For the rest, Kela, I'm going to give you hints (in blue), so that you can try to improve things yourself. (A repeated problem is your use of indefinite pronouns--for instance, writing 'he' when the reader doesn't know which person 'he' refers to .
Rommel described himself as a boy who...
ESL Essay, Writing World
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davkett
3 yr 77 days ago
Commas, Tenses, Universities, Punctuation, Nouns, Verbs, Plurals, Literature, Articles, Past Tenses, Pronouns, Prepositions, Adverbs