By Tenses, Punctuation

You changed the tense. Did you mean to? If you meant "When you are ready, I am waiting for your answer." then, yes, it's very similar in meaning to "Whenever you are ready, I'm waiting for your answer.", and the two are often interchangeable. "Whenever" has...

Thanks, Avangi for your generous comment. Yes, I'm really poor at punctuation - something to work on. By the way, Is your last post for me? "be sure to shred the paperwork"GG, I noticed a sudden change of tense in your writing. I love it but kind of afraid to use the style for fear...

Thanks Goodman! Could anyone tell me, in descriptive writing what tense usually writer choose. And Guys please reply my 2nd post last two sentenses as well. And explain we can separate verb and subject i.e mirror and curtain, by using comma for emphasis like Feebs did? Third sentence, I have...

Hi. For the record, I agree with Clive, but I'd like to try a different analysis, just for the fun of it: "With(out) Compaq, staying home has never been this fun." Core sentence: Staying home has never been this fun. Look at two components and how they relate to the moment of...

Many errors. I suggest you use proper punctuation and capitalization, and keep your tense consistent -- for a start.

"The Change of the Characteristics in the passage from The Hours" The passage from the novel The Hours by Michael Cunningham is intriguing. The passage illustrates the difference between the character's characteristics in different time settings: past and present. This difference is...

I don't think you read the last correction at all. I am only going to highlight errors. It's up to you to fix them. Our work here is done. You have changed things that you should not have. You now have tenses all over - past in one place, present in another. You seem to have removed spaces...

My assignment is to type a Descriptive/Informative Essay. I am graded 50% on content, 40% on grammar and mechanics, and 10% on style. Could anyone read my essay and suggest some corrections? Please bold or make corrections visible. The help will be greatly appreciated.Here are grammatical...

Hungry wrote:Dear Teachers, Please have a look at the following short letter and make sure the words sound professional and sentence structure, flow, punctuation, mood, andtense are presented in a manner that makes sense, while looking out forinconsistencies.So many thanks in advance. Best...

Dear Teachers, Please have a look at the following text and make sure the words sound professional and sentence structure, flow, punctuation, mood, and tense are presented in a manner that makes sense, while looking out for inconsistencies.So many thanks in advance.Best regards,Hungry The...