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Hi! I would need quick help for my motivation letter , I am applying for an internship! Thanks already and I appreciate your help!! Sarah Dear Dr. Smith, I am very interested in applying for an internship for spring 2009 in your department. I am a law student in my fifth semester at the...

Sarah: Please do not use the "glad", "happy" words. They are pretty weak and (in my opinion) a bit girlish. Be more emphatic and decisive. I have added a few of my reactions, comments and suggestions. If it seems a bit abrupt, please excuse - it is only to help you make a...

Ca: You need to work more on this letter. I hope my suggestions will be a good starting point for you. All the best A-Stars.

Nona The Brit wrote: Good letter. Problems highlighted for you Dear Sir or Madam, I am hereby applying for entrance for the International business administration program at the Erasmus University Rotterdam (EUR) in September 2007.In the following letter I will explain why I think...

Hola ! Let me give it a shot... See in purple below. Susanne wrote: Dear Sir or Madam, I am aiming at an international career in a multinational company, and I would be grateful for the opportunity to part i cipate in the Top Flight Entry programme offered at ***. My areas of ...

These words or phrases need correction: Madam or Sir was graduated bachelor International business the xxx University pre master’s your University interest to experiment Finland (needs a comma) I am speaking Finish a mother tongue (should be plural) I always lived (verb...