (2005 â present)
Researcher no. 23679

SKILLS

Language
IELTS Overall Band Score 7.5 Listening 8.0 Reading 8.5 Writing 7.0 Speaking 7.0 (2007)

TOEFL Paper-Based Total Score 650 (out of 675) Test of Written English 5 (out of 6) (2006)

French Language Basic to Intermediate 12 month evening classes (2006 - present)

Clinical

Experienced in: Evidence-Based Clinical Practice, IV line insertion-injection, IM injection, Arterial Blood Gas (ABG) sampling, Paracentesis, Suturing, Tracheal Intubation, CPR, Nasogastric tube insertion (NGT).
Under supervision: Lumbar Puncture, Pleural Tap, and Plastering

Research

Knowledgeable in research methodology, Experienced with research proposition and proposals organization, Teamwork conscious.

Computer

Internet application in medicine, SPSS statistical software, Microsoft Windows XP, Microsoft Word, Microsoft Power Point, Microsoft Excel, Microsoft Internet Explorer, Mozila Firefox, Norton Antivirus, Kaspersky Antivirus, Bitdefender Antivirus, PCcillin Antivirus. Familiar with: Adobe Photoshop, Adobe Acrobat, Microsoft FrontPage.

Sports

Proficient in playing Basketball, Amateur Bodybuilding Experience, Experience with training bodybuilders

5th National Universities Student Games: Gold medal in Basketball (summer, 2000)

Name of University intra-university Basketball Games: Bronze Medal (winter, 2001)

Name of Youth Basketball Team: won several medals (nationally well-known basket ball team) (1993 - 1997)

VOLUNTEER WORK

*** Earthquake, Town, City, Country.
Name of Red Crescent Organization (200-)
Two-week voluntary work in earthquake-stricken name of town, Involved in on-the-field: Triage, Primary Medical Care and Services, Providing Basic Treatments, Assisting specialties in minor surgeries, Handling with emergencies, CPR, Cooperation with Foreign Aide Groups and connecting them to Iranian health authorities and services.

HONORS and AWARDS

3rd National Medical Congress of Young Researchers, Town, City, Country (December, 200-)
Best Article Award: Moderate Physical Activity in Female ...

Pre-Internship Clinical Knowledge Examination Nationwide (September, 200-)
Above 99 percentile nationwide, Ranked 3rd among *** University All branches Nationwide.

PERSONAL INTERESTS

Kindly Reveiw Resume/CV for MD post

Anonymous — Wed, 15 Aug 2007 17:05:32 GMT

I was recently requested by a recruitment agency to provide them with my CV, so they will be able to find me a job. I have prepared this CV for that propose.
I highly appreciate if you review my CV and tell me about every kind of errors that I have made from the content to style, even punctuation, address, grammar, vocabulary, use of capital letters and articles, and every kind suggestion, or whatever you think about it.
Many thanks again for your invaluable feedbacks and assistance.

SH. O. GH.

175 between East 3-4 Ave. *** Street

Town, City, 654164, Country

+x 545 11431

s.x@gmal.com

SUMMARY

WORK EXPERIENCE

*** Health Clinic, city, country ( 2006 - Jun, 2007)
General Practitioner (GP)
As a result of post graduation compulsory National Service, I served in the above health clinic having the full responsibility of a GP, handling primary health care issues , emergency settings, psychiatric cases, and being responsible for executing comprehensive patient workout, providing full medical and psychiatric consultation, figuring out patients diagnostic and therapeutic plan including: drug prescription, requesting x-rays and labs, referring to higher centers and appropriate specialties. My simultaneous enthusiasm for conducting evidence-based medicine in all aspects of my practice and medical research resulted to my proposition of carrying out problem-oriented surveys and local researches to promote comprehensive health care and patient management. As the result we decided to undertake some preventive and educational measures to reduce the number of patients with low back pain, knee pain, depression, peptic ulcer, headache altogether by 19 percent within an eight-month follow-up of the targeted population. I worked with three other doctors, seven nurses, and ten physician assistances, also being responsible for monitoring nurses and assistances work, coordinating personnel, and scheduling night shifts.

Ministry of Health and Medical Education, country (June, 2007) permanent medical Practice Certificate no.5683

Medical Council, Country P.O. Box: 358454 (December, 2005)
M.C. no. 3842

Ministry of Health and Medical Education, Country (December, 2005)
Temporary Medical Practice Certificate no.617

EDUCATION

Internship: Name of Medical Center City, Country (23 September, 2003 â 25 August 2005)
Clerkship: Name of Medical Center, City, Country (February, 2001- September, 2003)

First National University Medical Congress (October, 2000)
Internet Application in Medicine Workshop

Name of Pre-University Center, Town, City, Country (1995 â June, 1996)
Pre-University Diploma
Experimental Science Cum. GPA: 18.58 (out of 20.00)

Name of High School, Town, City, Country (1993 â June, 1995)
High School Diploma
Experimental Science Cum. GPA: 18.39 (out of 20.00)

Researches X Club P.O. Box: 454, Town, City, Country (2005 â present)
Researcher no. 23679

SKILLS

Clinical

Research

Knowledgeable in research methodology, Experienced with research proposition and proposals organization, Teamwork conscious.

Computer

Internet application in medicine, SPSS statistical software, Microsoft Windows XP, Microsoft Word, Microsoft Power Point, Microsoft Excel, Microsoft Internet Explorer, Mozila Firefox, Norton Antivirus, Kaspersky Antivirus, Bitdefender Antivirus, PCcillin Antivirus. Familiar with: Adobe Photoshop, Adobe Acrobat, Microsoft FrontPage.

Sports

VOLUNTEER WORK

HONORS and AWARDS

PERSONAL INTERESTS

Re: I need help ....It s urgenntt.....Please help me to correct my cover letter

Doll — Mon, 11 Jun 2007 17:56:42 GMT

Dear Mr.....,

I'm writing to you to express my motivation to join SCAN section next year. Reading in the document of presentation, I was motivated to forward my resume to see if my qualification might be possible to join SCAN.

As we know, SCAN is a section that provides a multi-cultural environment and an international linguistic dimension. All SCAN students benefit from the same high-level scientific teaching with the specific feature of the SCAN section being that lectures, course work and practical classes are in English. I didn't understand what you meant.

Actually, English is the key of the international communication. In the world of engineer, english is also the key giving access to the fortune of scientific knowledge. To become a successful engineer, in the international environment , it might be necessary to master english. That is also my aim .Joining SCAN, I will have a chance to perfect my english, to discover science, as I always love to, with a new methods and a new points of view: the anglophone sciences. And through sciences, does it also a great way to discover an anglophone culture?

"Enthusiastic" was how I characterized my feelings towards SCAN section. As I always love Sciences and Foreign languages, during my secondary and high school, I have learnt sciences in French. With such an experience, I know how effective and interesting will it be, study these scientific subjects through the media of English. Nothing is easy, and SCAN section motivates me also by its challenges.

I am confident in my ability to study in english. For the first year at ASINSA, I had english course with the others french friends ,in the class 2/4. At the end of the first school years, I had .... points for my Toefl.
I believe having a necessary english level that can make sure of my ability to study at SCAN. About the scientific level, I am also ready to confront the new obstacle next year.

Please consider me as a serious candidate for SCAN section next year. I could be reached at the e- mail address below
I look forward to hearing from you and thank you for your consideration.
Yours sincerely,

Look over the highlighted places.

..........
Group ....
e mail: .....

I need help ....It s urgenntt.....Please help me to correct my cover letter

Casiloto — Mon, 11 Jun 2007 13:29:06 GMT

Hello everybody,

Because english is not my mother tongue and I have to write a cover letter in english, so i need some correction and comments about it.Please help me to correct my letter .Thank you very much .(Thank you for correcting it as soon as possible, because it' s 16/6 the deadline for applications...( ..)

Here is my letter:

Mr.....
SCAN coordinator
INSA de LYON
20 Albert Einstein

Dear Mr.....,

Actually, english is the key of international communication. In the world of engineer, english is also the key giving access to the fortune of scientific knowledge. To become a successful engineer, in the international environment , it might be necessary to master english. That is also my aim .Joining SCAN, I will have a chance to perfect my english, to discover science, as I always love to, with a new methods and a new points of view: the anglophone sciences. And through sciences, does it also a great way to discover an anglophone culture?

"Enthusiastic" was how I characterized my feelings towards SCAN section. As I always love Sciences and Foreign languages, during my secondary and high school, I have learnt sciences in French. With such an experience, I know how effective and interesting will it be, study these scientific subjects through the media of English. Nothing is easy, and SCAN section motivates me also by its challenges.

..........
Group ....
e mail: .....

Qualified Native English Teachers required

ukla — Tue, 01 Mar 2005 15:36:33 GMT

UKLA Academy is looking for native ELT teachers with university degrees and recognized TEFL qualifications (CELTA or equivalent) to teach General English, TOEFL, Business English and English for Academic Purposes. Experience outside of the English teaching field is an advantage. We are offering full time positions (approximately 25 hours per week) to teach a variety of levels. The suitable candidate should be energetic, self-motivated, flexible, and able to work as part of a team and should be available to start in April 2005 (or in September 2005). He or she will receive the following:
- Orientation including collection from Istanbul Ataturk Airport
- Basic Turkish lessons
- A furnished, shared apartment
- A competitive, local salary based on experience ($ 1000 -$1300)
- Continued developmental support

If you are interested please could you send us your resume attaching a passport photo and a reference letter?

Starting: April 1, 2005 (2 positions)
Sep. 1, 2005 (4 positions)

UKLAAcademy, Language School
Bursa, Turkey
E-Mail :
Web :
Tel No: +90 224 232 14 40
Fax No: +90 224 232 14 41

Native English Teachers wanted

Guest — Mon, 28 Feb 2005 15:27:08 GMT

UKLA Academy is looking for native ELT teachers with university degrees and recognized TEFL qualifications (CELTA or equivalent) to teach General English, TOEFL, Business English and English for Academic Purposes. Experience outside of the English teaching field is an advantage. We are offering full time positions (approximately 25 hours per week) to teach a variety of levels. The suitable candidate should be energetic, self-motivated, flexible, and able to work as part of a team and should be available to start in April 2005 (or in September 2005). He or she will receive the following:
- Orientation including collection from Istanbul Ataturk Airport
- Basic Turkish lessons
- A furnished, shared apartment
- A competitive, local salary based on experience ($ 1000 -$1300)
- Continued developmental support

If you are interested please could you send us your resume attaching a passport photo and a reference letter?

UKLAAcademy, Language School
Bursa, Turkey
E-Mail :
Web :
Tel No: +90 224 232 14 40
Fax No: +90 224 232 14 41

Is this CV clear and attractive enough for applying a degree?

faux_air — Tue, 07 Dec 2004 05:48:41 GMT

Dear all,
Would you please check the following CV for applying a degree in
Industrial Engineering in France?
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Resume

GOAL
To pursue a Master of Engineering ( DiplÃ´me dâIngÃ©nieur) in ********** at University of ***********

PERSONAL INFORMATION
Full Name:
D.O.B: Birth Place: China
Gender: Female Citizenship: P.R.China
Telephone: Email:

EDUCATION , AWARDS AND ACTIVITIES IN CAMPUS:

l Experience
09/1999~06/2003: Bachelor of Engineering (awarded in 06/2003)
****** University of Science & Technology
Major: Automation
09/1996~06/1999: ****high school of **** City

l Awards & Honors
09/2002 Third Prize of Scholarship for the term (09/2001~06/2002)
10/2000 Excellent Studentsâ Cadre
10/1999 Fellowship for Outstanding Students in Freshman Drill

l Extracurricular Activities
09/2001--09/2002 President of the Propagand Department at the Student Union in the Department of Automation.

l Part Time Job Experience
07/2002~04/2003 Internship in ******Electronic Co., Ltd. working as Production Management & Coordination Assistant of ****** products.
08/2001~05/2002 Worked as part-time Sales Representative for ***** Cosmetic Company
08/2000~03/2001 Worked part-timely in ****Hair Salon for its advertising

WORK EXPERIENCE AND ACHIEVENMENT

l Experience
07/2003~Present ********* Color Display System Ltd. (Monitor Research and
Development Center for LG Electronics)
Occupation: Global Account Management

l Job Description
This position is to be performing as the window of the company to communicate and with the valuable customers for OEM products (OEM-original Equipment Manufacturer) while coordinate and management with other domestic and oversea departments to:
1) Planning and schedule the new projects, while managing and cooperating with other departments to keep the schedule.
2) Recording and managing monthly production quantity to match the production order
3) Organizing related departments to solve quality issues happened in production or after sales.

l Projects Achievement
1) **** 17â FCDT CRT 71KHZ ; 17â FCDT CRT 85KHZ (with speakers)
2) **** 17â FCDT CRT 71 HZ
3) **** 17â FCDT CRT 71 HZ
4) **** 17â FCDT CRT 85KHZ ; 19â LCD
(**** are the name of American Brands we produce the products for)

l Awarded Training and Education
1) Special oversea training were offered, due to my hard work and outstanding performance
A) 10/2003~11/2004 Training in South Korean for GEM Biz.
B) 8/2004~9/2004 HPI ( High Potential Individual) Training in South Korean

2) Six Sigma method education and passed the internal examination, ranking 2nd in 67
Six Sigma is the most popular method utilized in production area to keeping improving production quality and speed. Also it applied in all problems solving process and business process.

LANGUAGES
l English: Excellent in reading, writing, speaking and listening.
TOEFL: Total: *** (TWE: **) (05/2002); BEC (Vantage): ** (11/2003)
07/2003---Present Use English daily working with foreign customers and colleagues.
10/2002---Present Tour Guide for guests of native speakers of English in my city.

l French: under taking 550-hour course in *****Language Institution.

COMPUTER SKILLS
Language: C/C++, VB
Application: MTLAP, Auto CAD, PROTEL 99, Office, Photoshop, and firework,

INTERESTS
Chinese Traditional calligraphy & Paining, International Standard Dance, Swimming, Tour, Writing, Cooking
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I don't know if it's too wordy or boring for a professor to read it or
if it is attractive enough for me to get the admission.

Thanks a lot

Rosmeary
Dec. 7th, 2004