By Verbs, Paragraphs

Re: Grammar questions

. 1. (My husband Mark and I both do volunteer work) but (Ryan was only six years old) -- two independant clauses conected by the conj. but? -- Well, yes... BUT sample sentences should make some sense, Fernanda! There is no evident relationship between the two facts, so they should not even be...

Re: could someone help me this paragraph

.I have underlined some problem areas:hi everyone, can u guys please this paragraph for me? I really need to fix this paragraph to pass my engllish class. So please help me to check my grammar. Thanks in advanceIn the letter written by Ernesto Meza to city of Stockton, he tells about his concerns...

Editing of paragraph/2

I have formed a noun ,' edition',from a verb,' edit', by adding a suffix,' -ion' . In Cambridge Dictionaries Online,' -ion' is a suffix added to verbs to form nouns showing action or condition.As a result, edit + -ion = edition which means the action or condition...

Re: Please, help me (To Clive)

Hi, I * rewrote the sentence below you said it was unclear. Could you, please tell me if it's Ok now? 2.c) "This chapter besides a brief study of the prejudice with regard to homosexual in the course of the history, with approach in the equality principle, it's shown up the...

Please, help me (To Clive)

Hi Clive, I * rewrote the sentence below you said it was unclear. Could you, please tell me if it's Ok now? 2.c) "This chapter besides a brief study of the prejudice with regard to homosexual in the course of the history, with approach in the equality principle, it's shown up...

Re: how to explain the usage of the ergative verb?

Hi Goodman, I'd like to hear from experts too. In the meantime, ACTIVE VOICE my boss broke the window my boss increased my salary BOSS = AGENT PASSIVE VOICE the window was broken by my boss my salary was increased by my boss ...

Re: Help me please.

You need to fix the part in red.

Help me please.

Ok... so basically I need to do a five paragraph essay (Paragraph model?) by analyzing 3 quotes from this a passage I read "No name woman" by Maxie Hong Kingston. I'm just having trouble with a few things... some I understand, and others I don't. I tried fixing some errors that...

Re: Future tense + past tense in one paragraph

.There's no reason why several verb tenses-- if appropriate-- cannot appear in a single paragraph. However, I would revise yours to this:Hi Michael,I will explain what changes must be made to the source code and the extent of the changes. I have written them as clearly as I can , so that I...

Re: conjunctive adverbs

Conjunctive adverbs, or simply "conjuncts", do exist, and are different from sentence adverbials.These conjuncts link sentences or paragraphs and usually appear at the beginning of a sentence. The adverbials Anonymous mentioned in their first post, those that tell us something...