Hi, Are these sentences right given they have mixed past and present tense- 1.While asking her broker to sell her shares immediately, it looks like it didn’t cross her mind even once that she was acting on an insider tip. Should

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Hi, I would like to improve on my letter. This letter is to a pastry shop owner, who isn't pleased with the comments on the my blog. I'm trying to resolve this dispute, as best as i can. Where can I improve? How do I sound convincing,

Hi, I would like to improve on my letter. This letter is to a pastry shop owner, who isn't pleased with the comments on the my blog. I'm trying to resolve this dispute, as best as i can. Where can I improve? How do I sound convincing,

In summary, we who want to speak English fluently mustn't read text book. Listen and answer. Don't study a single word... Everthing has to start at hearing and dissecting from native English speakers. Is that right?

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You have more words than you need. The man helped Susan repair the car. She was glad and thanked him for his help. She gave him a tip. A tip is money, so there is no need to mention money when talking about a tip. CJ

I struggle with giving each of my characters a unique voice and while I realize there are books and articles covering this, I don't feel like my characters have a great voice. Can anyone offer any tips or insights? It's very easy to become

I struggle with giving each of my characters a unique voice and while I realize there are books and articles covering this, I don't feel like my characters have a great voice. Can anyone offer any tips or insights? Do you mean dialogue? If you

I struggle with giving each of my characters a unique voice and while I realize there are books and articles covering this, I don't feel like my characters have a great voice. Can anyone offer any tips or insights? * Read your screenplay out