Hi, Are these sentences right given they have mixed past and present tense- 1.While asking her broker to sell her shares immediately, it looks like it didn’t cross her mind even once that she was acting on an insider tip. Should

Hi, I would like to improve on my letter. This letter is to a pastry shop owner, who isn't pleased with the comments on the my blog. I'm trying to resolve this dispute, as best as i can. Where can I improve? How do I sound convincing,

Hi, I would like to improve on my letter. This letter is to a pastry shop owner, who isn't pleased with the comments on the my blog. I'm trying to resolve this dispute, as best as i can. Where can I improve? How do I sound convincing,

I struggle with giving each of my characters a unique voice and while I realize there are books and articles covering this, I don't feel like my characters have a great voice. Can anyone offer any tips or insights? * Read your screenplay out

Hello. Thank you for giving me some ideas. I correct some of your suggestions that you highlighted, but I still do not know how to correct the rest of them. Could you please give me a hint how to fix them? Thank you! I really appreciate your help.

Yes, that's right, *that* "Roots". Believe it or not, I had never seen it before outside of a few snippets of the first episode in high school history class.This miniseries is not quite killed stone dead, but badly crippled enough by

At dinner that day he says at the table, says it casually to show it's an everyday thing, "I'll be going over to my best friend's house one of these days." Hoping his parents will take the bait and ask him who his best friend

Hi to all. I am taking a very important exam this coming October. I feel that my writing skills are still not up to standard. My grammar is okay but my vocabulary needs much improvement. Also, I do not attend any writing courses or english

I know Harry from online. He read my script tips ... want it to be a huge best seller. - Bill I saw him speak along with my friend Juliet Blackwell. He was super nice, said he was nervous after but ... It messes with my mind that all these print

I know Harry from online. He read my script tips every day, maybe took a class from me at Expo, ... will be posting about it all over - because I want it to be a huge best seller. - Bill I saw him speak along with my friend Juliet Blackwell. He