OK, here are a few specific things I see that may be problems in the first few paragraphs. 1st paragraph - Is going to movies a social standard? Or is it an activity? Your first sentence is 3 lines long. It is difficult to read and needs to be

Thanks Goodman! Could anyone tell me, in descriptive writing what tense usually writer choose. And Guys please reply my 2nd post last two sentenses as well. And explain we can separate verb and subject i.e mirror and curtain, by using comma for

In dialogue, punctuation goes inside the quotation marks: "I know," he replied, "but I got lost." Quoting titles - either underline, or italicize, or put into quotation marks. You need to go through and check - there are many missing quotation

Forgive me, but what do you mean by a “dash.” All the examples here show two hyphens. These are not dashes. There are three types of dashes, namely Hyphens, Em Dashes and En Dashes The hyphen is the shortest of the three and is used most

Hello, Tony. Here are some notes: Comma not period after Finch in the title. No colon after By racism has occurred Leave two blank spaces after the period at the end of a sentence Mockingbird is one word Underline or italicize the

It is not necessary to underline titles. In this context, the comma is placed outside the inverted commas .

2. What needs to be done to correct the following sentence? Have you read the article entitled, "Increase Your Vocabulary?" a) The sentence is correctly punctuated. b) Remove the comma after entitled and place the question mark outside

2. What needs to be done to correct the following sentence? Have you read the article entitled, "Increase Your Vocabulary?" a) The sentence is correctly punctuated. b) Remove the comma after entitled and place the question mark outside

Can you check my homework before I turn it in. 1. Which sentence is punctuated correctly? a) The cost, and size of the computers are decreasing, almost as rapidly as processing power is increasing. b) Database management systems were

1. Which sentence is punctuated correctly? a) The cost, and size of the computers are decreasing, almost as rapidly as processing power is increasing. b) Database management systems were originally large, unwieldy, and difficult to use.