Hello ladies, I'm taking advantage of Vesper's nap to write this. Today , my husband Sam came home from a gig and informed me that his sister Lillie is getting married on very short notice. The wedding is in six weeks . Lillie's fiance is

Hello ladies, I'm taking advantage of Vesper's napping to write this. Today my husband Sam came home from a gig and informed me that his sister Lillie is getting married, very short notice. The wedding is in six weeks Lillie's fiance

I'm uncertain as to whether my use of the colon is correct or random puntuation mark scatter. :) Oh, if I've made any other errors I'm happy to be corrected. Thank you. I've signed up for Martin's Money

I am an American school teacher with two degrees and 23 years of experience. This sentence is a classic example of a "run-on" sentence. I get tired before I get to the end of it (LOL). One hint is to break it up at the comma. Remember,

Hello, I would need someone to go over my correction, the part in bold, i'm correcting this for a student, i've just gotten my tofel exam and working to be a teacher, if someone could look at this, i wouldn't want to give it back with

I went over the passage (and dictation) once again. I think the dictator means the forefoot is tender- the mid- and hindfoot are okay. ( We are supposed to use minimal punctuation.) Thank you for your time. " On physical examination,

Daden - Pay attention to possessives. Eleanor Roosevelt was born on October 11, 1884 , (a comma is not necessary) in New York City. She was the first of six children born to by Anna Hall and Elliot Roosevelt. Eleanor early years were awful

I'd suggest adding three hyphens. For some tips on using hyphens, have a look here: http://grammar.ccc.commnet.edu/grammar/marks/hyphen.htm

Hi Anon You need to at least try to do this first. After that we can give you input about what you've done. Tip: The very first error is a punctuation error.