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Hi, Could I please ask you to review my letter and indicate what needs to be changed in order for this to come across as a letter from a professional. I am professional and qualified in what I do, I am just not so good with words. I am an alternative health practitioner (Ayurveda) and I want to...

Dear sir or madam, Iam writing to apply for the master’s Degree in philosophy of international Health. I learned about this programme through web search and friends who are now studying at your university. My aim is to work and contribute towards the international standard of care and...

Hi bwalya, Well done on your research. I am writing to apply for Master of Public Health. Throughout my secondary school I was most interested in heath related courses. I obtained a Diploma in Environmental Health at xx where? . From (date) to (date) I studied at Port Elizabeth...

Dear Moderator, After a lot thinking and critically reading through others motivation letters , this is what I have come up with. I have a strong feeling its missing the touch. NEED HELP !! I am writing to apply ofr Master of Public Health. Throughout my secondary school I was most...

Dear nona the brit or MountainHiker, Could you please help me with my cover letter? I am in France now and it's sad but I can't find here anybody who speaks English good enough to help me :( That's why I am asking you to give me a hand. I did my best but I still have many doubts if my...

Could you please have a look at my motivation letter and provide me with some suggestions, that would be most helpfull! Thank you very much in advance! Kind regards, Astrid Dear Sir/Madam, I am a motivated student at The Hague University of European Studies and about to graduate...

Dear Sir or Madam, Having a flair for marketing, I wish to apply for a MA programme in marketing in September 2005. I will be graduating with BA degree in International Business from Vaasa Polytechnic University in May 2005. My career objective is to become a faculty member at a leading...

Dear Mr. MountainHiker Thank you very much again for your time and precious suggestions. I have made some modifications. Could you please take a look again? Paragraph one is about my objective, paragraph two is about what I have learned in previous university regarding other aspects,...

Wang Mengjie (Ms.), First, I trust you have read the top two posts in this section of the forum? I want to be sure that you are willing to have you information available to world at large and have it remain so. Second, your essay is very chaotic. It needs some structure. You need to...

Dear sir or madam I have just completed my personal statement, or motivationa letter for applying for a Ma Programme in Marketing at a university in UK. I am anxious about it as the high admission requirements by the school. Could you please check it for me, please? Yours faithfully, ...