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Hi, I would like to improve on my letter. This letter is to a pastry shop owner, who isn't pleased with the comments on the my blog. I'm trying to resolve this dispute, as best as i can. Where can I improve? How do I sound convincing,

Hi, I would like to improve on my letter. This letter is to a pastry shop owner, who isn't pleased with the comments on the my blog. I'm trying to resolve this dispute, as best as i can. Where can I improve? How do I sound convincing,

I struggle with giving each of my characters a unique voice and while I realize there are books and articles covering this, I don't feel like my characters have a great voice. Can anyone offer any tips or insights? I'm doing something that

I struggle with giving each of my characters a unique voice and while I realize there are books and articles covering this, I don't feel like my characters have a great voice. Can anyone offer any tips or insights? * Read your screenplay out

Hello ladies, I'm taking advantage of Vesper's nap to write this. Today , my husband Sam came home from a gig and informed me that his sister Lillie is getting married on very short notice. The wedding is in six weeks . Lillie's fiance is

Hello ladies, I'm taking advantage of Vesper's napping to write this. Today my husband Sam came home from a gig and informed me that his sister Lillie is getting married, very short notice. The wedding is in six weeks Lillie's fiance

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