I don't know what you mean by 'ebb and flow', but using the word 'static' and 'opaque' to describe your efforts suggests that you are enamoured of the passive voice and the polysyllabic. Use active voice; use simpler and clearer vocabulary. Let

Can you help me to correct this essay!! especially the grammer, sentences' structure and the vocabulary. Thank you very much . Most of the people attend college or university for career preparation. Nowaday, it is a knowledge-based

Can you help me to correct this essay!! especially the grammer, sentences' structure and the vocabulary. Thank you very much Most of the people attend college or university for career preparation. Nowaday, it is a knowledge-based economy. you

Hi all, This is a part of an unfinished essay I'm writing as homework. I wish you can have a quick peek at this writing and assess it. please, I'm bad at writing and seek your help to correct mistakes of this part.

Hi guys, This is a part of unfinished essay I'm writing as homework. I wish you can have a quick peek at this writing and assess it. please, I'm bad at writing and seek your help to correct mistakes of this part. Thank

Hi Avangi, Thanks for your fine explanations to the "bail". Speaking of jargon, I'd like to ask you about "spoken", "slang", "formal" all these remarks that I've seen in dictionaries next to

Aw, thanks for telling me your story. Perhaps I should start writing essay and send it to you? :P It could help me improve my grammar! And I would like to use some vocabulary. My goal is to learn more words, and learn how to use the

Neither of these sentences is a good thesis statement for your essay. They certainly are about the points you have chosen to make your argument, but your thesis must state what conclusion you are going to draw. Also, look in a thesarus for some

Dear: Is ( the subject/theme/suject matter) the same meaning? if we use them with words essays. eg. what is the subject of the essay? is it hard. What is the theme of the essay? is it hard. what is the subject matter of the essay?

Hello, I am preparing for IELTS. This is my first try to fulfil all requirements of an essay (IELTS writing task two) . Also, I am not sure about my vocabulary and grammar. The topic is: The only way to reduce the amount of traffic in cities today