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-Thanks for your help, I'm not only glad for finding this forum, but also appreciate the time between your responses. I hope you keep helping others and making good karma. The actual email would now be like this, as i said last night i will send this at night so any other advice will be...

JayT wrote: Dear MountainHiker: First of All I would like to appreciate you for the previous letter...I'm trying to apply for a new programme and basically I went with the format of the last letter but I think I need to have change completely the fifth paragraph...Could you please review...

I think the answer is neither NATO nor Cold War. But ,thinking profoudly it may have some relations with that. Especially after the fall of Seviet regime, Armenia declared that they dont accept the treaty about Turkish and Armenian border. But neverthless the relations were not much bad until...

Here are my ideas. This does seem fairly long to me. Maybe it's possible to have less detail in some sections. (I was not trying to change your formatting/spacing. Please disregard any changes in that area.) ------------------------------------------- OBJECTIVE I am looking for a...

Hi, I am a CELTA qualified (British Council, Delhi) EFL teacher and have a Masters degree in French (Delhi University, Delhi). Regarding TEFL experience, I have worked as English Assistant at Lycee Marcel Rudloff, Strasbourg, France. At present, I am working as a Freelance Translator and...

Dear MountainHiker: First of All I would like to appreciate you for the previous letter...I'm trying to apply for a new programme and basically I went with the format of the last letter but I think I need to have change completely the fifth paragraph...Could you please review it and tell me what...

Dear MountainHiker: I made a few changes wherever I thought might be confusing...Could you please review it one more time especially the Eighth paragraph with more careful consideration... This time I am afraid of posing lots of questions;) Best regards, Jay T ...

Dear mountainHiker: I did better. please take a look at that now and tell me should I take paragraphs two and seven out of my letter? now, the general format of the letter is correct or not? Best regards, Jay T ...

Dear MountainHiker: I did the changes as you recommended... To make it clear for you, I have not completed MBA programme in US, but I worked in best financial organization in US. as I told you earlier, I left US two years ago and since then I didn't speak English and as you know lack of...

Hello everyone! Thanks for your input! Your comments definitely helped! Thesis Paragraph - Agreed. It was MUCH too wordy and didn't get right to the heart of the matter. That has been changed. Theology-related - Nope. My intent is not to introduce religion or to convert anyone. My intent is...