By Tenses, Motivation letters

Hello everbody i am a new member and this is my second message,so i salute you all, i have some problemes due to my poor english in writing a Phd motivation letter that i want to send directly to proffessors, i will be thankfull for your suggestions and i m sending you a letter that i have...

hello dear members i need help for my Phd motivation letter, could you please make the appropriate corrections .thank you Dear Sir The purpose of this letter is not only to describe my educational and professional background, but also to focus your attention on how motivated I am to...

.I have underlined some problem areas. One point-- usually, you should use simple past tense where you have used present perfect:Motivation Letter:The Graduate programme in Finance at Hampton College is according my target to develop my skills on the financial field for a knowledge improvement...

Can anyone help me please with this letter? Grammar and concordance for example?Motivation Letter:The Graduate programme in Finance at Hampton College is according my target to develop my skills on the financial field for a knowledge improvement and a career progression on the financial...

Hello, I'll be really glad if somebody checks my motivation letter draft too. I've gone through this forum and copied some ideas and even senteces into that. I'm not sure if I can ask you also for grammar correction, but if somebody correct (maybe "fills in" is more appropriate, plenty of them...

GG, thank you for your reply. The above sentense is a very fascinating one but the position I would like to apply for, is actually a project manager with ability to develop simple videos and animations. I have misled you with my first post. I'm sorry for that!

Hi, now I have some questions: * In the sentence "and already in high school they brought me to the decision that I would like to continue my future studies..." you placed "even" instead of "already", so we don't use already in this context? Because in Hebrew and Russian it's the most suitable...

Thank you very much Clive! Your edits was VERY useful. But now I have some questions: * In the sentence "and already in high school they brought me to the decision that I would like to continue my future studies..." you placed "even" instead of "already", so we don't use already in this...

Anonymous wrote: I am not so good in English but I have to write a motivation letter. I am not sure wheter my grammer is correct or not. Could anybody please correct some sentenses? "My curiosity for medical progresses aroused because of my parents who work as nurses." "One of my priorities...

Much better, Shanawaz. I have suggested just a few further changes in bold below, to smooth and tighten the text up a bit, and to lessen the hyperbole:Statement of PurposeI am currently employed in a very promising position in Bangalore at Molecular Connections Pvt. Ltd. I have been recognized...