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&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p style="text-align:center;" align="center"&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;span&gt;Social Justice âMarriageâ&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p style="text-align:center;" align="center"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Marriage is
a custom which can be found in every human culture. Although the forms and
rules are differ. Marriage is a form of commitment between man and woman. It is
a legal recognized relationship by a religious ceremony between man and woman
who intent to live together as sexual and domestic partners. It is can also an
arrangement between families whereby parents create a kind of business
transaction in order to maintain family status and level. Modern marriages
become more complicated today due to social justice issue such as homosexual
marriage and divorce. &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Arrangement
marriage used to be common in the ancient world and it is still practice in
most countries today especially to those high power and status families.
Parents have control over their childâs happiness. They will one who will
choose and decide to whom their child going to marry. For the sake of family
status and power they sacrifice their own childâs happiness. Freedom and happiness
have been taken out from their children. Arrangement marriage is also a form of
solemn promise between two families. My parent married was arranged but they
opting for love marriage. Even though they donât love each other, but at least
they know each other for long time. They try to accept and love the one another
and now they live happily with six children in a comfortable living. This kind
of marriage arrangement is good because both families know each other very
well. But not for others, they donât even know who their going to marry. They
cannot see the appearance and personality until the wedding day. Marriage means
people marrying for love and live rest of their life for the person their love.
Unfortunately, marriage is just a primary union which made good economic sense
and in order to solidify political alliances.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Modern
people are pushing the trend toward amorality same-sex marriage. Same-sex
marriage has been top debate issue in our political and society today. Even
higher Supreme Courts take action about this matter. Majority people are
opposing about same-sex marriage or gay marriage, especially in religious
groups. They insist that marriage is between one man and on woman. They been
taught this way and it was written in Holy Bible for many thousand years. As a
Christian myself, I have been taught by pastors, church members and family that
there only two gender that God created. Gay is considering a moral sin.
Although, I have been taught that way but I never look down on gay people. I
have big respect for them, it is not their choice to be gay it happen from
their own will. They also human have the right to choose who they want to
married. I support gay civil union for gay couples, but it doesnât mean that I
support gay marriage. Marriage has been union of one man and one woman in all
human cultures throughout human history. It has been the standard custom in
many cultures for several thousand years. Unfortunately, the definition of
marriage today is radically different from what it was several thousand years
ago. Same-sex marriage destroys the definition of marriage, because it no
longer represents the inherently procreative relationship of opposite sex pair
bonding.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;Marriage
was born from primitive cultures that recognized that males and females mated
and as a result produced children that needed to be cared for. Unfortunately,
the rates of files divorce increasing rapidly especially in United State.
Many people filing divorce because the relationship is not going well. In the
first place they didnât know what is marriage really means. They just though
that the intimate love between two people are enough to get married. It is more
than that; it is more on responsibility and sacrifice. It is an idea couples
committing for life and raising children together and sharing the struggles of
survival. Divorce is the most stressful event that affects family especially on
children. Children may feel a great loss and as well as anxiety and sadness.
Back in hundred years ago, divorce cases are very rare. Even the love between
both parents is gone; they still stay together for the sake of their children.
Parent divorce made a big impact on children, from old saying that âchildren
learn what they liveâ is very true. Parent is childrenâs role model, whatever parent
do the children will imitate it.&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt; &lt;/span&gt;Children of divorced
parents perform more poorly in school. They also are more likely to repeat a
grade and to have higher drop-out rates and lower rates of college graduation.
It is really big impact for our society; federal government spent more money on
school because higher repeat grade. &lt;/span&gt;Marriage is foundation of family.
However, the foundation is getting weak and higher consumption for singles. &lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;The meaning of marriage is differs
from one person to another, from time to another. In ancient times, marriage is
a form &lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;condition where women most
treated as a property for men. Historically period, marriage is permanent
institution that once entered cannot be dissolved beside death. Romantic love
has been made the most important basis for marriage. Marriage is also a
commitment and agreement of both men and women. Certainly, in the modern world,
the meaning of marriage is become more complicated. Marriage is primary union which made good economic sense&lt;span style="color:rgb(0, 51, 102);"&gt;.&lt;/span&gt; People are pushing the trend into an amorality society.
Same-sex couples are pursuing the right to be married. Unfortunately, a legal
recognition didnât allow same-sex to be married, it will change the meaning of
marriage extremely differ. In addition, higher divorce rates many children will
not be raised in a traditional family unit. The meaning of marriage never
define, it is changing as the times change. As society changes, the institution
of marriage changes as well. &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;

&amp;nbsp;&lt;h2&gt;&lt;/h2&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: trying to improve</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/TryingToImprove/gmmbr/post.htm#563567</link><pubDate>Sun, 07 Sep 2008 23:34:51 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:563567</guid><dc:creator>Avangi</dc:creator><description>&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;div&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/englishforums/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt; &lt;strong&gt;Anonymous&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;div&gt;I am just trying to improve my english and dont have any mentor, Can someone please let me know if what i understand or do is right or wrong?&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I have some sentences below and i just wanted to know if they are correct -&amp;nbsp; &lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;Take care to capitalize the pronoun &amp;quot;I.&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp; All sentences need punctuation at the end, eg., a period.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I was abashed by the email sent by my manager&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;This is correct, but the word is uncommon in everyday speech.&amp;nbsp;&amp;quot;Unabashed&amp;quot; is much more common.&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;Google hits: &amp;quot;abashed&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp; - &amp;nbsp;653,000&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; /&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &amp;quot;unabashed&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp; -&amp;nbsp; 2,090,000&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The aboriginal soundtrack was better than the remix&amp;nbsp; &lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;Use &amp;quot;original.&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp; &amp;quot;aboriginal&amp;quot; is a very special word, meaning &amp;quot;native,&amp;quot; as in the native population of a region.&amp;nbsp; I&amp;#39;ve never heard it used in everyday speech, other than to refer to the native inhabitants of Australia.&amp;nbsp; I think it may also refer to flora, but I&amp;#39;m not sure.&amp;nbsp; How far back one goes, I have no idea, but I&amp;#39;ve only heard it used in referring to existing populations.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The class was abridged due to lack of time&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;Correct, but very uncommon. I&amp;#39;d use &amp;quot;cut short.&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp; &amp;quot;Abridged&amp;quot; is commonly used to describe shortened versions of books.&amp;nbsp; Also, &amp;quot;due to&amp;quot; is ungrammatical.&amp;nbsp; Use &amp;quot;because of.&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp; The difference is technical.&amp;nbsp; Check Google, &amp;quot;because of vs. due to.&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp; If you don&amp;#39;t get it, post back.&amp;nbsp; ( &amp;quot;The shortness of the class was due to the lack of time,&amp;quot; is correct.)&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;I abstained myself from participating in the cultural events&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;You must delete &amp;quot;myself.&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp; The verb &amp;quot;to abstain&amp;quot; is intransitive only.&amp;nbsp; (There&amp;#39;s no transitive usage.)&amp;nbsp; It does not take an object, even reflexive.&amp;nbsp; You may say &amp;quot;I recused myself,&amp;quot; but that has a special meaning.&amp;nbsp; You may say &amp;quot;I withdrew myself from the event,&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp; but then you can&amp;#39;t use &amp;quot;participating.&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp; (&amp;quot;To withdraw&amp;quot; may be either transitive or intransitive.)&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I abstained myself from bungee jumping since I am scared of heights&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;Same objection!&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I recieved an acrimonious email from my manager.&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt; &lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;okay!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The client attacked acrimoniously to the lawyer after he lost the case&amp;nbsp; &lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;The verb &amp;quot;to attack&amp;quot; does not take the preposition &amp;quot;to.&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp; In this case, the adverb should come either before the verb or after the object&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; -&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; I&amp;#39;m not sure why.&amp;nbsp; &amp;quot;The client acrimoniously attacked the lawyer,&amp;quot; or &amp;quot;The client attacked the lawyer acrimoniously.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;Acids usually have an acrid odor&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;okay!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The washroom had a acrid odor&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;okay!&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Beacuse I understand technology very well I can make acute decisions based on my knowhow&amp;nbsp; &lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;This is correct, &amp;quot;acute&amp;quot; meaning &amp;quot;sharp&amp;quot; decisions, but it&amp;#39;s&amp;nbsp;uncommon.&amp;nbsp; &amp;quot;Accurate decisions&amp;quot; would be common.&amp;nbsp; &amp;quot;I have an acute pain&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; -&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; acute angina&amp;quot; is common.&amp;nbsp; &amp;quot;An acute angle&amp;quot; (less than ninety degrees&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; -&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; geometry) is common.&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&lt;strike&gt; Beacuse&lt;/strike&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;span style="TEXT-DECORATION:underline;"&gt;Because&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;Engineers are adept at learning new theories.&amp;nbsp; &lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;Okay, but I guess we don&amp;#39;t know the same engineers.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;Employees should Adhere to the companies policies&amp;nbsp; &lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;No cap on &amp;quot;adhere.&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Possessive &amp;quot;company&amp;#39;s.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;The office was adorned on christmas eve&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;Capitalize &amp;quot;Christmas.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;Childrens seek adulation from parents&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt; No &amp;quot;s&amp;quot; on &amp;quot;children&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Affable people are good to be friends with&amp;nbsp; &lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;okay&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;She is aloof&amp;nbsp; &lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;okay&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;india is an agrarian country&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;Capitalize &amp;quot;India.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I have a altruistic nature&amp;nbsp; &lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;Use &amp;quot;an&amp;quot; form of article before a vowel.&amp;nbsp; (&lt;span style="TEXT-DECORATION:underline;"&gt;an&lt;/span&gt; apple)&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;The policy of my company was amended after march&amp;nbsp; &lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;Capitalize &amp;quot;March.&amp;quot;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I was allured by her beauty&amp;nbsp; &lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;okay&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;Mumbai has ample food to feed the people&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;okay, but &amp;quot;its/her people&amp;quot; might be better.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;My debts were annulled with my last salary&amp;nbsp; &lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;Use &amp;quot;wiped out!&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp; &amp;quot;Our marriage was annulled by the Church/court.&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp; -&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; something done by an official body.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;A diamond ring would help me appease my wife&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;okay&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I was apprised by my manager regarding the appraisal i recd&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;(I received.)&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;br /&gt;I had an arduous project last month &lt;strong&gt;&lt;span style="COLOR:#00bfbf;"&gt;okay, but we don&amp;#39;t usually use &amp;quot;had&amp;quot; with &amp;quot;project.&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp; &amp;quot;I had/performed an arduous task&amp;quot;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; /&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &amp;quot;I took on an arduous project.&amp;quot;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/div&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&amp;nbsp; When you get to the &amp;quot;B&amp;#39;s,&amp;quot; don&amp;#39;t put them all in one post, or you&amp;#39;ll crash the site!&amp;nbsp; - A.</description></item><item><title>Re: grammar questions?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/GrammarQuestions/gvlpm/post.htm#524224</link><pubDate>Sat, 07 Jun 2008 16:24:15 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:524224</guid><dc:creator>Clive</dc:creator><description>&lt;p&gt;Hi,&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;(1) While in the United States, she formed the National Committee on Federal Legislation for Birth Control, remaining its president until 1937, and lobbied Franklin Delano Roosevelt for support, pointing out that birth control &lt;i&gt;would help reduce Depression welfare by allowing married women time to work.&lt;/i&gt; She was advised &lt;i&gt;to change her course to working to change laws &lt;/i&gt;that would give doctors the right to dispense birth control to anyone who requested it.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;Do the italics phrase needs rephrasing? Please advise.&lt;font color="#000000"&gt; No, it&amp;#39;s OK.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
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&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;(2) Born Carrie Clinton Lane, Catt was the second of the three children of Lucius Lane and Maria Clinton of West Potsdam, New York.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;font&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/font&gt; &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;Is the phrase &amp;quot; Born Carrie Clinton Lane&amp;quot; ok? Please clarify. &lt;font color="#000000"&gt;Yes.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;font&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/font&gt; &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;(3) Matching his wife&amp;#39;s enthusiasm for tackling sensitive issues, Leo Chapman was sued for liable, following a cruel attack on a local politician.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;font&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/font&gt; &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;Is the usage of phrase &amp;quot;was sued for liable,&amp;quot; ok? Please check. &lt;font color="#000000"&gt;Yes. But the word is &amp;#39;libel&amp;#39;.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;font&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/font&gt; &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;(4) In 2004, the recounting of Paul&amp;#39;s efforts were moved into the arena of popular culture through the release of the HBO film, &amp;quot;Iron Jawed Angels,&amp;quot; which recounted the era of White House protests and incarceration, including the graphic unfolding of the force-feeding of prisoners.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;font&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/font&gt; &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;Is the s-v agreement ok in &amp;quot;the recountingâ¦were&amp;quot;? Should it be &amp;quot;was&amp;quot;?&lt;font color="#000000"&gt; Yes, &amp;#39;was&amp;#39;.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;font&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/font&gt; &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;(5) On May 15, 1968, at eighty seven, she led over five thousand women in a march on Washington to demand the United States withdraw from the Vietnam War.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;font&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/font&gt; &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;Can &amp;quot;United States withdraw&amp;quot; be changed to &amp;quot;U.S. withdraw&amp;quot;? &lt;font color="#000000"&gt;Yes.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;Is it adjective usage? Please clarify.&lt;font color="#000000"&gt; No. &amp;#39;United States (U.S. )&amp;#39; is the noun subject of the verb &amp;#39;withdraw&amp;#39;.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;font color="#000000"&gt;&lt;font&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/font&gt; &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;(6) This departure from her expected role further impaired her already weakened marriage, and in l974, she and her husband of eleven years were divorced.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;font&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/font&gt; &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;Is the phrase &amp;quot; she and her husband of eleven years&amp;quot; ok? Do we need to rephrase? &lt;font color="#000000"&gt;No, it&amp;#39;s fine.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;font&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/font&gt; &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;(7) Preferring to give someone new an opportunity for the position, Wilma Mankiller did not seek reelection.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;&lt;font&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/font&gt; &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;font color="#0000ff"&gt;Can &amp;quot; new an opportunity&amp;quot; rephrased better? &lt;font color="#000000"&gt;No. You are not parsing the sentence correctly. &amp;#39;New&amp;#39; is an&amp;nbsp; adjective that describes &amp;#39;someone&amp;#39;. ie &amp;#39;. . . give an opportunity to (someone new) .&amp;nbsp;. . &amp;#39;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;Best wishes, Clive&lt;/p&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: Help proofreading &amp;quot;A Doll's House&amp;quot;</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/ProofreadingDollsHouse/zmpbq/post.htm#480929</link><pubDate>Sun, 24 Feb 2008 05:53:58 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:480929</guid><dc:creator>Mister Micawber</dc:creator><description>&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&lt;i&gt;I have underlined some problem areas:&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p align="center"&gt;&lt;font color="#003366"&gt;&lt;b&gt;The Woman Within the Doll&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p align="left"&gt;&lt;font color="#003366"&gt;&lt;b&gt;&lt;i&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &amp;nbsp;The Baltimore Sun &lt;/i&gt;&lt;span&gt;wrote
that back in 1879, âA Doll&amp;#39;s Houseâ by Henrik Ibsen âshocked and
offended people wherever [it] was played,â and that the dramatist
&lt;u&gt;assured&lt;/u&gt; it was not about a woman, but about âanyone who had to live
according to the rules created by othersâ (Hyder). Society &lt;u&gt;thought to
be&lt;/u&gt; outrageous that a woman would get involved in manly things, for her
role in society was exclusively to care for the family and please her
husband. Women did not enjoy the rights women do now. They were not
taken seriously, and decisions were made by the &lt;u&gt;man who&lt;/u&gt; was and still
is considered the head of the family. &lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;span&gt;Nora&amp;#39;s choice
to become &lt;u&gt;free, independent&lt;/u&gt; and leave her husband, along with some of
the characters&amp;#39; &lt;u&gt;actions made&lt;/u&gt; this play &lt;u&gt;to be&lt;/u&gt; scandalous for its time.&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p align="left"&gt;&lt;font color="#003366"&gt;&lt;b&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Ibsen wrote in a letter that the story &lt;u&gt;in&lt;/u&gt; âA Doll&amp;#39;s Houseâ was about a woman who feels:&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p align="left"&gt;&lt;font color="#003366"&gt;&lt;b&gt;&amp;quot; Oppressed
and bewildered by belief in authority, she loses her faith in her own
moral right and ability to bring up her&amp;nbsp;children... [She is bittered
because,] like&amp;nbsp;certain insects,&lt;u&gt; (ought to) &lt;/u&gt;go away and die when she has
done her duty towards the continuance of the species... [she shakes]
off of cares, [but then she feels] a sudden return of apprehension and
dread. She must&amp;nbsp;bear it all aloneâ &lt;u&gt;&lt;span&gt;(&lt;/span&gt;Doll)&lt;/u&gt;.&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p align="left"&gt;&lt;font color="#003366"&gt;&lt;b&gt;Nora had a beautiful&lt;u&gt;
life, she&lt;/u&gt; had a husband, beautiful children, and everything she wanted.
Earlier in her marriage, &lt;u&gt;his&lt;/u&gt; husband suffered &lt;u&gt;of&lt;/u&gt; an illness &lt;u&gt;of&lt;/u&gt; which he
needed to recover somewhere in the south, but this was concealed from
him by the doctor and Nora. Not having the means to afford a trip&lt;u&gt; so
costly and &lt;/u&gt;out of love and desperation, Nora decides to ask for a loan
without letting Tolvard know. She forges her father&amp;#39;s signature to
obtain the loan because she does not want to trouble her father either,
who is very ill &lt;u&gt;himself too&lt;/u&gt;. However, she is responsible and works
secretly from home in order to make the payments. Eventually, Tolvard
&lt;u&gt;finds out about&lt;/u&gt; her secret and feels that his life, happiness and
reputation will be lost once Krogstad, who lent the money, publishes
the &lt;u&gt;then scandalous situation&lt;/u&gt; out of &lt;u&gt;revenged&lt;/u&gt; for &lt;u&gt;having&lt;/u&gt; fired him from
the bank he now manages. He quickly turns against her. That is the
moment when Nora starts to understand things she did not understand
before; she realizes she does not love Tolvard &lt;u&gt;anymore just&lt;/u&gt; as he does
not really love her as she thought&lt;u&gt;, and decides&lt;/u&gt; to leave for good to
discover herself.&lt;font color="#000000"&gt; &lt;/font&gt;&lt;font color="#000000"&gt;[&lt;i&gt;Too many pronouns-- I don&amp;#39;t know who&amp;#39;s doing what to whom&lt;/i&gt;]&lt;/font&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p align="left"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;font color="#003366"&gt;&lt;b&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; The
&lt;u&gt;scenery&lt;/u&gt; consists of the Helmer&amp;#39;s apartment and nowhere else. The
description of the apartment &lt;u&gt;depicts&lt;/u&gt; the decision that Nora will have
to make. There is a door to the right which leads to the entryway and
another to the left which leads to Helmer&amp;#39;s study. Nora will have to
decide which door to take: freedom or Helmer &lt;/b&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;font color="#003366"&gt;&lt;b&gt;[&lt;i&gt;&lt;font color="#000000"&gt;Tolvard / Helmer:&amp;nbsp; we don&amp;#39;t know if they are one or two&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/i&gt;]&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;font color="#003366"&gt;&lt;b&gt;. The place is not
&lt;u&gt;â&lt;/u&gt;expensively furnished&lt;u&gt;â&lt;/u&gt;, but it is comfortable, just like Nora&amp;#39;s
&lt;u&gt;marriage, she&lt;/u&gt; lives a comfortable life, but there are certain things
she lacks that are more important than riches. No woman could even
consider back in the 1800s doing such &lt;u&gt;a scandalous things&lt;/u&gt; as to leave
not only &lt;u&gt;the&lt;/u&gt; husband, but her children too.&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p align="left"&gt;&lt;font color="#003366"&gt;&lt;b&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; The main
character in the story is Nora, a seemingly selfish, materialistic
woman who cares a lot about money and in living a good life. This is to
be &lt;u&gt;expected since&lt;/u&gt; her father liked to spend money himself and live a
life he could only could afford with credit. He used to called her his
âdoll-child, &lt;span&gt;and he played with [her] the way [she] played with [her] dollsâ (Ibsen &lt;u&gt;1041&lt;/u&gt;)&lt;/span&gt;.
She was obviously very protected and spoiled by &lt;u&gt;both, her&lt;/u&gt; father and
her husband, who provided anything she needed or wanted. Her father
raised her &lt;u&gt;not think&lt;/u&gt; for herself and just play her role in society.
âWhile [she] was at home with [her] father, he&amp;nbsp;used to tell [her] all
his opinions, and [she] held the same opinions.&amp;nbsp;If [she] had others
[she] said nothing about them, because he wouldn&amp;#39;t&amp;nbsp;have liked itâ
(1041) [&lt;i&gt;&lt;font color="#000000"&gt;All the bracketed pronouns are distracting; it would be better to give the exact quotes&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/i&gt;]. This &lt;u&gt;repeated again&lt;/u&gt; as a married woman; she would not express
her opinion to Tolvard, for they never talked seriously, but seemed to
have trusted Dr. Rank better. &lt;u&gt;Norah&lt;/u&gt; was greatly misunderstood. She was
a loving &lt;u&gt;person, she&lt;/u&gt; loved her husband so much that she was willing to
forge her father&amp;#39;s signature &lt;u&gt;to obtain a loan to take her husband south
in order for him to recover from a deadly illness&lt;/u&gt; [&lt;i&gt;&lt;font color="#000000"&gt;You said all this before; cut it&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/i&gt;.]. She is willing to do
anything for him. Eventually she&lt;u&gt; realized&lt;/u&gt; she does not have to play the
doll anymore. One can only imagine people&amp;#39;s &lt;u&gt;reaction&lt;/u&gt; throughout the
&lt;u&gt;play&amp;#39;s events&lt;/u&gt;.&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p align="left"&gt;&lt;font color="#003366"&gt;&lt;b&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Tolvard Helmer
&lt;u&gt;seemed&lt;/u&gt; [&lt;i&gt;&lt;font color="#000000"&gt;Be consistent in verb tenses&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/i&gt;] to be an ideal husband. He is loving, admirable, honest,
ethical, hard-working and successful, but there seems to be a dark side
&lt;u&gt;of&lt;/u&gt; him. He is a prideful &lt;u&gt;man, he&lt;/u&gt; won&amp;#39;t ask for money&lt;u&gt; to&lt;/u&gt; &lt;u&gt;anyone, to&lt;/u&gt; [&lt;i&gt;&lt;font color="#000000"&gt;Commas are not conjunctions.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/i&gt;] do
so would be humiliating. To him, honor and appearances are more
important than family. He does not believe people can change and become
good, as he did not believe Krogstad was a good person although he had
been honest for a long time &lt;u&gt;already&lt;/u&gt;. Also, he is so affectionate &lt;u&gt;that
makes&lt;/u&gt; one wonder &lt;u&gt;of&lt;/u&gt; his sincerity; he calls Nora diminutive names such
as &lt;u&gt;featherbrained, spendthrift&lt;/u&gt; [&lt;i&gt;&lt;font color="#000000"&gt;These are not diminutives.&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/i&gt;] , a squirrel, a song-bird, lark, strange
little being all the time (994). One cannot think of a woman who would
like being called &lt;u&gt;like that&lt;/u&gt; and who would not be affected emotionally.
Tolvard&amp;#39;s reaction after finding out Nora&amp;#39;s secret is amusing. He had
told Nora that sometimes he wished â[she] was in some terrible danger,
just so [he] could take [his] life and soul and everything, for [her]
sakeâ (1038), yet he quickly turns against &lt;u&gt;her calling&lt;/u&gt; her a wretched
woman, a criminal, unprincipled, untrustworthy of raising her children,
incapable, etc. His hypocrisy is clearly revealed&lt;u&gt; when as &lt;/u&gt;soon as he
realizes that Nora&amp;#39;s mistake won&amp;#39;t affect his &lt;u&gt;reputation he&lt;/u&gt; forgives
her (1039-1949). There&amp;#39;s a saying that &lt;u&gt;goes something like&lt;/u&gt; &lt;i&gt;&lt;span&gt;a good friend is hard to find, specially during difficult times&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/i&gt;;
Tolvard was &lt;u&gt;nor&lt;/u&gt; a good&lt;u&gt; friend neither&lt;/u&gt; that perfect husband he seemed to
be. He loved to have control of his wife&amp;#39;s life, and his conversations
usually &lt;u&gt;tend to imply&lt;/u&gt; that Nora would be lost without &lt;u&gt;him; that &lt;/u&gt;she
needed his guidance and teaching. Tolvard did not love &lt;u&gt;Nora, &lt;/u&gt;â[he]
thought it fun to be in love with [her]â (1041).&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p align="left"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;font color="#003366"&gt;&lt;b&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Dr. Rank
is in love with Nora, and that seems to have been the main reason he
visited the Helmer&amp;#39;s house. This character is not essential &lt;u&gt;in&lt;/u&gt; the
play, but it causes outrage when he dares to &lt;u&gt;reveal Nora&lt;/u&gt; his secret.
This is almost vulgar for him to do, and very dishonorable, specially
during those times in which people were very conservative. It is as if
he had taken advantage of the trust the family had in &lt;u&gt;it&lt;/u&gt; and ended up
tarnishing his reputation.&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p align="left"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;font color="#003366"&gt;&lt;b&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Mrs.
Linde is one of Nora&amp;#39;s old friends from school. She gave up her true
love for money, but in the end things did not turn out the way she had
expected. Her husband &lt;u&gt;died leaving&lt;/u&gt; her in a terrible financial
&lt;u&gt;situation making&lt;/u&gt; &lt;i&gt;&lt;font color="#000000"&gt;[On the other hand, commas are essential for separating dependent clauses.]&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/i&gt; it necessary for her to work in order to sustain her
mother and brothers. After her mother passed away and her brothers did
not need her &lt;u&gt;help she&lt;/u&gt; left town. Not to have someone to take care of
made her feel âcompletely alone in the worldâ, and it frightened her
âto be so empty and lostâ (1032). She needed âsomeone to take care &lt;u&gt;ofâ,
she&lt;/u&gt; wanted to be a mother and wanted the companionship of a husband. In
the end, she was supposed to have helped Nora hide her secret. She
could have convinced Mr. Krogstad to get the letter back, but she did
not intercede (1033). She might have been envious of&lt;u&gt; Nora, after&lt;/u&gt; all,
Nora had all she was longing &lt;u&gt;for; &lt;/u&gt;a husband, beautiful children, and a
good life.&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p align="left"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;font color="#003366"&gt;&lt;b&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; Lastly,
Krogstad is the one who lent Nora money to save her husband, and
threatens&lt;u&gt; her&lt;/u&gt; to tell her husband if she does not convince Tolvard to
let him keep his job at the&lt;u&gt; bank, but&lt;/u&gt; just as Nora did, he once made a
mistake, which caused him to&lt;u&gt; loose&lt;/u&gt; his reputation. He was a man who
seems to have been &lt;u&gt;harden&lt;/u&gt; by life&amp;#39;s difficulties. When he was left by
the woman he dearly &lt;u&gt;loved âit&lt;/u&gt; was as if all the solid ground dissolved
from under [his] feetâ (1031). This might have caused him to become the
âhalf-drownedâ kind of man, as he refers to himself. After finding love
in his&lt;u&gt; life he&lt;/u&gt; turns from&lt;u&gt; the&lt;/u&gt; revengeful person into a forgiving one.&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p align="left"&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;font color="#003366"&gt;&lt;b&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; In
conclusion, Nora &lt;u&gt;realized of &lt;/u&gt;her true value as a human being and as a
woman. She decides to leave everything and &lt;u&gt;everyone,&lt;/u&gt; husband, children,
&lt;u&gt;luxuries to&lt;/u&gt; a journey to liberate herself. To do&lt;u&gt; such thing&lt;/u&gt; was
unthinkable at that time and caused turmoil, but it was the best choice
she could ever make. To leave one&amp;#39;s children is&lt;u&gt; a terrible things&lt;/u&gt; to do
and was not necessary, but looking beyond that, without prejudices, it
is not hard to &lt;u&gt;understands&lt;/u&gt; she is trying to figure out who she really
is and what she believes in. This is essential to one&amp;#39;s happiness;
therefore she is determined to make necessary changes in her life even
if people think&lt;u&gt; bad&lt;/u&gt; of her. It seems that daring to do so back in the
1800s was just as bad as selling drugs or prostituting oneself.&lt;/b&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;font color="#003366"&gt;.&lt;br /&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;</description></item><item><title>Re: inversion</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/Inversion/zmlbq/post.htm#479773</link><pubDate>Thu, 21 Feb 2008 12:35:05 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:479773</guid><dc:creator>Hoa Thai</dc:creator><description>&amp;nbsp;&lt;/p&gt;&lt;p&gt;Hi,&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;I have seen sentences that use adjectival introduction inversion such as:&lt;/p&gt;





&lt;p&gt;&lt;i&gt;&amp;quot;Beautiful beyond
relief is the two-tone PPG Red and Beige paint by Mike Cochran&amp;quot; - &lt;/i&gt;&lt;span&gt;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;a href="http://www.superchevy.com/features/trifive/sucs_0662_1955_chevy_tudor/index.html"&gt;http://www.superchevy.com/features/trifive/sucs_0662_1955_chevy_tudor/index.html&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;For adverbial introduction inversion, I think most often it goes
with verbs that show direction or movement, as in:&lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/span&gt;&lt;/p&gt;







&lt;p&gt;â&lt;i&gt;First comes love, then
comes marriage.&lt;/i&gt;â &lt;span&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;/span&gt;&lt;br /&gt;&lt;i&gt;âHere comes the bride.â&lt;br /&gt;âDeeper and deeper
into the wood ran the horse.â - http://members.chello.at/fairy-tales/page10.htm&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;&amp;nbsp;</description></item><item><title>Re: inclusion vs. separation (present perfect and simple past)</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/InclusionSeparationPresentPerfect-SimplePast/zzzqm/post.htm#443899</link><pubDate>Mon, 19 Nov 2007 03:07:52 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:443899</guid><dc:creator>Hoa Thai</dc:creator><description>&lt;p&gt;Dear all,&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;For whatever its worth â Here is my opinion as I promised to
deliver:&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;The issue we have been dealing with here boils down to one
question â âIn one sentence, grammatically and semantically, could we use both &lt;i&gt;simple past&lt;/i&gt; and&lt;i&gt; present perfect&lt;/i&gt; for one item?â&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Evidently, the example from BBCâs Teaching English site, &lt;i&gt;âThink about a film you have seen recently,
what was it called?â, &lt;/i&gt;affirmatively&lt;i&gt; &lt;/i&gt;answers
that question. The non-definitive âa&lt;i&gt;
filmâ&lt;/i&gt; associates well with the &lt;i&gt;present
perfect &lt;u&gt;âhave seenâ&lt;/u&gt;;&lt;/i&gt; and it is all right to use &lt;u&gt;â&lt;i&gt;wasâ&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/u&gt; to pin down an instance in the
past once our mind fixes on the selected item (i.e., &lt;i&gt;simple past&lt;/i&gt;). &lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Since the above sentence is okay, then we can deduct that â&lt;i&gt;the verb &lt;u&gt;see&lt;/u&gt; or whatever it isâ &lt;/i&gt;and
the â&lt;i&gt;film&lt;/i&gt;â do not contribute to the
confusion of our mind. Thus, in the sentence &lt;i&gt;âWhat was the last movie you have seen?â&lt;/i&gt;, the culprit must be the
superlative âthe lastâ!&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;When we use the superlative &lt;i&gt;âthe â¦â&lt;/i&gt; , it does not matter what adjective we attach to it - be it
âlastâ, âbestâ, âworstâ, âthe most..â, etcâ¦ we ask our mind to lock on to a
moment in time &lt;i&gt;(i.e., simple past).&lt;/i&gt;
If we follow immediately with a present perfect tense, our minds would &lt;u&gt;usually&lt;/u&gt;
cry foul!&amp;nbsp; - Why &lt;u&gt;usually&lt;/u&gt; but not &lt;u&gt;always&lt;/u&gt;?&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Apparently, millions of hits from a simple Google search
prove that some minds do accept such ungrammatical construct without any
reservation. As an example, â&lt;i&gt;What was the
best movie you have ever seen?â&lt;/i&gt; could be seen in many forumsâ questions,
blogs, and at Yahooâs Answer site.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;If we accept that the word &lt;i&gt;&lt;u&gt;âeverâ&lt;/u&gt;&lt;/i&gt; , which could mean â&lt;i&gt;at any timeâ&lt;/i&gt; per American Heritage dictionary, could we then see
the stressing intention of the minds when they detect a possible time conflict
and insert that word between â&lt;i&gt;haveâ&lt;/i&gt;
and &lt;i&gt;âbeenâ&lt;/i&gt; while âamong all the
moviesâ becomes ellipsis (as an after thought)? This is what I think they mean
to say: â&lt;i&gt;What was the best movie among
all the movies you have ever seen?â&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;From the naturalness point of view, people donât pause to think
much about grammar, if &lt;i&gt;âthe bestâ&lt;/i&gt; is
okay then &lt;i&gt;âthe lastâ&lt;/i&gt; seems to pose no
problem - although the later clearly shows its time-biased nature. However,
that naturalness - albeit seemingly ungrammatical -&amp;nbsp; must have been ever permitted unless we find
an opportunity to re-validate its correctness. Once we realize that it might
cause confusion, we find a different way to clarify / say it and hold on to the
refinement. Thus, when the rejected construct is heard / seen again, we raise
the flag.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;Having thought about this for the last few days, I now tell
myself that:&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;1. The rule that raises the validity (or rather invalidity) of the marriage between
&lt;i&gt;simple past &lt;/i&gt;and&lt;i&gt; present perfect&lt;/i&gt; in one sentence for one item must be re-examined,
augmented, and complemented for specific cases. Its generalization fails to
include sensible sentences.&lt;/p&gt;

&lt;p&gt;2. Sentences that use superlative âthe â¦â in this type of
construct must not be over-elliptical. (Isnât that true with every sentence?)&lt;/p&gt;



&lt;p&gt;Thank you all,&lt;br&gt;Hoa Thai&lt;/p&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: &amp;quot;a potiori&amp;quot; - A phrase no enlish dictionary gives any explaination, hel</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/PotioriPhraseEnlishDictionaryGives-Explaination/zvdnc/post.htm#438347</link><pubDate>Sat, 03 Nov 2007 16:14:20 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:438347</guid><dc:creator>Hoa Thai</dc:creator><description>Apparently, a small difference shows up with the version that I got. Here it is:&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;-----------------------------------------&lt;br&gt;âIn his discussion of the distinctive
elements of modern law Max Weber echoes
Lockeâs description. âSo very characteristic
is this feature of private law that one can &lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;&lt;i&gt;a potiori&lt;/i&gt;&lt;/font&gt; designate the contemporary type of
society to the extent that private law obtains, as a contractual one.â â - &lt;b&gt;(âContract
Out: GLBT Marriage and Citizenshipâ by Elizabeth Cohen, The Maxwell School)&lt;/b&gt;.

&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;www.&lt;b&gt;maxwell.syr.edu&lt;/b&gt;/campbell/SLAPP/Papers/SLAPP 03-04/Cohen.pdf&lt;br&gt;-----------------------------------------&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;Please note that &lt;i&gt;&lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;potiori &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;font color="#000000"&gt;is preceded with&lt;/font&gt;&lt;i&gt;&lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt; a &lt;/font&gt;&lt;/i&gt;&lt;font color="#ff0000"&gt;&lt;font color="#000000"&gt;and both are italicized. I don't know Latin/Spanish; however, I think the two of them can act together as an adverb and the sentence is fine, grammatically.&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;br&gt;&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/font&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: To entangle things= To complicate things?</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/EntangleThingsComplicateThings/zbqdc/post.htm#427195</link><pubDate>Thu, 04 Oct 2007 22:49:52 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:427195</guid><dc:creator>Marius Hancu</dc:creator><description>&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;table width="85%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="txt4"&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/default/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;Grammar Geek wrote:&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="quoteTable"&gt;&lt;table width="100%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td width="100%" valign="top" class="txt4"&gt;&lt;br&gt;
As we have said before, simply because it's in the dictionary, it
doesn't mean it's in common use. In the U.S., I have simply never seen
it used as defined in #3.
&lt;p&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt;Me either. &lt;br&gt;
&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;But here's another dictionary definition:&lt;br&gt;
-----&lt;br&gt;
&lt;b&gt;enÂ·tangle&lt;/b&gt; &amp;nbsp; &lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;

Function:&lt;i&gt;transitive verb&lt;br&gt;
&lt;/i&gt;&lt;br&gt;

&lt;b&gt;1 a&lt;/b&gt; &lt;b&gt;:&lt;/b&gt; to twist or interweave so as to make separation difficult &lt;b&gt;:&lt;/b&gt; make tangled and intricate &lt;b&gt;: &lt;a href="http://unabridged.merriam-webster.com/cgi-bin/unabridged?book=Third&amp;amp;va=snarl" target="_blank" title="http://unabridged.merriam-webster.com/cgi-bin/unabridged?book=Third&amp;amp;va=snarl"&gt;&lt;font size="-1"&gt;SNARL&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/b&gt;  &amp;lt;&lt;i&gt;entangle&lt;/i&gt; yarn&amp;gt; &lt;b&gt;b&lt;/b&gt; &lt;b&gt;:&lt;/b&gt; to make complicated or difficult of comprehension &lt;b&gt;: &lt;a href="http://unabridged.merriam-webster.com/cgi-bin/unabridged?book=Third&amp;amp;va=confuse" target="_blank" title="http://unabridged.merriam-webster.com/cgi-bin/unabridged?book=Third&amp;amp;va=confuse"&gt;&lt;font size="-1"&gt;CONFUSE&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/b&gt;  &amp;lt;his explanation did not so much clarify as &lt;i&gt;entangle&lt;/i&gt; the question&amp;gt;&lt;/p&gt;
&lt;p&gt;&lt;b&gt;2 a&lt;/b&gt; &lt;b&gt;:&lt;/b&gt; to involve so as to impede physical movement or make extrication difficult &lt;b&gt;: &lt;a href="http://unabridged.merriam-webster.com/cgi-bin/unabridged?book=Third&amp;amp;va=enmesh" target="_blank" title="http://unabridged.merriam-webster.com/cgi-bin/unabridged?book=Third&amp;amp;va=enmesh"&gt;&lt;font size="-1"&gt;ENMESH&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/a&gt;, &lt;a href="http://unabridged.merriam-webster.com/cgi-bin/unabridged?book=Third&amp;amp;va=ensnarl" target="_blank" title="http://unabridged.merriam-webster.com/cgi-bin/unabridged?book=Third&amp;amp;va=ensnarl"&gt;&lt;font size="-1"&gt;ENSNARL&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/b&gt;  &amp;lt;&lt;i&gt;entangle&lt;/i&gt; a bird in the coils of a net&amp;gt;  &amp;lt;&lt;i&gt;entangled &lt;/i&gt;themselves in a maze of woods and marshes&amp;gt;  &amp;lt;&lt;i&gt;entangled &lt;/i&gt;his feet in the train of her dress&amp;gt; &lt;b&gt;b&lt;/b&gt; &lt;b&gt;:&lt;/b&gt; to involve in a perplexing or troublesome situation from which escape is difficult &lt;b&gt;: &lt;a href="http://unabridged.merriam-webster.com/cgi-bin/unabridged?book=Third&amp;amp;va=entrap" target="_blank" title="http://unabridged.merriam-webster.com/cgi-bin/unabridged?book=Third&amp;amp;va=entrap"&gt;&lt;font size="-1"&gt;ENTRAP&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/b&gt;  &amp;lt;&lt;i&gt;entangling &lt;/i&gt;the country in a vicious circle of wars&amp;gt;  &amp;lt;&lt;i&gt;entangled &lt;/i&gt;himself in a ruinous litigation&amp;gt;  &amp;lt;&lt;i&gt;entangled &lt;/i&gt;his victims in a real-estate scheme that cost them dearly&amp;gt;  &amp;lt;had &lt;i&gt;entangled &lt;/i&gt;the king in a false marriage with her -- Edith Sitwell&amp;gt; &lt;b&gt;c&lt;/b&gt; &lt;b&gt;:&lt;/b&gt; to confuse mentally &lt;b&gt;: &lt;a href="http://unabridged.merriam-webster.com/cgi-bin/unabridged?book=Third&amp;amp;va=perplex" target="_blank" title="http://unabridged.merriam-webster.com/cgi-bin/unabridged?book=Third&amp;amp;va=perplex"&gt;&lt;font size="-1"&gt;PERPLEX&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/a&gt;, &lt;a href="http://unabridged.merriam-webster.com/cgi-bin/unabridged?book=Third&amp;amp;va=bewilder" target="_blank" title="http://unabridged.merriam-webster.com/cgi-bin/unabridged?book=Third&amp;amp;va=bewilder"&gt;&lt;font size="-1"&gt;BEWILDER&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/b&gt;  &amp;lt;&lt;i&gt;entangled &lt;/i&gt;his listeners in a maze of sophistries&amp;gt; &lt;b&gt;d&lt;/b&gt; &lt;i&gt;archaic&lt;/i&gt; &lt;b&gt;: &lt;a href="http://unabridged.merriam-webster.com/cgi-bin/unabridged?book=Third&amp;amp;va=encumber" target="_blank" title="http://unabridged.merriam-webster.com/cgi-bin/unabridged?book=Third&amp;amp;va=encumber"&gt;&lt;font size="-1"&gt;ENCUMBER&lt;/font&gt;&lt;/a&gt;&lt;/b&gt;  &amp;lt;died ... leaving an &lt;i&gt;entangled &lt;/i&gt;estate, due to loans and back rentals -- R.J.Porcell&amp;gt;


&lt;br&gt;
&lt;br&gt;
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&lt;/p&gt;</description></item><item><title>Re: Vocabulary questions</title><link>http://www.englishforums.com/English/VocabularyQuestions/zbrlc/post.htm#422707</link><pubDate>Sun, 23 Sep 2007 20:59:23 GMT</pubDate><guid isPermaLink="true">946f00bb-57d3-4b7b-a9a2-059b5341af52:422707</guid><dc:creator>Philip</dc:creator><description>&lt;BLOCKQUOTE&gt;&lt;table width="85%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="txt4"&gt;&lt;img src="/Themes/default/images/icon-quote.gif"&gt;&amp;nbsp;&lt;strong&gt;Doll wrote:&lt;/strong&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td class="quoteTable"&gt;&lt;table width="100%"&gt;&lt;tr&gt;&lt;td width="100%" valign="top" class="txt4"&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Hello everyone,&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;I was doing a vocabulary test and&amp;nbsp;I couldn't solve a few questions. Unfortunately,&amp;nbsp;I don't have the key. I hope you will help me.&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Thanks in advance.&lt;img src="/emoticons/emotion-1.gif" alt="Smile [:)]" /&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;Here are the questions: &lt;FONT color=#008000&gt;1- Not only did she ..... from Christianity to Islam but she also changed her name before marriage. A) go through B) go with C) go to D) go over E) go for.&amp;nbsp; &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;I looked up the meanings from dictionary but I really couldn't find something meaningful but Ä± guess it may be go through because the other prepositios doesn't sound good to my ears before &lt;EM&gt;from.&lt;/EM&gt;&lt;/FONT&gt;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#006400&gt;&lt;FONT color=#008000&gt;2-Viewers often find the paintings of the photo-Realist school &lt;U&gt;somewhat&lt;/U&gt; discon&lt;/FONT&gt;certing.&lt;/FONT&gt; In this sentence they want us to fins the synonym of the underlined word.&amp;nbsp; &lt;FONT color=#008000&gt;A) rather B) thoroughly C) very D) instrinsically &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;I think it should be A because the other ones sound funny in the context.(At least to me)&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#008000&gt;3-No other newspaper columnist has managed &lt;U&gt;as yet&lt;/U&gt; to rival Ann Lander's popularity in terms of readership&lt;/FONT&gt;. This is a find the synonym question too. &lt;FONT color=#008000&gt;A) though B) in spite of this C) even D)so far &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;I think it should be so far but&amp;nbsp;I don't understand the usage of as yet here. Is it a kind of reduction?&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp;&amp;nbsp; &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;FONT color=#008000&gt;4- A group of soldiers refused to..... the new government, thus leading to discord in the country. A) admit B)accept C) surrender D) recognise E) vizity &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;FONT color=#000000&gt;I guess it should be either accept or admit but the two words confuse me. I looked up their meanings and both of the verbs are used to explain the other one in the dictionary. However, &lt;EM&gt;accept&lt;/EM&gt; says choose me to me.&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/td&gt;&lt;/tr&gt;&lt;/table&gt;&lt;/BLOCKQUOTE&gt; &lt;STRONG&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;1. &lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/STRONG&gt;&lt;STRONG&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;I would say 'convert'.&amp;nbsp; But of the choices you give, I guess D is the best (it should be 'go over to Islam from Ch.."&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/STRONG&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;STRONG&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;2.&amp;nbsp; Your choice is correct.&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/STRONG&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;STRONG&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;3.&amp;nbsp; Again, you are correct.&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/STRONG&gt;&lt;/P&gt;
&lt;P&gt;&lt;STRONG&gt;&lt;FONT color=#0000ff&gt;4.&amp;nbsp; You're on a roll!&lt;/FONT&gt;&lt;/STRONG&gt;&lt;/P&gt;</description></item></channel></rss>