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<rss version="2.0" xmlns:dc="http://purl.org/dc/elements/1.1/" xmlns:slash="http://purl.org/rss/1.0/modules/slash/" xmlns:wfw="http://wellformedweb.org/CommentAPI/"><channel><title>Search results for 'tag:Universities tag:Pronouns' matching tags 'Universities' and 'Pronouns'</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/search/pro.htm?q=tag%3aUniversities+tag%3aPronouns&amp;tag=Universities,Pronouns&amp;orTags=0</link><description>Search results for 'tag:Universities tag:Pronouns' matching tags 'Universities' and 'Pronouns'</description><dc:language>en-US</dc:language><generator>CSMOD (Build: 3170.31378)</generator><item><title>Re: I/me</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/IMe/2/zlpmv/Post.htm#476191</link><pubDate>Tue, 12 Feb 2008 19:25:54 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:476191</guid><dc:creator>Tanit</dc:creator><description>&lt;br /&gt;&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/englishforums/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt; &lt;strong&gt;Kooyeen&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;br /&gt;As for using subject pronouns, I would never say &amp;quot;He&amp;#39;s taller than I&amp;quot; ... and I believe practically no native speaker (American, at least) would ever say such sentences.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Hi K,&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Thanks for you reply.&lt;br /&gt;I can assure you I heard it in the UK, mainly from a couple of teachers at the University ... and they DON&amp;#39;T teach English &lt;img src="http://www.englishforums.com/emoticons/emotion-5.gif" alt="Wink" title="Wink" /&gt; (one taught &amp;quot;Transports&amp;quot; and the other one still teaches &amp;quot;Environmental Impacts Assessment&amp;quot; ... so they are NOT prescriptive grammarians!). They were well-educated native speakers, professors and researchers (so, well used to formal writing, which is something I&amp;#39;m interested in), and close to retiring age ... maybe this can explain.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Anyway, I&amp;#39;m interested also in prescriptive rules, so I&amp;#39;m looking forward to a reply to my question from a grammatical point of view.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: He insisted on my/me singing a song.</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/InsistedSingingSong/zjwrg/post.htm#464140</link><pubDate>Mon, 14 Jan 2008 16:31:40 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:464140</guid><dc:creator>Cool Breeze</dc:creator><description>&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;table width="85%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="txt4"&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/default/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;Grammar Geek wrote:&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="quoteTable"&gt;&lt;table width="100%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td width="100%" valign="top" class="txt4"&gt;&lt;p&gt;Singing is a gerund, a noun, so it takes the possessive &lt;em&gt;my&lt;/em&gt;.&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;br&gt;This is rather peculiar, I think. I have encountered the same thing on these forums many times. Native speakers say: "A gerund is a noun." Do they teach it that way in American schools and universities? Grammatical terminology varies greatly from country to country but I have yet to meet a grammarian who says a &lt;u&gt;noun&lt;/u&gt; can have an &lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;object&lt;/font&gt;:&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;i&gt;I insisted on his &lt;u&gt;speaking&lt;/u&gt; &lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;English&lt;/font&gt;.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/i&gt;Furthermore, &lt;b&gt;all&lt;/b&gt; &lt;font color="#006400"&gt;nouns&lt;/font&gt; can have an adjectival attribute; in other words, we can put an &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;adjective&lt;/font&gt; before them:&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;i&gt;He likes &lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;old &lt;/font&gt;&lt;font color="#006400"&gt;books&lt;/font&gt;.&lt;br&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;Merry old &lt;/font&gt;&lt;font color="#006400"&gt;England &lt;/font&gt;fascinates me.&lt;br&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;Little &lt;/font&gt;&lt;font color="#006400"&gt;Mary&lt;/font&gt; wanted to go out.&lt;br&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;Useful &lt;/font&gt;&lt;font color="#006400"&gt;information&lt;/font&gt; was given to everybody.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/i&gt;So, if gerunds are full-fledged nouns, the following is correct:&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;Correct&lt;/font&gt; &lt;font color="#006400"&gt;speaking &lt;/font&gt;&lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;English&lt;/font&gt; is easy.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/i&gt;Few consider it correct. A gerund is neither a noun nor a verb; it's a cross between them. It has some qualities characteristic of nouns and some that are characteristic of verbs. It resembles a verb in that it can take an &lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;object, &lt;/font&gt;for instance.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;Therefore, "I insist on him speaking English" and "I insist on his speaking English" are equally grammatical. In the first sentence, &lt;i&gt;him&lt;/i&gt; is used due to the influence of the preposition &lt;i&gt;on&lt;/i&gt;, which is normal English grammar. In the second sentence &lt;i&gt;his&lt;/i&gt; is used because &lt;i&gt;speaking&lt;/i&gt; is a noun to &lt;u&gt;an extent&lt;/u&gt;, even though it's not a complete noun. It has long been customary to consider possessive forms (my, his, our) of personal pronouns better than the object forms (me, him, us) as subjects of a gerund. It also used to be common to consider the basic or common form of other words better in this position:&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;i&gt;I insist on John Smith speaking English. &lt;/i&gt;(Also: John Smith's)&lt;br&gt;&lt;i&gt;I insist on everybody speaking English. &lt;/i&gt;(Rarely: everybody's)&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;In the past 30 or so years I have noticed a tendency in American magazines and newspapers to prefer the genitive even in cases where it sounds and looks ludicrous. I assume this can be ascribed to rising standards in&amp;nbsp; education. Nevertheless, there has never been a &lt;u&gt;grammatical&lt;/u&gt; justification to consider one of the alternatives better. The tendency to consider the possessive form the better seems to me to stem from grammatical ignorance rather than a good knowledge of it. There is no grammatical or historical justification for preferring either form.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;Cheers&lt;br&gt;CB&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: correction 28</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/Correction28/2/vwmdr/Post.htm#376907</link><pubDate>Sat, 09 Jun 2007 01:06:42 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:376907</guid><dc:creator>Mister Micawber</dc:creator><description>&lt;br&gt;If you place a word in parentheses, Vincent, then you are indicating that it is optional-- and indeed, &lt;i&gt;(the)&lt;/i&gt; is optional in your sentence.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;My job here is to give learners good, unequivocal usage information, not to open my heart to all forms of use.&amp;nbsp; Your quotes above, Goodman, are from casual and not particularly reputable sources.&amp;nbsp; When using Google for examples, try to select from websites like newspapers, universities, government, and other sites of reasonable authority.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;Summarized from &lt;i&gt;M-W Dict of Usage&lt;/i&gt;:&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;i&gt;-- When prefer is used to compare two things in a sentence, the second, esp if it is a noun or pronoun, is usually introduced by 'to'.&lt;br&gt;-- Sometimes other prepositions are used (over, above, before)&lt;br&gt;-- When the two things compared are infinitive phrases, there is a problem of too many to's:&amp;nbsp; 'prefer to eat &lt;b&gt;to to&lt;/b&gt; starve'.&amp;nbsp; So writers have solved this by using 'rather tha'n in place of 'to'.&lt;br&gt;-- 'Rather than' is also used when the 'to' or the whole infinitive is understood.&lt;br&gt;-- Only rarely do we find 'rather' omitted before 'than'.&lt;br&gt;-- When the two things compared are gerunds, we find both 'to' and 'rather than'.&lt;br&gt;-- Some critics condemn both 'than' and 'rather than'; others condemn only 'than'.&lt;br&gt;-- Plain 'than' seems to have no defenders and to be rarely used.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/i&gt;I will give you that 'than' is used more often now than M-W indicates,&amp;nbsp; but I do not think it is yet acceptable in careful writing,&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: I need help understanding absolute phrases</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/UnderstandingAbsolutePhrases/vwzdx/post.htm#374898</link><pubDate>Mon, 04 Jun 2007 13:51:43 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:374898</guid><dc:creator>Mister Micawber</dc:creator><description>&lt;br&gt;Ms Google has a bigger brain than I do.&amp;nbsp; She found this clear and concise explanation at the University of Calgary in Canada:&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;strong&gt;
&lt;em&gt;
&lt;a name="absolute"&gt;Absolute Phrases&lt;/a&gt;
&lt;/em&gt;
&lt;/strong&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
&lt;strong&gt;Absolute phrases &lt;/strong&gt;are
&lt;font color="#810043"&gt;
made of nouns or pronouns followed by a
participle and any modifiers of the noun or pronoun&lt;/font&gt;.
Absolute
phrases contain a subject (unlike participial phrases), and no
predicate. They serve to modify an entire sentence.
&lt;pre&gt;Examples:&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;     Joan looked nervous, &lt;strong&gt;her fears&lt;/strong&gt; &lt;em&gt;creeping&lt;/em&gt; up on her.&lt;br&gt;          &lt;strong&gt;noun/subject&lt;/strong&gt;:  her fears&lt;br&gt;          &lt;em&gt;participle&lt;/em&gt;:    creeping&lt;br&gt;          modifier:      up on her&lt;br&gt;          absolute phrase: her fears creeping up on her&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;     Tom paled when he came home, &lt;strong&gt;his mother&lt;/strong&gt; &lt;em&gt;standing&lt;/em&gt; in the&lt;br&gt;     doorway.&lt;br&gt;          &lt;strong&gt;noun/subject&lt;/strong&gt;:  his mother&lt;br&gt;          &lt;em&gt;participle&lt;/em&gt;:    standing&lt;br&gt;          modifier:      in the doorway&lt;br&gt;          absolute phrase: his mother standing in the doorway&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/pre&gt;&lt;br&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: It</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/It/vvlkd/post.htm#357088</link><pubDate>Sat, 28 Apr 2007 15:26:31 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:357088</guid><dc:creator>Clive</dc:creator><description>&lt;P&gt;Hi,&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT size=2&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;The following sentence is incorrect without the pronoun 'it'. &lt;B&gt;What do you think?&lt;/B&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff size=2&gt;Separately, the University of Michigan consumer sentiment index also fell, but not as much as had been feared. &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;I would rewrite it: &lt;BR&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff size=2&gt;Separately, the University of Michigan consumer sentiment index also fell, but not as much as it had been feared. &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000 size=2&gt;I much prefer the original version. &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000 size=2&gt;In his Practical English Usage, Michael Swan notes that &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;&lt;STRONG&gt;as much as&lt;/STRONG&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&amp;nbsp; and &lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;&lt;STRONG&gt;as many as&lt;/STRONG&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt; can&amp;nbsp;in effect be used as pronouns.&amp;nbsp; (Section 75 on&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt; &lt;STRONG&gt;As . . . as&lt;/STRONG&gt; &lt;/FONT&gt;in my edition.)&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT size=2&gt;Best wishes, Clive&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;</description></item><item><title>It</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/It/vvlwl/post.htm</link><pubDate>Sat, 28 Apr 2007 14:29:28 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:357062</guid><dc:creator>Rex</dc:creator><description>&lt;p&gt;
&lt;font size="2"&gt;&lt;b&gt;The US economy grew at its weakest pace for four
years during the first quarter of 2007, figures from the US Commerce
Department show.&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;font size="2"&gt;The news pushed the dollar to record lows of $1.3667 against the euro.
&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;
&lt;font size="2"&gt;US gross domestic product (GDP) grew at an annual rate
of just 1.3% in the first three months of the year, down from 2.5% in
the previous quarter.
&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;
&lt;font size="2"&gt;Separately, the University of Michigan consumer sentiment index also fell, but not as much as had been feared.

&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;
&lt;font size="2"&gt;Its consumer sentiment index slid to 87.1 in April from 88.4 in March, which was the third fall in a row.
&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;
&lt;font size="2"&gt;But the latest figure had been expected to be even worse - the preliminary reading for April was 85.3. &lt;br&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;
&lt;font size="2"&gt;The final result was boosted by optimism about the current rally on Wall Street. 
&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;
&lt;font size="2"&gt;"We got a better-than-expected number amid several
months of disappointing news," said Michael Woolfolk from The Bank of
New York. &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;font size="2"&gt;"This is the first ray of sunshine befitting a dreary April," he added.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;font size="2"&gt;-------------------------------------------------------------&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;font size="2"&gt;The following sentence is incorrect without the pronoun 'it'. &lt;b&gt;What do you think?&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;
&lt;font size="2"&gt;Separately, the University of Michigan consumer sentiment index also fell, but not as much as had been feared.

&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;
I would rewrite it: &lt;br&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;
&lt;font size="2"&gt;Separately, the University of Michigan consumer sentiment index also fell, but not as much as it had been feared.

&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;
&lt;br&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;font size="2"&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: please check my Motivation Letter</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CheckMotivationLetter/vrjnd/post.htm#336909</link><pubDate>Thu, 08 Mar 2007 08:00:19 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:336909</guid><dc:creator>Lil' Ruby Rose</dc:creator><description>&lt;P&gt;Dear Sir/Madam,&lt;/P&gt;

&lt;P&gt;It was &lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt;unimaginable&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;[wrong word]&lt;/FONT&gt; when I received &lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt;the first&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt; [the first in your country, university or course?&amp;nbsp; Or &lt;EM&gt;your&lt;/EM&gt; first?]&lt;/FONT&gt; foreign scholarship for my Bachelor of Science in &lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;Computing [or&amp;nbsp;Computer Science]&lt;/FONT&gt;&amp;nbsp;(B.Sc).The thing that I &lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt;has&lt;/FONT&gt; really &lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt;dignified&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt; [wrong word]&lt;/FONT&gt; and kept in mind is studying abroad always brings students much &lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493" color=#000000&gt;value&lt;/FONT&gt; [benefit]. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I &lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt;got&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;first became&lt;/FONT&gt; familiar&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;with [or interested in]&lt;/FONT&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;STRIKE&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt;the&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/STRIKE&gt; computers quite early during my Secondary School in Vietnam&lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;, &lt;/FONT&gt;even though IT was not an official subject. I loved and was fascinated&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;by&lt;/FONT&gt;&amp;nbsp;this small machine which exercises both &lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493" color=#000000&gt;my &lt;/FONT&gt;creative and &lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt;our&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;[you need to be consistent in pronoun choice]&lt;/FONT&gt; logical side. My dream was to become a famous IT researcher in the future. I entered Hanoi University of Technology, one of the best &lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;u&lt;/FONT&gt;niversities in Vietnam &lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt;with IT major &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ffffff" color=#ff1493&gt;[do you mean that the University offers IT as a major, or that you majored in IT?]&lt;/FONT&gt;, and as my dream &lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;[and fulfilling my dream,]&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;,&lt;/FONT&gt; I got &lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;the&lt;/FONT&gt; chance to start my B.Sc in September 2002&lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;,&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt;and earned&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;completing my&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;d&lt;/FONT&gt;egree in September 2006 at President University in Indonesia. &lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;[This is a very long and complex sentence - can you break it down into two or more sentences?]&lt;/FONT&gt; Living and studying in an industrial environment during my undergraduate &lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;years [or as an undergraduate]&lt;/FONT&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;STRIKE&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt;had&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/STRIKE&gt; helped me develop my personal ability, my skill&lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;s&lt;/FONT&gt; and my knowledge of Computer Technology. &lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt;Equipped &lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;&lt;EM&gt;with&lt;/EM&gt; &lt;/FONT&gt;fundamental theory in the class and through some part time projects, &lt;EM&gt;i&lt;/EM&gt;t empowered my capacity&amp;nbsp;&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ffffff"&gt;&lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;[not sure what you mean here.&amp;nbsp; Perhaps, This was backed up with sound theoretical understanding through the taught components of the course.]&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;.&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;C&lt;/FONT&gt;lasses that I engaged in include&lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;d&lt;/FONT&gt; Internet Programming, Desktop Application Programming and Network Security&lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;.&lt;/FONT&gt; I like to work with &lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;the&lt;/FONT&gt; Linux environment, especially for firewall protection system. I was a fan of C++ programming language; &lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493" color=#000000&gt;it was the reason for me to do successfully my thesis&amp;nbsp;&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ffffff" color=#ff1493&gt;[and for this reason I focused my thesis on] &lt;/FONT&gt;âP2P Video Conferencing in the context of Video over IPâ using C++. &lt;/P&gt;

&lt;P&gt;My professor Prof. Dr. &lt;B&gt;Muliawati&lt;/B&gt; and my dean Ir. &lt;B&gt;Rila Mandala&lt;/B&gt;, Ph.D &lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;have&lt;/FONT&gt; always encourage&lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;d&lt;/FONT&gt; me&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;to pursue&lt;/FONT&gt;&amp;nbsp;further study, &lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt;and to my mind, I always pursue the dream,&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ffffff" color=#ff1493&gt; [not sure what you mean.&amp;nbsp; Perhaps, and this is also a long-held ambition of mine.] &lt;/FONT&gt;I wish to earn a Master Degree in Computer Science,&lt;STRIKE&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt; even,&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/STRIKE&gt; &lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;and in the longer term&lt;/FONT&gt; I intend to follow this up with a Ph.D&lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;.&amp;nbsp;&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;T&lt;/FONT&gt;herefore I know I must return to the academic world for my family, my research, my dedication to education and&amp;nbsp; further my growth. &lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;[This sentence sounds strange in a motivation letter, and it isn't quite clear what you mean.&amp;nbsp; You might want to omit it.]&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;

&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt;I &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt;know my second opportunity came since I heard about Leeds University&amp;nbsp;&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;[not sure what you mean here.&amp;nbsp; Perhaps, I was very interested to hear about the opportunities for further study available at Leeds University] &lt;/FONT&gt;from my classmate who is studying there. I spoke to my professors, my lecturers and my &lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt;colleges &lt;/FONT&gt;about this opportunity &lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt;of&lt;/FONT&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;with [or offered by]&lt;/FONT&gt;your University. Leeds University &lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt;is reputable&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;[has a good/strong reputation]&lt;/FONT&gt; for its research facilities and computing resources. In addition, the information from website &lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt;also gave me much interest in there &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ffffff" color=#ff1493&gt;[??]&lt;/FONT&gt;. I have applied for &lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;a&lt;/FONT&gt; scholarship and I believe Leeds University is&amp;nbsp;&lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;the&lt;/FONT&gt; right choice for my Master of Computer Science. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Finally, I &lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt;kindly&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;[wrong word]&lt;/FONT&gt; want &lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt;to indicate my request&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt; in order to be considered&lt;/FONT&gt; [I would like to be considered] for one of the scholarships &lt;STRIKE&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt;that is&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/STRIKE&gt; &lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt;provided&lt;/FONT&gt; &lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;offered&lt;/FONT&gt; by Leeds University. I am very ambitious to pursue a career of academic research&lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;, &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=#ff1493&gt;and&lt;/FONT&gt; &amp;nbsp;I sincerely hope that my personal qualities and educational experience will be sufficient for you to consider me an appropriate &lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ff1493"&gt;match &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT style="BACKGROUND-COLOR: #ffffff" color=#ff1493&gt;candidate&lt;/FONT&gt;. If there is any possibility of arranging an interview, I would appreciate hearing from you. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;Yours Sincerely,&lt;/P&gt;</description></item><item><title>help me to correct this sentences</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/CorrectSentences/vrhhv/post.htm</link><pubDate>Tue, 06 Mar 2007 06:36:42 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:336230</guid><dc:creator>EquinoX</dc:creator><description>Please help me to correct these sentences without modifying the sentence structure at all. I know some sentences are messep up, but just help with the grammar and punctuation. Youe help would be really appreciated.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;1.By providing an
almost complete story about a carrier womenâs life at the morning until she
work gives the reader a picture of how womenâs now are sacrificing
their job in order to raise theyâre children back as theyâre supposed to.&lt;br&gt;2.In the book &lt;i&gt;Mommy Myth &lt;/i&gt;by Susan Douglas, which
is a professor at the University of Michigan and Meredith Michaels, who teaches
philosophy at Smith
 College, they label the
phenomenon as the New Momism (507).&lt;br&gt;3.The rhetoric part
of bringing the book into this article is to have the audience realize that not
only the writer it self is bringing up this idea into the society but also
other people, such as book writerâs in this case are also concern about this
issue.&lt;br&gt;4.By using a well
known and famous company such as PWC, the audience then will realize about the
stage of this problem does not only effect the woman itself but it also affects
the company where those womenâs work for.&lt;br&gt;5.Most of the data
presented here shows comparison on the changes of woman in the past and the
present regarding to their career and jobs.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;My teacher suggest that I change some words related to pronouns, possesives, and single plural shift. Thanks.&lt;br&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: Urgent! please help me to proofreading it..</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/UrgentProofreading/dzqxg/post.htm#279996</link><pubDate>Fri, 13 Oct 2006 04:13:21 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:279996</guid><dc:creator>julielai</dc:creator><description>&lt;P&gt;Hi, &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Is this a JUPAS essay? The content is okay. Some problems with grammar and wording.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I've highlighted the parts that you need to fix.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;To be a business woman has long been my dream. &lt;STRONG&gt;It (Do not use pronoun here) &lt;/STRONG&gt;not only helps me to develop a logical and analytical mind, but also enrich my knowledge. This knowledge also &lt;STRONG&gt;enable (verb agreement)&lt;/STRONG&gt;&amp;nbsp;me to serve &lt;STRONG&gt;&lt;FONT color=#f5f5dc&gt;myself and&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/STRONG&gt; (too self-serving) the community. So I have chosen Marketing for my major.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;Learning the development of practical skills and academic and professional knowledge is one of the reasons why I have chosen (&lt;STRONG&gt;article) &lt;/STRONG&gt;Marketing programme. It has a strong emphasis on interactive and student-centred learning methods. It also provides a comprehensive business education, which has &lt;STRONG&gt;attracted (wording)&lt;/STRONG&gt;&amp;nbsp;me to put it as my first choice.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;Besides, I &lt;STRONG&gt;have the (You haven't got the chance yet) &lt;/STRONG&gt;chance to &lt;STRONG&gt;visit&lt;/STRONG&gt; (wording) companies overseas and companies in the mainland to conduct project work and to present our findings at the annual marketing symposium. I can also spend a semester studying in another university overseas or in the mainland. It is a good &lt;STRONG&gt;chance&lt;/STRONG&gt; (wording) to &lt;STRONG&gt;step beyond (wording) &lt;/STRONG&gt;Hong Kong and experience other countriesâlife and culture. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;After completing this programme, I can learn a lot of skills such as &lt;STRONG&gt;communication (adj. here) &lt;/STRONG&gt;and oratorical skill. This knowledge can significantly &lt;STRONG&gt;serve (wording) &lt;/STRONG&gt;myself. The oratorical skill can enrich my social circle &lt;STRONG&gt;(not really)&lt;/STRONG&gt;. The analytical skill &lt;STRONG&gt;learn (verb form) &lt;/STRONG&gt;from the programme also enable&lt;STRONG&gt;&lt;FONT color=#ff0000&gt;_ (singular)&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/STRONG&gt;&amp;nbsp;me to &lt;STRONG&gt;train&lt;/STRONG&gt; (wording) my thought, &lt;STRONG&gt;&lt;U&gt;and &lt;/U&gt;&lt;/STRONG&gt;develop my logical and analytical mind. These skills will greatly affect my interpersonal relationship and my career in the future. &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; In addition, this knowledge can help me serve the community. I will apply the critical thinking &lt;STRONG&gt;learn (same here)&lt;/STRONG&gt;&amp;nbsp;from the programme to solve real and practical business problems in the marketing world. The analytical and communication skills also enable me to face the challenge and serve in an increasingly complex business environment. Furthermore, I hope I can play a part in using the key business knowledge and skills to deal confidently with broad issues in a global business environment. Even if I do not pursue in marketing &lt;STRONG&gt;&lt;U&gt;in the future&lt;/U&gt;&lt;/STRONG&gt;, I will try my best to put into practice what has been learned.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;In conclusion, the programme I have chosen of study &lt;U&gt;&lt;STRONG&gt;helps&lt;/STRONG&gt; &lt;/U&gt;realize my goal. I will try my best to fulfill my dream to be a successful business woman. After graduation, I will also endeavor &amp;nbsp;to &amp;nbsp;serve the community and contribute _ _ &amp;nbsp;&lt;STRONG&gt;(preposition) &lt;/STRONG&gt;business world.&lt;/P&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: Please help me with these sentences</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/TheseSentences/ddvcm/post.htm#266504</link><pubDate>Wed, 13 Sep 2006 17:02:56 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:266504</guid><dc:creator>Cadzao</dc:creator><description>&lt;P&gt;Some more information:&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;"When &lt;EM&gt;&lt;STRONG&gt;as&lt;/STRONG&gt;&lt;/EM&gt; and &lt;EM&gt;&lt;STRONG&gt;than&lt;/STRONG&gt;&lt;/EM&gt; are followed by personal pronouns, both subject and object forms are possible.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;e.g. I think you understand the problem better than &lt;STRONG&gt;I&lt;/STRONG&gt; / &lt;STRONG&gt;me&lt;/STRONG&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;In informal English, object forms (me, her, him...)&amp;nbsp;are much more common.&amp;nbsp;Subject forms (I, she, he...) are more often used in a formal style, and some people consider them more correct. If a verb follows the pronoun, only subject forms are possible.&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;e.g. He runs faster than I &lt;STRONG&gt;do&lt;/STRONG&gt;."&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;(Practical English Usage, Michael Swan, Oxford University Press, 1980)&lt;/P&gt;</description></item></channel></rss>