I have to write an english essay based on Flowers for Algernon, and we read the short story version of it in class. I'm writing the name of the story in the middle of the essay: Flowers for Algernon is a short story written by Daniel Keyes.

OK, here are a few specific things I see that may be problems in the first few paragraphs. 1st paragraph - Is going to movies a social standard? Or is it an activity? Your first sentence is 3 lines long. It is difficult to read and needs to be

1) What should I replace my work with?-- No title is required for TOEFL essays; if you need a title, it should announce to the reader the topic of your essay. 2) the parentless children-- these are not previously mentioned or specific children

Mister Micawber wrote: I have underlined some problem areas, vocabulary or grammar, and added some notes after some. All in all, your presentation is not very humane: My work: (Am I right to write "my work" here? -- No ) Were I an

can some one please help me take a look to see what mistakes do i have and how can i correct them? i want to learn my mistakes. this is part of my essay please help me underline my mistakes. Since husband and wife think themselves are right,

Anonymous wrote: Filmography = a collection of writings about motion pictures, esp. detailed essays dealing with specific films. Please explain the underline expression. I'm not sure what part of it you don't understand, but it would

Filmography = a collection of writings about motion pictures, esp. detailed essays dealing with specific films. Please explain the underline expression.

Do I underline a movie title in an essay about myself?

hello Ampollita, i think your essay is far from clean and you're going to need some time to work on it. i didnt underline or otherwise mark your mistakes because in that case I should have highlighted the whole text. lets see if it helps...

Hello, Tony. Here are some notes: Comma not period after Finch in the title. No colon after By racism has occurred Leave two blank spaces after the period at the end of a sentence Mockingbird is one word Underline or italicize the